SOMEONE-SOMETHING! AR OS!

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guys, my new ar-os- someone something...
i hope yu'l like it!

I sat in my room looking at our college pics..which took me a trip down memory lane! our love story was simple! I met her in college,last year.. the first time I saw her.. "man,she looked pretttty", I thought.. I asked my friends if they knew her or they knew someone who knew her and somehow I managed to meet her..she was jus in the opp class but strange, I never saw her! I was so excited.. and when I met her….

FLASHBACK!!

She was with her gang of friends, but she looked LOST.. I wondered why.. I jus decided to go upto her and ask her..friends?? I mentally practiced that for like a hundred times..finally I went up to her,
Me: hey..
ri: hi*in a very low voice*
me: so what happened?!
Ri: nothing*in a better voice*
me: ok..
Ri: so..what are you doing here..?
me: I was jus passing by!*i lied*
Ri: ok!
me: lets go to the canteen and talk..*I said sensing that she really wanted to talk to someone!*
ri: ok..
That was all.. and we hit it off!! We spoke for hours together, bunking all our lectures.. we spoke about everything..!we exchanged mobile numbers and started messaging.. who said bad and gloomy moods were bad?? This got riddhima and me friends!! Obv, I became good-friends with her gang..and even our gangs bcame frnds!! We hanged out a lot..! all our projects, studying for tests wud be together! It became like a daily routine now.. attend college and then canteen-talks with riddhima and then catch a bus home with her. She lived only two blocks away from my apartment.. so everyday I used to drop her home and then only go to mine.. I liked my life like this.. and obv, after a a month, I asked her out and she said yes!!


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Life went on.. there were lil fights..manaofy sessions..everything! the thing I liked the most was our msg convos! She was so random and sweet not candy sweet but sweet at heart!

(msg convos)

R:Im missing someone..

me:Who?

R:Someone?

me:But who someone..?

R:Yu kno who!

me:*ok.. I knew this guy!* college mein?

R:Yup

me:*shocked now* riddhima.. pls temme who?

R:Armaan!

Me:Yes temme

R:I told yu!

Me:*It took me a minute to register that, someone was me!* ahan!! I too miss someone!

R:Hmmm

Me:Btw, I have something for yu

R:Wat something?

Me:Something for someone!

R:Wat?

Me:Il give it 2 yu 2moro..its a surprise!

R:Ok…someone is waiting!


I liked this someone thing! From then on we always spoke in the someone context.. like 'I love someone' or 'someone is missing someone', indirectly referring each other!

Next day, evening,


Me:Hiii sup with someone?

R:Umm nthin much..yu say!

Me:Nthin gr8 with me..jus making coffee for bi..!

R:WOW! Even I want..

Me:Come home then..

R:Sure! *I knew she was joking!*


I gave my bi the coffee I made and sat down with her watching "choti bahu".. crap, I told myself… "mom aap ye sab roj kaise dekh sakte ho?" I sincerely asked her..! "sshhh.. baat mat kar..dialog chala jaayega!"..
I was waiting for riddhima's msg when the doorbell rang..

I went and opened it and to my surprise it was riddhima! I was SHOCKED! Like I never thought she'd actually come home..!

Ri:*entering in*, hi armaan!
me: *shocked,surprised* hii
ri: kya hua??
me: nthing!
Ri: armaan, coffee?!

She was mad! Totally.. she was so unpredictable and so spontaneous! but that is why I loved her!

Then I did a total sappy thing.. I made the coffee for riddhima.. and I put a ring inside it..

She was drinking the coffee and when she removed the ring out of her mouth..

Ri:*literally screaming* OMG!!!! Oh my good god!!!
me: say something?!?
Ri: tumne kuch poocha nahi!
me: uh-huh! Ok!

I really love someone very much… she makes me perfect..
So my dear someone, will you spend the rest of your life with me?

Ri: i love someone too and yes I will spend rest of my life with someone!

I was shcked to see bi in my room.

Bi: arre wah! Amy .. *she teased me*
me: biii.. bas karo!

Bi left then..

Ri: *she held the ring in her hand* I like something and I love someone!
me: I hav something more for yu!
Ri: what?
me:*I took out a rose*here.. a rose for a rose!
Ri: thanku..
And she gave me a peck on my cheek
me: thanku…
and we sat holding hands and looking into each-others eyes!


EPILOGUE!!

After an year and a half, we got married..! we were at goa obv on our honeymoon! There was a couples game organized by the resort ppl by the beach in the evening.. so all of us sat by the beach, under the starry sky, our sweet-hearts next to us, holding hands and the cool breeze blowing past our faces – awesome was the only word which cud describe this feeling!
"all yu beautiful ppl here, lets play a game! Yu guys have to describe ur husband in one word.. just a single word!!" the person conducting the games, raj announced!

Raj: ummm…lets start with ayesha.. boliye ayesha..! describe veer in a word!
ayesha: ummm…. caring!*she blushed*
veer: ohh ho!!
Raj: great..! lets move on to …
Most of the wives said caring, loving, handsome n the other adjectives!

