revenge with suspence....mayur ff part 4 pg 51 - Page 36

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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely update
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

GREAT PART DEAR...

AND I A, SORRY IF IT BRING YOU IN PROBLEM.
VERY VERY WONDERFUL PART
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Posted: 14 years ago
it was grt part.
awesome.
d man should b mayank.
bt m curious for sanu........how they tk revenge?
whats their plan?
waitin for nex update.
plz this time update soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Superb upd8

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Posted: 14 years ago
part 5
revenge with suspense


a man opened his eyes after six long month, his wife lina who was sitting beside her immediately went out to call dr to inform them
L: dr dr my husband alekh opened his eyes dr
DR: really???
L: yes dr
DR: thts great now must see him nurse cum with me .. ms lina u wait outside
L: alright dr

lina was really happy coz after six long months her husband opened his eyes from coma.
dr after sum while came out
DR: lina . congratez ur husband is prefectly fine by now. and after sum rest he wuld b alrite bt one prblem is that he has lost his memory and it will
take sumtyme for him to learn all past moments so dnt be sad its normal and soon he will be as he was previously


At mayanks company
nupur was sitting in her office completely lost in something suddenly there was a knock and
she came out of her thought and asked that person to cum in
N: cum in
peon: mam ap se milne koi aya hai???
N: kaun???
peon: mam koi mr ranvijay aye hue hai
N: ( in mind =- ranvijay kyu aya hai yaah kya chata hai wo ?? mjhe
samrat ko apne pas yaha bulalena chaye)
after thinking sumtyme
N: samrat ko kaho k mere room me aye and ranvijay se kaho k wit kare
Peon:
ok mam!!!!
peon went out and called samrat and samrat enters nupurs rooom
s:
bhabhhi!! ye rv kyu ayaa hua hai ?/
N: pta nhe samrat dekhte hai kya kam hai.
then nupur called her secratory to send rv in
rv: namastey nupur and namaste samrat
S: kyu aye ho tm yaha ??/ in agry tone)
rv: samrat calm down ...
N: rv kya chate ho tm ???
Rv: nupur me sirf tumhe hi chata hu
now this was enough for samrat to listen he could not controlled his anger
and grabbed his collar at once
S: kya kaam hai bol aur yaha se dafa ho ja . tjh jese logo k muh lagna nhe chata
rv: bharak kyu rhe ho me to sirf invite krne aya hu apni new company k inauguration pe ap donon zarur ayega
N: zzarur ayege rv ( in mind- ha rv hum zarur ayenge tmhari barbadi ka agaz hum apni ankhon se dkehna chaynge)
then rv left
S:samjhta kya hai ye apne ap ko...
N: samrat is waqt josh me kam karne ka nhe hosh me karne ka waqt hai ... bus kuch hi waqt hai jb hum in k khlaf apni jung ka agaz karenge . un logo se har dard har takleef ka badla lenge nhe chorenge hum unhe buhat dard dya hai humein ab aur nhe buhat dard sehen kar liya hum ne ab kuch uni jholi me naa chaye
S: ha bhabhi un ki inaugration party hi unki new company k liye ek dhamkedar party honge... dekhte hai kese sehen karte hai wo ye dhamaka . ye dard ye takleef jo aj tak hum ne ki ab wo karenge
N: ha samrat ... bus mjhe inauguration ka intezar hai .....



mayanks home

kids came back from school and without changing their uniform went to play in garden
after sumtyme gunaj show kids playing in the garden she went up to them
G: ye kya horha hai
kids who were busy in playing didnt replied her
g; mahi kulsum arjun ky horha hai ye
again she got no reply
this tymee she shouted
G: kulsum mahi aur arjun
kids at once stopped playing and said
kids:kya hua ye???
G: tum teeno abhi k abhi ghar k andar chalo . cum on b fast bacho ..
K: pljjjj mumaa tholi del khelne do na hum to
MA: yessshhhhh chachi pljjjjjjjjj

AR: ha chachi tholi del thelenge na
G: no koi nhe khelnga
kids: pljjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjj
G: ok pehle ek kaam karte hai andar chalo lunch karo kuch der rest karo shamm ko phir hum
sab mil k bahar jayenge ....
KIDS: pakkka promise
G: ha paka pakka promise now sab andar chale
kids: yeshhhhhhhhhh chalo chalo bhut ladi hai hum shab too

andd thn all kids went inside and
hadl umch and went into sleep


Back to nupurs office
uday samrat benji shukla ji and nupur were dsicussing thweir plan
B: ma ye dekhe ye exit point and ye hai entry posint.. hm ne har jaga apne admiyo ko laga dya hai us din k liye hum bilkul redy hai
N:that gud
MR bhushabn and ranvijay ab kese bacho gey tum hum sab se??????


the end
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice updt
hope nupur plan works & Rv get back what he done to nupur
waiting for next updt....cont soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice part

thanx for pm

continue very soon

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