MayUr FF: With Or Without You (Ch.11 - Pg109) Fin.

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adi_gupta

@adi_gupta

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Posted: 15 years ago

#141

akshi very well written sorry for the little comment

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daniella

@daniella05

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Posted: 15 years ago

#142

lovely update!!!
mayanks mom was amazing...loved her...
do continue soon
thanks 4 the pm

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afsha

@-afsha-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#143

Senti update

Mm was really angry on her childrens

If she wuld be ok toh she wuld hav slapped both of them😆

Its really shocking Mayur are getting seprated jus because of silly fghts😲😲

Hop they get togther soon

Liked MM's suggestion Order or watevr u say

She is jus The Best😉😆

Love her😉

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Pooja

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Posted: 15 years ago

#144

hey Akansha
i loved the storyline
sorry for th elate comment
i'll read the other parts n comment
love
pooja

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Pooja

@kweetrockstar

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Posted: 15 years ago

#145

omg
u have written part 1 so beautifully
i really loved it
so
am curious to know where does this all leads to
thanks for the pm
pooja

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Pooja

@kweetrockstar

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Posted: 15 years ago

#146

oh wow
part 2 was so cool
i really loved the overflowing emotions
awesome
i loved it
thanks for the pm
n do update soon
pooja

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The-chosen-one

@The-chosen-one

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Posted: 15 years ago

#147

ressssss

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mrs. shrma can be the most rational person on hospital bed too!

what happened btw mayur?? and why this much hatred kenda feelings?

ye kya ho raha hai? mjht mein mayur seprated. rabi-sanu's ff mein bhi sad turn and all going sad sad

yay! 3 months together. this will mark the things to happen good!

arre wah! badi research karti hai yaar! itni padhai mein karti to iit clear ho jati ( am sounding like mom??.... so wat? sahi bola 😉 )

btw.. wo allegations wala turn mast tha. shilpa aunty ko raasta mil hi jaata ahi inko ikatha karne ka!

and m glad u r doing this the ur heart's way. ab jaldi jaldi update karo... or i'll spam ur thread too! (vo tomain waise bhi karungi 😆 )

love u

*d*

p.s.- aaj p.s. hain 😉

p.s.- sorry for late reaply.

p.s.s.- u know wat nupur is not gonna be there in mjht anymore.... not even as ghost 😲 i hate CVs 😭

p.s.s.- p.s(s) khatam 😉

Edited by deepikavasudeva - 15 years ago

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Swati

@SwatiBeanyBrown

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#148

akansha...1stly,congrats 4 d starting of ur new ff!!👍🏼👏..now abt ur ff, so here we hv got yet another writer among us...truly dis forum has so many genious n talented persons...u r definitely 1 among dem..

jst completed reading both d parts..n d title page too..must say..m finding dis ff..as a hatke..a bit diffrent..😎 so m curious 2 c how dis will proceed..do continue soon..n its perfectly ok..b sappy,b coy..watever..but kp d memory of nupur alive dear..alwys!!!🤗

luv mayur always!!!🤗

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fahi

@fahi91

Sparkler

Posted: 15 years ago

#149

Hey Akansha...

great update... love Shilpa and her attempts at trying to make them work it out... hope these 3months will help matters and not make it worse... plz get them back together quickly... and update soon. 😃