'An Unknown Mistake' (Horror Mayur N Sajan FF) - Page 32

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Posted: 15 years ago
thanx for ur percious n fantastic comments guys n keep commenting sorry for the late update here comes my update in 5 mins
lots of love
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Hey guys
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which im decidecating it to sush dolly n ofcource simi
i hope u guys enjoy it
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"An Unknown mistake"

Part 3

Dr:inspector sahib yeh kya kar rahe hain aap,aap samrat ko arrest nahi kar sakte

Police inspector:aur woh kyun in ki patni aur bhabhi nah abhi abhi yeh kaha hain ki inhone nah ki jaan lena ki koshish ki hain phir

Samrat who was in full shock asked

S:aap ko kaise pata ki yeh meri biwi aur bhabhi hain

Pi:kyun ki 'kyun ki'(he gulped a bit) kyun kit um nah abhi abhi iss aurat ko bhabhi bulaya

S:toh aap ko yeh kaise pata chala ki gunjan meri patni hain

The police inspector again gulp a bit

Pl:ayye tera bahut zayada sawal ho gaye chal ab yahan sa aur tum logh mera khade khade muh kya dekh rahe ho arrest kar lo isse

He said to his junior police mens..n they arrested him

S:yeh aap thik nahi kar rahe chodo mujhe maina kisi ko marna kI koshish nahi ki chodo '..chashmish tum kuch bolti kyun nahi''. bhabhi plz uthiye nah chodo mujhe''.

He was struggling in police mens arms to get free but the mens were not giving him chance to do anything

S:chodo mujhe

Pi:ayye..chup chap mera saath chal warna

S:warna kya kar loge haan'???????

Sam said with dam anger for a min the police men got scared'.. than doc said'

Dr:samrat cool down in sa behaj kar ka koi fayada nahi main aa kar abhi tumhari bail kar walunga

Sam just nodded claming down

S:plz jaldi ana doc

Dr:ok

N than inspector took sam in jeep to police station sam just looked once at nupur n gunji n went away keeping a hope of seeing them again if life will give him a chance..!!!!

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In police station

Samrat was in jail thinking about his next step he has to get out of this prison as soon as he can because there r a lot thing which can bring his bro back as he got a hint where the house n mayank will be..!!!!!!

Just than doc came into police station n came to meet him

Sam got really happy

S:thank god doc u r here im sure meri bail ho gayi nah koi aa yakyun nahi mujhe yahansa nikalna yeh lock kholna (he asked confuse)

Dr:woh samrat tumhari bail nahi hui

Sam got shock

S:kyun nahi hui'???????

Dr:kyun ki aaj Sunday hain raat ka 12.00 baj rahe hain samrat ab tumhari bail Monday morning hi ho sakti hain

S:kya'!!!!!oh no yeh nahiho sakta

He got shock n sat down on the floor

Dr:samrat relax tum Monday morning jail sa bahar hoge I promise u

Sam was in deep thought just than he said

S:doc aap mera ekkaam karoge

Dr:ofcource bolo kya kaam hain

He said something mute n gave a map to him drawingon a paper an showed some direction'

S:aap ko yahan jana hainok aur yahan joh bhi dikhe mujhe aa kar wapis boliye

Dr:ok I will do

S:be carefull doc plz

Dr:don't worry mai apna khayal rakhunga

S:promise

Dr:promise

By saying so doc went

Sam stood there wishing that everything go well

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*flashback*

N:mayank yeh hum kahan aa gaye

M:pata nahi

N:tumhi humai yahan laye ho aur tumhain hi pata nahi

M:kya bolu ab tumhae nupur yehi ki gadi apneaap chal rahi thi (he said to himself)yeh mera dost ka ghar hain lets go inn

S:but bro yeh kitna ajeebghar dekh raha hain I think we should not enter

G:haan mujhe bhi yehi lagta hain

Just than it starts raining

N:shit ab toh humain ghar main jana hi hoga c'mon sam gharka jaaar sochainga ki kya karai lets go

S:par bha'..

Before he could say anything they went inn

Sam unwontedly followed them

In the house

It was an really good n well furniture house

N:wao kitna khubsurat ghar hain yeh but bahut ajeeb bhi tumhain nahi lagtamayank ki yeh ghar human pehla kahin dekha hain

G:haandekha hain nah

S:m:n:kahan'??????

G:filmon main aur kahan I think yeh shooting site hain

M:yeh I too think so'

N:hmm

S:ab itna kyasochna bhabhi c'mon chill

G:lets goi think upar rooms honga

S:yeh chalo'bhai right main joh bhi room hoga woh aap ka left wala hamara

M:ok lets go nupur

Sajan n mayur got apart

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Sajan

In room

They got a room correct as they claimed the stairs'.

G:wow room toh bahut khubsurat hain

S:partum jitna nahi

G:samrat tum bhi na

By saying so she just lightly hit him on his shoulder n was about to go when sam caught her hand n brought her close n said in her

S:im falling for u'!!!!!

