MayUr FF: Rishtey Part 13 @ Page 143

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_ArTi4ever_

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Posted: 15 years ago

#91

very different as well outstanding concept..loved the 1st part way too much.dont forget to pm me dear and continues oon.

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shafia Akhtar

@IISHAFS

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Posted: 15 years ago

#92

wowow tht was soooooooo niceeeeeeeee

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fahi

@fahi91

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Posted: 15 years ago

#93

Hey Daksha...

Fab update.. was a shock seeing Mayank and Samrat talking like this but i enjoyed it and it suits their characters in this FF.

I didn't expect Suhaani to be so horrible tho.. hope Adhiraaj isn't like that too... she is in such a rush to get Nupur out of the house that she is getting her married to anyone w/o checking.

But glad the guy is Mayank and he stopped at Nupur's photo himself so it must be a good sign..

Looking forward to the update... 😃

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455394

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Posted: 15 years ago

#94

Kya mast update tha Daksha .... bole tou ek dum Raapchik.... sorry topori update ka effect ho gaya 😆

Mind blowing loved the concept eager to read the next part

do cont sooon

luv
NIdzy

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daniella

@daniella05

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#95

awesome cs and nice first part
waiting 4 ur next part
do continue soon
thanks 4 the pm

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Ally

@.PINK.

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Posted: 15 years ago

#96

hey Daksha

just love this part

do cont soon na !
-Lina-

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Alisha2887

@Alisha2887

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Posted: 15 years ago

#97

Hi Daksha. Fantastic update!! 👏👏 Loved it!!!😊

Mayank is totally different here.

Please update soon and do PM me.

Alisha xx

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Ijya

@ijya

Beginner

Posted: 15 years ago

#98

Bole toh ekdum dhaansuuu......congo on new FF and super hit concept......do PM me

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...Nikhita...

@...Nikhita...

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Posted: 15 years ago

#99

lovely update......

thansk for the pm.....do continue soon!

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Mahak

@FragranceOfLove

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Posted: 15 years ago

#100

so tune ise start bhi bhi kar diya?

yaar tu toh bahut fast hai!

but u know what? i feel so special ki main woh pehli insaan hoon jisse tune yeh concept bataya!

that's why i feel more attached to this ff!

and if u don't find my comment on t his one ever, then do pm me okay?

i loved the ch except this DD......i so hate him!

mayur toh milenge hi......aakhir ek mayurian likh rahja hai is story ko!

and a brilliant concept too!

and i loved the vm! it was such sweet one!

yaar the scenes matched the theme perfectly!

and the lyrics touched my heart!

yaar the scenes were perfect........especially that mayank fighting ones!

now i guess i need to start mine too.......varna main peeche reh jaaongi!

all the best for it!

love,
Mahak