'An Unknown Mistake' (Horror Mayur N Sajan FF) - Page 19

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

lovely, nice update. loved it.
continue soon.
thanks for the pm dear.

Originally posted by: preety88

great update.......i want to know what happened.............love the concept it is very interesting.........cont soon

Originally posted by: Luv-a mystrey

Wow.awesum sana................
really looking forward to read this one.............

Originally posted by: tannu.smm

nice concept:)
part 1 was superb..
cont soon

Originally posted by: sana_sajan

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surely wilcontinue soon

n thanx fr commeting

lots of love

sanu

Originally posted by: SaJan_Sana4ever

hihihiihiih dear.... 😆
Soo nusi need shergill mansion blood..
Interesting Sanu...
Yeaaahh...thanxxxxxdearrrrrrrrr
Ad toh acha kiya...Leki ruladia toh bohut zyaada.. 😭awwwwwwwwww soory but concept hi aisa hain

its scary n different ff with everything😊

Originally posted by: KrazyRiya

Hey.....first of all congratulations on your new FF dear.....thank uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu



Now....

I just loved the concept dear.....its fabulous 👏 .....n very interesting too......thankuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu

this is the first time I'm gonna read a FF filled with horror n suspense.....n I'm really very excited for it !!!im glad u r liking it this much

loved the CS dear.....especially of Nupur.....😉hmm u r mayur fan right so i know u wold love her more

loved your first update dear.....thanxxxxxxxxxxx



its fabulous....awesum....superb.....brilliant.....marvellous......👏👏👏awwwwwwwwwww i will fait now reading this much praise on first update only

awww.......my gunur is in hospital... ..so sad yaar....😭😭😭hmm i know i too felt sad while writting

but i loved Samrat's entry......n the way he behaved in hospital.......aww...he's so cute....😆haina well really analysied things while he he he

the way he brought flowers for Gunur......sending the nurse out.....trying to talk to Gunur.....cursing himself for what all happened...n that too in his absence.....then breaking down...... was very fabulously described yaar......it was very touching......even i was having my tears in my eyes yaar.....😭😭hmm its really touchyyyyy

this Sammy is really very cute....very adorable....very caring yaar.....i have just fallen in love with him....😍😍😍omgg really awwwwwwwww im so happy hearing this

But where is Mayank now.....what happened to him...?? woh kaha chala gaya aur kyun ?? really want to know yaar.....well u really need pateince to know where he is how he is n where n how he had vanish

Sammy thinking about past was nice......😊thanx dear

Mayur are really adorable.....😍 ..........loved the romantic Mayank here.....😛im glad u liked it

So Sajan have an arrange marriage......n the reason was a child.....ohh poor Gunji....hmm but will soon very thing get ok but it will be quit late iknoe confuse well thats y keep waiting for my update

I felt very bad for Gunji........when Samrat behaved rudely with her on their first night.....but later when he cleared out the things.....I was really happy 😃okkkkkkkkkk

loved the breakfast scene.....it was lovely......loved SaNu......their chemistry is great....they really care for each other.....😊yup they really do but upcomming update will really scare u n sanu relation ship wil be ahem ahem😉



loved their devar-bhabhi jodi......😆hmm

but why is Sayank tensed on hearing about morena....??suspense dear

aisa kya hua tha waha pe....?? joh kabhi nahi hona chaiye tha

and I'm really confused yaar.....if Samrat really doesnt know anything......then why did Mayank said...it could break Sajan's marriage...??ahhhhhh u will get know soon

and Samrat said...'' I dont care''...... if he didnt know anything ....why did he said that...?? and is he not concerned about his marriage.....or his relationship with Gunjan...?? 😕

sorry ......i know I'm asking too many questions na.....😔

but i hope i'll get my answers in the future updates......😊

yaar....this is the first time I'm reading any FF of yours.....n I must say u r a fabulous writer......



you write very beautifully......you really rock !! ⭐️

thanx for providing us with such a long update......😊

cont. soon....

love ya...
varsha

Originally posted by: shaheen_memon

hey sana this is just fantastic dear....
really loved it....
plz update soon......

Originally posted by: fariaa70

Hi Sanuuuuuuuuuu

at first i want to congratulate u for this nice ff
it was too good dear.
Awesome
amazing
it was really very interesting and unique one.
loved it s much
awwwwwww gunur in Hospital-Oh no
and mayank uska koi pata nehi chal raha
Sana ye sab kaya ho raha hai?
Sammy was so tensed.

Loved ur flashback
it was truly awesome.
My mayur was so adorable and romantic.
haye- sana thanx a lot for romantic mayur scene
i just loved it.
loved sanur, gunur mayur ,sajan a lot.

Great update sana
update next part asap
take care