Gunjan lookedat him in shock'sam just smiled

Gunji blushed n pushedhim n ran into wash room

S:omgosh(he ran a hand through his hair)gunjan I love u blush ur dimple ur lips everything(n he falldown on bed

Gunji blushed more in wash room n slide down to sit down on floor in washroom..!!!!

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Mayur

They were climbing the stairsn nupurwas seeing thehouse with gr8 interest

M:nupurlgta hain tumhain ghar bahut pasand aya

N:hmm

M:mujhsa bhi zyada

N;nahi bas tumsa thoda kum but mayank I think yeh ghar kuch

M:offo baskaro ghar ki batain lets go into room

He picked nupur up in his arms n took into room'

N:mayank kya kar rahe ho chodho mujhe chodo

M:par nupur

N:chodo

M:fine yeh logh

He made anger face

Just than nupurgave a peck on his check n ran into washroom

M:lov u

N:lov u too

She shouted from washroom

After some time

Nupur was drying her hair when some noises started coming

But she ignored them suddenly a noise came in her ear

NUPUR..!!!!!!!!!(that too to loudly)

She got shock n back off

She was breathing heavily no one was there she got scared

N :MAYANK'

M:kya hua nupur

He said from washroom

N:tumna mujhe bulaya kya

M:nahi kyun

N:kuch nahi

M:kya baat hain aaj kal meri awaj bhi sapnon main sunne lagi ho gr8 news

N:shut up

Nupur went out of room

N started going down the stares when she heard noises coming from a wide room she went there n opened the door

It was kitchen

Just than someone shouted

BHO..!!!!!!!

N:ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

Samrat started laughing

S:dara diya dara diya dara diya

N:shut up samrat tumna meri jaan nikal di

S:sorry bhabhi

N:tum yahan kya kar rahe ho

S:kuh khaas chij nahi bas ghar dekh raha tha

N:gunjan kahan hain

S:naha rahi hain

N:oh

Just than mayank entered

M:nupur kya hua tum chilayi kyun

N:kuch nahi bas sam nah mujhe dar diya

M:sam tub hi nah

N:accha samrat kya tumna mujhe pukara tha

S:nahi kyun

N:kuch nahi

M:woh kya hain nah samrat aa kal tumhari bhabhi ko har koi pukar un ku jaisa dekhra

S:oh bhabhi needs a doc

Sam said seriously

N:shut up sam

S:wow bhabhi bahut garam dikh rahi hain whats the matter bro kuch gadbad toh nahi hain nah I mean aap logon ki ladyi

He wisper to mayank

M:nahi aisa kuch nahi hua

N:yeh tum dono dhera dhera kya baat kar rahe ho

M:kuch khas nahi chalo room main chalet hain tumkhare pyare devar ko apni patni sa milna hain use bhi jane do

S:kya '(he glared at mayank in anger)bhai aap aisa kyun nahi keha ki aap ko bhabhi ka saath pyaarbharedo pal bitana hain

M:chup kar chalo nupur

N:hmm cha'

Before she could complete her sentence mayank picked her in his arms

S:oyye hoyye kya baat hain

N:mayank

S:lagge raho

By saying so he went to his room n mayur to their room

*flashback end*

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Next morning

Sam was sleeping in jail when suddenly a police men started hitting the jail door

Sam got up from his sleep

N opened his eyes to see the police men

P:aye jaldi uth tera joh doc friend tha uski MAUTH ho gayi hain

S:KYA'!!!

SAM WAS DAM SHOCK

S:yeh nahi ho sakta doc nahi mar sakte yeh..

P:yeh ho chukka hain samjhe aur yeh loh unki dead body ka pass yeh letter mila hain padh lo tumhare naam sa hi hain

S:par unki lash kaha mili

P:unka accident ho gaya tha jab woh yahan tumsa milna aa rahe tha

S:kya haan isse zayada mujhe kucvh nahi patayeh loh letter

By handing the letter he went off

Sam opened the letter n read

Mujhe maaf kar dena samrat main sab kuch jaan kar bhi tumhain kuch nahi bata paunga IM SORRY'!!!!!!!!par yeh keh sakta hoon ki mayank zinda hain'!!!!!

Doctor.
To samrat shergill.

S:hey bhagwan yeh kya ho gaya letter sat oh yeh pata chalta hain ki doc ko zarur kuch maloom hua tha iska matlab inki maut accident nahi balki MURDER hain yeh baat chipana ka liye ki mayank bhai kahan hain aur whoh ghar SHIT DAM IT'!!!!!!

He sat down on floor in shock with many different emotions in his heart '.!!!!!!!!

