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Hey I am again back with an update and a big one too 😊
I hope you all like it.......
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PART 3
Bangalore
"Ridz..Riiidz..Where are you? Ridzyyy...Oh God!!! Where the hell is this girl? Don't know what's wrong with her. She has been so lost and aloof ever since she has got back from Mumbai..wonder if something happened there. I really hope she is happy about this marriage and has not agreed for it under any pressure. But what could be the pressure?? Mum dad just suggested for this rishta, never did they force he into agreeing. But they did look really keen for it to happen and my little innocent sister can never so NO to mum dad. Is this why she agreed or is really happy about it all??? Hmmmm..kuch to gadbad hai..Pata lagana padega"
Anjali searched the entire house for Riddhima muttering to herself, trying every permutation and combination to find out the reason behind Riddhima's aloofness.

Anjali is 6 years elder to Riddhima. She is married to Atul Joshi, a software engineer in Bangalore. They have been married since last 5 years and are blessed with a beautiful 4 years old baby girl named Prachi. They had fallen in love at the very first sight. Atul is a very balanced person with his head screwed on tight. Both Anjali and Atul love Riddhima like their own kid. They don't consider a difference between Riddhima and Prachi. But Riddhima's nature to take all the problems and blames on her head has made Anjali protective about her. One thing that Anjali can't stand is her little sister getting hurt. She loves her way too much.

Riddhima has always shared her problems with Anjali no matter how trivial they are. And that's what is disturbing Anjali all the more. Her little sister, who used to run to her even if her doll used to break, is just not the same. Anjali is getting convinced that there is definitely something that has been bothering Riddhima but she is holding back for some reason. She has to get to the core of it now and the beginning would be Mumbai as she is pretty sure that Mumbai has something to do with Riddhima's current behavior. With a determined look on her face she turned towards backyard, the last destination of her search for Riddhima. And BINGO !!!!! There she is, sitting on the swing and lost in her own thought just like she has been since last two weeks.
"Abhi tak to shaadi bhi nahi hui aur abhi se hi apne hone wale pati ke khayalon mein itni khoi hui hai ki meri aawaz bhi sunai nahi de rahi" Anjali faked a hurt look on her face and burst out laughing a few seconds later. Riddhima just gave a sad smile and resumed her thinking mode, acutely aware of Anjali's gaze on her. "Why can't you smile for a change??? Try karke dekh, it's not that tough". Riddhima's eyes shot up to look at Anjali as she remembered saying the same line to Armaan on the day when they actually became friends.
Riddhima tried hard to control the tears welling up in her eyes but Anjali was quick to notice every little change on her face. This strengthen her belief that Riddhima is definitely hiding something but kept mum as she knew this was not the right time. She has to get to the bottom of this before confronting Riddhima. Somewhere she was hurt thinking that for the very first time her little sister is not confiding in her. While on the other side Riddhima was also feeling guilty for not entrusting her sister with her problems but she didn't know whether Anjali knew the truth about her adoption or not and if she doesn't then how will she react after learning the truth. Not that she ever doubted her sister's love but she hasn't reconciled with the truth herself. She knows that even if Anjali got to know about her adoption, she will love her just as much but she didn't want to put her sister to the emotional turmoil that she is going through.
Things were much better until the truth was revealed to her. She wishes she hadn't toppled over the adoption deed when she visited her parents on her trip to Delhi for a conference. The same evening her parents proposed her to get married to Siddhant and herself being in such emotionally disturbed state she said yes without giving it much thought as she didn't want to take away her parents happiness after all what they have done for her.
Everything in her life changed after that fateful day. She came back to Mumbai the next morning and resigned from Creative advertising the very same day. Not to give Armaan the chance to meet her, she immediately wrote that letter to him and left it at his place. The only person she confided in was Muskaan as she couldn't hold on to her emotions for any longer and broke down as soon as she saw her. Muskaan tried to explain her that what she is doing is not right and she should talk to her parents. But Riddhima had made up her mind till then and took a promise from Muskaan to not tell anybody the truth about her and also the fact that her parents have completed all the formalities to shift to Bangalore and will be moving out of their Delhi home the same evening.
After packing all her stuff she flew to Bangalore as per decided between her and her parents since Siddhant and his family are also from the same place and it would easier to hold ceremonies for the wedding. Now, sitting here all she can think is that she is headed up a road where there would be nothing but despair and heartache by a shattered dream.