Next was riddhima's turn! I wondered wat she'd say!
Raj: ridhima, its ur turn! Describe armaan in one word..!
Ridhima: MINE!

I fell in love wid her all over again!! I was so happy.. I was like on cloud nine… everyone clapped for us as I gave her a small peck on her lips and she blushed! My heart nearly stopped beating.. she looked that beautiful..

The games had ended.. all the others had gone back to the respective rooms.. we were about to go wen riddhima gestured me to stay back!

Me: ridhima, kya hua?
Ri: lets lay down here for a while! Yu always wanted to do this na?
Me: ya bt yu remembered!
Ri: hume aapki ek ek baat yaad hai janab!
Me: ahan!
Ri *blushed*
Me: oyee hoyye *armaan's style*

On an impulse, I just kissed riddhima.. I don't kno why but I felt the need to do so!! She loved me so much.. I had no idea.. she responded back with equal passion and fervor, jus deepening the kiss..

Me: riddhima, I love yu so very much!!
Ri: me too!


Ridhima's pov
Jus then armaan knelt down and asked me for a dance!! I was more than happy to say yes!

Nd then he sang,

Like a dream you can't explain love can chase a beating of your heart
Like the sunshining in the rain love can make your whole world fall apart
All i wanted now
I just wanna spend my life with you
Time will show me how
Suddenly everything has turned me inside out
Suddenly love is the thing that I can't live without
i jus wanna spend my life with you

I was touched.. tears started falling from my eyes! I joined him nd we sang nd danced together as if there were no tomorrow!..

You are my dream my love my life
I just wanna spend my life with you
You are the one that makes me smile
I just wanna spend my life with you

God I love somehow... I just wanna spend my life with you
You can show me how
Suddenly everything has turned me inside out
Suddenly love is the thing that i can't live without

You are my dream my love my life
I just wanna spend my life with you
You are the one that makes me smile
I just wanna spend my life with you

What have you done to me?
Is this how its meant to be

Can't control this feeling in my heart
I can see better days glowing inside your eyes
And I know you feel it in your heart

All I wanted now
I just wanna spend my life with you
Time will show me how
Suddenly everything has turned me inside out
Suddenly loves the thing that i can't live without

You are my dream my love my life
I just wanna spend my life with you
You are the one that makes me smile
I just wanna spend my life with you

Love is a crazy thing
Its like when you wanna sing
And the words are deep inside your soul
When somebody comes along together you sing a song
You just let the music take control

And i wanted now
i just wanna spend my life with you
Time will show me how
Suddenly everything has turned me inside out
turned me inside out
Suddenly loves the thing that i can't live without

You are my dream my love my life
I just wanna spend my life with you
You are the one that makes me smile
I just wanna spend my life with you


Together we celebrated the first day of our honeymoon on the beach! He loved me, I loved him! That was all required! Nothing else mattered..

if yu like it pls comment or atleast hit the like tab!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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INSPIRATIONS:
all my readers of "A date with my husband" ,

madhsar, shonagudia, VampirePrincess, scorpio95, vruls, ambryn, -ARLover-, sasya, SuJaTa790, namita18, maggie131984, pinkss, sammy4u, naureen_aly, Iqbal Neha1, frnd.of.frndz, mansibharti, luvkaranmadly, crazy_4_karan, AbhiNikiLuver, bhavana92, ishwariya, dhruvikaluvsKSG, SaJan_Sana4ever, A-N-S-H-I-K-A, Prinnia, karansprincess, -_AfridiMalik_-,

and chicken soup for the indian romantic soul!

CREDITS:
chicken soup for the indian romantic soul!!

the "MINE" thing was frm this book.. i wanted to include it here cos i thot it fits so perfectly!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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great OS dear loved it a lot
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Posted: 15 years ago
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SUPURB ONESHOT
loved it
thanks for the PM

love
prinz

Edited by Prinnia - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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I loved someone for writing something..........
Loved it....
Take care......
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey dear!
WOW!
Loved it!😳
Even i like the something someone convo's..something new!
also the proposal was unexpected i mean the ring in the coffe...it was nice😊The MINE scene...well i didnt read the book but i will give the credit to u for bringing it till us!
Its a very nice one!
I enjoyed reading this one...for a moment i thought wen the epilogue started...i thought u r gonna make it a sad ending..but the moment the game started that feeling was gone.😳
Now pluks m gonn ask u a favour!
pleeeasee preety please can u write a SAJAN OS??
You write so beautifully that now i want to see the magic u will spread around with SAJAN as ur characters....also i love reading SAJAN more than AR actually😊
lots of luv
ZeeJay!
Edited by VampirePrincess - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesomeeeee yaar..
Loved it...
Can you make SaJan OS?
Would love it then....
Thnnxx For PM....
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awwwwww...its was really cute...love it totally
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesome OS... Loved it.... Do write more...
thnx for the PM
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Posted: 15 years ago
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just loved it....awesome.....very cute...!!!! <3

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