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Chapter 4 - Feelings

When he got home he couldn't stop thinking about her, all he could think of was her angelic face, her beautiful capturing eyes. He loved her innocence. By the next morning he had concluded that he does indeed love her a lot. Wow! Mujhe nahin pata tha ke ek din mein pyaar ho sakta hain. He was 99% sure she doesn't feel the same way for him, but he decided to tell her anyway, because he hates keeping stuff in. He wears a white t-shirt, showing off his perfect physique and strong muscles, and blue jeans. He left his house.

On the other hand, Nupur was also getting ready for college. She wore a dark green, full sleeved suit, because that's what she felt like wearing. She is the type of girl that doesn't care about what anybody thinks of her. She would wear her pajamas to a party if that's what she felt like wearing. Her hair was wet, and normally she would dry it, but she didn't feel like it, so she didn't. She just left it how it was.

She got out of her house and saw Mayank with her Scooty.
Mayank saw her and was again left stunned looking at her. She was looking mesmerizing in a suit and her beautiful wet hair left open.
Nupur was really happy to have her scooty back. She loved that scooty because Samrat had gifted it. She thought it would take like a week to get it fixed.

She was so happy. "Thank you so much Mayank!" she said excitedly. He loved seeing her happy like this. That's when he remembered he was supposed to tell her about his feelings. He looked at her and took a deep breath. "umm... mujhe kuch kehna tha" he said. "haan bolo" she said. "woh main kehna chahta ke... main...uh... i love-" he started off only to be cut off. "Oh my god! Hum late ho jaayenge jaldi chalo" she said looking at her watch. She started up her scooty. He stood there for a moment, then sighed and went to his car.

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Mayank's POV:

Did she have to cut me off, main kehne hi wala tha. She got on her scooty and I sat in my car. Sab kuch itni jaldi kaise hogaya? Maine kabhi sapne mein bhi nahin socha tha ke mujhe aise, itni jaldi pyaar ho jaayega. What the hell is she going to think. This is all so wierd. While I was driving I thought a lot about all this. For some time I thought about not telling her yet. But, I really hate when people keep stuff hidden, or inside themselves. I like to express my feelings, instead of suppressing them inside. I've always thought that it is best to tell people what you think of them and that's what I was going to do today.

Nupur's POV:

Was he really about to tell me that he loves me? But how can that happen...he hardly knows me. I best stay away from him, and make sure he doesn't see me. I don't want to fall into that same embarrassing position I usually end up in, when somebody tells me they love me. Good I changed the topic!

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Thinking this they both reached college. Nupur hurried to her class before Mayank could catch up to her. Mayank was the only person she knew in this class. Nupur sits beside a friendly looking tomboy type of girl. "Hey, I'm CJ" she said. Nupur smiles "I'm Nupur Shergill" Mayank comes in and sits right behind Nupur. The professor entered. Everyone settled down. The professor started is lesson. By now, Nupur's hair was dry and was in beautiful bouncy curls. For his mother, Mayank was actually taking notes. But at the same time sitting and staring and Nupur hair. Nupur could feel some ones gaze at the back of her head. Mayank was bored as no 'action' was going on. He hated when the class was silent, he liked it when paper airplanes would fly across the room when the professor looked away, or when people tossed notes to each other. He liked their to be masti in the classroom. For him that would make the classroom alive. But it was usually him who did this kind of stuff. This place is so dead right now! he thought to himself.

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There was still some time left for the class to end but he was too bored. Mayank smiled to himself and thought of irritating Nupur. He started kicking Nupur's chair. She didn't turn around thinking he might say what he was about to this morning. He continued kicking her chair and smiling. She was too irritated with him right now. "Tumhari problem kya hain" she whispered irritated but softly. He simply winked at her. She was shocked at his behaviour. she looked at him for a second, then gave him a deathly glare. 'If looks could kill...' She looked around to see if anyone saw and quickly turned around facing the front. He continued staring at her while she wrote down her notes, blowing away the hair that kept coming on her face. he rest of the class Mayank was thinking about why he fell for her, because he was the type of person who didn't believe in love a first sight. To him that actually meant that you love the way the person looks. By the end of the class he concluded Mujhe uski adaon aur harkaton se pyaar hain. He loved her actions, like the way she reacts to everything, the way she blow her hair from her forehead. The surprised look on her face when he winks at her. The way she looks around to see if anyone saw him winking at her.

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Everyone was at their second class. This time Nupur sat beside Diya, and Mayank was sitting beside Tamanna. Mayank and Tamanna were sitting in the same row as Diya and Nupur.
Mayank kept glancing at Nupur.
"Love is in the air..." said Tamanna slowly.
"Chup kar Tamanna, yehi baat main tumhare aur Sid ke bare mein bhi toh keh sakta hoon" said Mayank.
"Tu chup kar, aisa kuch nahi hain!" she said to him.
Mayank and Tamanna's friendship was a really cute one. They always fought and teased each other like this.

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Diya had noticed Mayank look at Nupur a few times and being a close friend of Mayank's could tell that he likes Nupur.
"Nupur" she said
"hmm" she said engrossed into her work.
"I think Mayank likes you" she said.
She looked at Diya for a few seconds with a kind of blank expression. She had convinced herself for a while that Mayank probably wasn't going to say that he loves her, but now Diya just burst her bubble.
She sighed and said " i don't think so" in kind of a worried tone.
Diya smiled and said "Don't worry. Main bas tumhe batana chahti hoon ke Mayank bahut acha ladka hain"
Nupur was left thinking about what Diya. She also caught Mayank glancing at her a few times.
Why does this duffer idiot have to make everything so obvious! Argh! she thought to herself.