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*flashback *
Samrat enter the room to findgunji drying her hair he slowly got in n hugged her from bck while in bg this music was going on'

[...mahiyann]
vaada raha
[...mahiyann]
Vaaada raha
Doonga tujhe

Sam kissed gunji on her check n she closed her eyes in passion n sam smiled seeing that


LAge ke haseen
Sham-o-subah

Mayur enter there room while this music going on in the bg

Vaaada raha
Doonga tujhe

Mayank gave a peck on check of nupur n she just smiled


LAge ke haseen
Sham-o-subah


Vaaada raha
Lipta hua hoga tu sada

Gunji sang this ine opening her eyes

I promise
Will always love you

Nupursang this ine giving a peck on mayank check..

I promise
Will be there for you

Mayank sang this line

Mene tujh mein jahan hai paya
Tu ban ke dua hai aaya

Yunhi mujhe mein rahein saya meherban
hoo
Meri aankhon mein mera jahan hai
Tu hoke wahan bhi yahan hai

Mayank made nupur stand straight n cupped her face while singing this lines

Teri jaisa sukuoon kahan hai

Meherbaan

Rab ne barsai mujh mein saari khudaii

I promise
Will always love you

I promise
Will be there for you

samrat sang this lines when gunji made herself free n went away


Jab jab tu milta hai
Rota dil hasta hai
Mujh mein tu basta hai
Har jagah
Yeh kaisa rishta hai
Nazron se lipta hai
Tu hi tu dikhta hai
Har Jagah

Samrat went near gunji n gave a light kiss on lips n than sang this lines


Ho Rab ne basai mujhpe saari khudai

I promise
Will always love you

I promise
Will be there for you

Mayank sang this lines

Mere dil ki aankhon ke
Dadhkan ki bahon ke
Tu shamil raahon ke
Darmiyaan

Mayur n sajn did some salsa dance together while this lyrc where going on in bg'.n just than the couples came out of room dancing together n bumped into eac other n sam mayank saw each other n they sing this lines

Julta hoon to haatho ke
LAb khole tu baaton ke
Tu hi din raaton darmiyaan

Rab ne basai mujhpe saari khudai

S:I promise
Will always love you

M:I promise
Will be there for you

N sayank smiled n hugged each other seeing them gunur too smiled'!!!!!

*flash back end*

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S:bhai aap kahan ho mujhe aap ki sab sa zyada zarurat hain bhai plz aa jao nah plz main aap ko kaise dhundhu ab main yahn jail main ho bhabhi aur chashmish wahan zindagi aur maut sa lad rahe hain kya karun main ab'.?????????

Sam cupped his face n started crying

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Mumbai (India).
Scene shifted in a office

A man walking towards his cabin was shown not his face he enter in his cabin

Than he went n sat on his chair

Just than his P.A came inn n said

P.a:sir aap ka liye aap ka fianc ka phone hain woh aap ka cell try kar rahi thi but aap ka cell mil nahi raha tha

Hearing his fianc name the guy smiled

His lips were shone

Than his eyes which where smiling too

Stranger:oh lagta hain battery down ho gayi hogi mera phone ki lao do mujhe phone im sure GAURI meri bandh baja nah wali hogi

His P.A just smiled

P.a:sir aap bhi nah yeh liye phone

He took the mobile n said

Stranger:hello GAURI

N finally his face was shown

He was non other than MAYANK SHERGILL'!!!!!!!

Gauri Kapoor
Mayank's Fiance
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Note:finally I had updated im sure sab aur bhi confuse ho gaye honga iss update sa but don't worry everything will be fine but not so soon now im all ready to get some galis for this update n tomato potato eggs sab mujhe marna wale hain nah update padh ka oi baat nahi mera pyare viwers hain sab sehan kar lungi ok ok bahut nata ho gaya now plz guys let me know how many of u did not ike my update by ur comments'!!!
sorry guys i did not pm to anyone plz read by urself this time..!!!!!!!😊
N BY THE WAY GAURI INTRO WILL BE IN NEXT UPDATE...!!!

Lots of love

Sanu.

Edited by sana_sajan - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

koi kuch nahi marega

do not worry
update to bahut hi confusing and romantic thi
par ye aakhir me twsit kaise hai ?
please update soon
Edited by arunabehere - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: arunabehere

koi kuch nahi marega

do not worry
update to bahut hi confusing and romantic thi
par ye aakhir me twsit kaise hai ?
please update soon

hey very fast dear
thanx for such a sweet comment
i know im confusing u guys
but just wait till i start opening the suspense ok
lots of love
sanu
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Posted: 15 years ago
its just outstanding dear
loved it
continue soon
Edited by sanjana yadav - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Wow sana another wonderful update and don,t worry we won,,t throw any tomato aor potaotes on you😆
but seriuosly i love Both the flashbacks.to good!
And the song was lovely.
do cont soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
amazing update......dont worry i wont throw any tomatoes or anything else at u ...but why didnt u pm me.........cont soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
Oh god sana!
confusion par confusion...
This is damn interesting...
Totally different
please pm me too
and do continue soooon...........
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Posted: 15 years ago

oh wow another awesome update.Loved it.Loved both the flashbacks.The song was really nice.

continue soon.

Edited by ammykhan - 15 years ago
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it was really
suspencioiius
and romantic
and raocking

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