MayUr FF: With Or Without You (Ch.11 - Pg109) Fin.

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Prachi

@preitygal99

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Posted: 15 years ago

#201

Its awesuum.

The way u describe is just marvellous.

Do continue soon.

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Archana

@a-little-hope

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Posted: 15 years ago

#202

Awesome update Akki.... I loved Shilpa Aunty's filmy drama... putting their hands on her forhead and emotionally blackmailing them.... 😆

Also loved the husband -wife convo in the bed... trespassing into private property.... 😆.... how do write this kind of stuff when you are not even married yaar....😳... simply awesome.....

Awesome update.... you are very very good writer AK... keep it up....

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abb01

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Posted: 15 years ago

#203

kya kahu aur kaise kahu?

kahna bahut kuch hai and i am like a confused person someone is asking me to find a corner in a circle 😛😛😛😛😛

I don't know ki main kabhi bhi tumhari writting style judge kar paungi ki when it was best

I am damn confused

So now apni Kursi ki Peti bandh lijiye 😉😉😉😉😉

Shilpa sharma the bestest mom ever in any soap [i have seen and loved]

She knew what can workout and she did the same ,she made them to agree her points and it is really required for those dumb [MAYUR] 😆😆😆😆

I loved the Pillow scene ,i landed safely on MAYUR land without any trouble on my runway 😉😉😉

So here the request comes , Please update soon

Lods and lods and lods [to the power n] times love

and n tends to infinity

Edited by arunabehere - 15 years ago

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The-chosen-one

@The-chosen-one

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Posted: 15 years ago

#204

resss
going to bed ryt now
will read in early morning 😊
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okay

so i finally read it

must say shilpa aunty has this in her!

chalo ekta's serial kahin to kaam aaye 😛

it was fab part.... although i have guessed a bit but i m still so curious that how will story unfolds....
i m really curious to know yaar....

post the next part soon!

and yes i m going now.... will be back at night maybe... maybe not...

catch u l8r dearie

love u...

*D*

Edited by deepikavasudeva - 15 years ago