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The day was over and Nupur was relieved Mayank didn't get to talk to her. But Mayank was determined to tell her.

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It was 9:00 and Nupur was completing her homework. She was just about to finish, when the light went. She gasped when the light all of a sudden went.
"Screw this light! Isse bhi abhi jaana tha!" she said frustrated. But she noticed that the other houses did have light. She heard some noise coming from her room balcony. She got scared and slowly walked towards the balcony. There was a man standing there. Before she could scream, the guy gripped her wrist and twirled her pinning her against the wall with his arms, and covered her mouth to stop her from screaming. He lighted his lighter, and Nupur's eyes grew wide as she saw it was Mayank but she was actually happy that it was only him. She was real scared, thinking who it could be. She was home alone because her chacha who she was staying with had gone on a long business tour. They stood there lost into each others eyes, Mayank's one hand holding Nupur's wrist, and other holding the lighter up so they can see each other. They stood there for a while in the same position. Then Nupur pulled herself away from his grip quickly.
"Tum yaha kya kar rahe ho... aur woh bhi is halat main" she said looking at him from head to toe.
He was pretty much drenched because it was raining heavily.
"aur light ko tumne kuch kiya hai na?" she asked.
He smiled.
"abh tum hi tikh karo" she said.
They both went downstairs and Mayank fixed the fuse. Nupur was really angry with him for freaking her out like this. But noticed he was wet and would get sick.
"yahin ruko" she said heading upstairs.
She came back with a towel.
"yeh lo" she said handing him the towel, "apne baal suka lo, thand lag jaayegi.
He was jumping inside seeing her care for him like this.
"mujhe baal nahin sukane aate" he said smiling cutely.
You stupid liar, he said to himself.
She also smiled. She dried his hair for him.
"Main abhi coffee lekar aati hoon" she said walking towards the kitchen. He watched her leave. She definitely did look good in traditional wear. especially today in her green suit. After a while he went to the kitchen. He quietly walked behind her and tapped her shoulder. She quickly turned around.
"Kya hua...kuch chahiye" she asked.
He just stared into her eyes and moved a step forward. She took one step back, and he stepped forward again, and she stepped back only to be stopped by the counter behind her. He moved closer staring intently into her eyes. She looked downwards and he moved closer to her. He reached towards the coffee maker and turned it off because it was made now. She didn't feel his closeness and she looked up and saw him standing a bit farther from her now. He smiled mischievously and winked at her. She looked downwards again and her cheeks had a light tint of pink, which Mayank stood admiring. Nupur poured the coffee into two cups. They drank the coffee in silence. After drinking the coffee, Nupur saw it was 10:00.

"Mayank...bahut raat ho chuki hain, tumhe jaana chahiye" she said looking down not wanting to get lost into his eyes again.
"pehle mujhe kuch kehna hain" he said.
She got up, remembering the morning's incident, "main abhi aayi" she said walking forward.
Mayank pulled her back by her dupatta and slid his hand around her waist. Her back was pressed against his chest.
Their heartbeats quickened.
"I love you" he whispered in her ear.
He loosened his grip around her. She walked forwards, but Mayank once again pulled her by her dupatta and brought her closer by her waist. Her hands automatically went to his shoulders. She slowly removed them. She was facing him now. He looked at he intently. Her cheeks were crimson red and her heart was still racing. "I wasn't done yet" he said as she looked down.
"I realised that I love you last night, and hate keeping anything in, isiliye tumhe batana chahta tha, main yeh nahin jaanta ke tum mujhse pyaar karti ho ya nahin, lekin just remember I love you" he said so easily. Nupur wondered how it can be so easy to say you love someone. She looked up to meet his eyes. They were so filled with love and affection.

She looked downwards again. He smiled mischievously and said "I know you love me".
Before she could react or say anything he kissed her cheek and qiuckly went from there leaving Nupur stunned. She touched her cheek where his lips had been seconds ago.

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I tried making it long.
That's it for today guys!
Hope you all liked it
please tell me if the pace is too fast

Guys I have made Mayank and Nupur just like me...lol I talked a bit about there personalities in the beginning, that's basically like how I am, so I'm sorry if anyone didn't like the personalities.

Please Comment!!!

I wasn't going to post this because my mood was really off, cause one of my fav FIFA players, Kaka from Brazil team got a red card
but because of all your wonderful comments, I'm posting this

Also, I made this siggie on my fav singer Diljit:

And I made a new siggie for this FF:

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Gr8 piece of work..lovd ur FF (:

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Lovelyy Part...

Gr8 Wrk...

Cont. Soon..

Thanxz For The PM 😊

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Hey
Great Update
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Awesome update!! 😃 waitin for the nxt update..pl do make it soon!!! 😊

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Hi Jassi.. it was a faulous update... ek din mein Mayank ko pyaar hogaya? And he wants to say it as soon as possible.. aachi baat hai, dil ki baat andaar nahi rakna chahiye, zubaan par lana bohot zaroori hai... and Mayank is fast. 😆 I liked the pov's and the way Mayank was trying to get her attention in class and also the way he kept staring which was irritating Nupur coz he was being so blatant. 😆 I loved the way he confessed... it was sweet, simple and the way he left after saying he knows she loves him too and kissed her.. very mischievious and naughty, i really enjoyed it 👍🏼 Can't wait to see Nupur's reaction and what happens next time they come face to face... update soon. And thanx for pm. 😃

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