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"Be ready by 10, will pick you up from your place" Riddhima smile on reading the message. "Don't know what he is upto now" she muttered to herself sleepily. She always wondered how much he has changed in last 1 year. Gone were the angry you man expressions. One would always find him smiling now, showing off the cutest dimples she had ever seen. He would pamper her like a princess and take care of her like a baby. She felt on top of the world when he showers her with love. Sometimes she asks herself "Is he the same Armaan I knew about a year ago?" Smiling at her thoughts, she looked at the watch with crooked eyes and jumped out of bed in a split second. It was 9.30 already and Armaan would be outside her building sharp at 10 and would deafen the entire building with continues honking.
She rushed to take a shower and came out of washroom after 25 minutes completely dresses. But as soon as she came out, a hand covered her mouth from behind and she was pinned to wall. Scared out of her wits, she closed her eyes tightly but relaxed the next moment when the other person kissed her forehead. She opened her eyes to find Armaan looking at her with all the love in his eyes. "You look beautiful" he whispered near her lips. Riddhima blushed and looked down as she couldn't hold his passionate gaze.
The next moment everything went blur and she found herself clinging to Armaan for support. He kissed her with fervor and the intensity rose when he found her reciprocating the kiss with equal passion. He held her from her waist to support her and she ruffled his hair with one hand and pulled him closer with the other. They broke the kiss when they both couldn't hold on to their breaths for any longer. Both were left breathless. They joined their foreheads and closed their eyes to savor the beautiful moment they just shared.
But Armaan was shocked as Riddhima pushed him away after a few minutes "You scared the shit out of me. Don't you dare do that ever again. And what the hell are you doing here. Heck, how did you get in?" she shouted at him angrily for scaring her a while ago. He suddenly pulled her closer to stop her complaints and it did, just as he had expected. He gave her his characteristic smile and she got really confused but got suspicious the next moment thinking he is definitely upto to something. But before she could say anything, Armaan said "stop racking that tiny brain of your Riddhima and pack your clothes for 2 days."
Riddhima was completely lost as to what he is saying. Pack your clothes????She didn't understand and gave him a blank look. "Oh god!!! How much do you think Riddhima? Pehle hi chota sa dimag hai tumahare pass, itna sochogi to khatam ho jaega." He said cheekily and got his punishment as soon as he uttered those words. Riddhima punched him hard on his arm and pushed him away. He fell on bed laughing his head off seeing her angry face. He stopped after sometime on noticing her irritated look. "Ok baba sorry, I was just kidding. But seriously pack your stuff for two days and please hurry up. We are late already". Curiosity got the better of her and she asked curiously "are we going on holiday?" Armaan smiled looking at her childlike curious face on learning about a holiday. Kissing her cheek he said "Yes princess. We are going on a holiday. Just you and me". Riddhima squealed in delighted and hugged him tightly "kaha ja rahe hai hum Armaan batao na". Armaan laughed seeing her how easy it is to make her happy and how even smallest of things can get her all excited and hyper.
Well, this what he loved about her the most. Her bubbly and full of life attitude was what had attracted him to her in the first place. "Armaan!!! Batao na please. I really want to know. Please batao na" she shook him when she noticed him gazing at her with lost expression. "That's a surprise. Now would please mind packing up fast or you plan to stay in the same clothes for next two day?? Not that I mind but you stink pretty much waise hi so if you wouldn't take a shower for two days, I am sure to faint due to lack of fresh oxygen." Saying this he made a run for his life as he was sure Riddhima would kill him if he stays infront of her for a moment longer. "You jerk, you moron, you chipmunk. I am not going to leave you. How dare you say that? ARMAAN MALLIK YOU ARE DEAD" she ran after him calling him names until he ran out of the apartment asking her to come down soon.

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"I am sorry yaar. I swear I was just kidding. Please baat karo na". Armaan pleaded to get her to talk to him. It's been an hour almost since they left Riddhima's apartment but she wasn't talking to him. Hell! She wasn't even looking at him and he was trying his best to cajole her in everyway possible but nothing seems to be working this time.

While on other hand, Riddhima was enjoying every bit of the attention she was getting. She wasn't angry in the least. She knew he was just joking but she loved it when he manofy her. Armaan was getting restless by the minute and just wanted her to speak to him. Suddenly a plan struck Armaan's mind and he gave a naughty smile to himself. He slowed down the car and suddenly and stopped it at the side of the road. Riddhima turned towards him and looked at him questioningly but he didn't say anything and just kept looking ahead.
After a couple of minutes Riddhima asked "why have you stopped the car? Don't tell me that we are going to spend two days sitting in a car parked at the side of a highway" Armaan patted himself mentally. He knew how eager she would be reach where they were going and that's exactly why he stopped the car. "Until and unless you talk to me, I won't drive further" "Stop behaving like a child Armaan and drive" she saw her plan to trouble him failing plus she really wanted to know where they were headed. So if Armaan wouldn't drive they are sure to reach late.
She felt helpless and thought to give in. All this while Armaan was observing her expressions and knew what she was thinking. He was sure he had won this round and was counting back from 5. And as soon as he reached 1, she spoke "Ok fine I am talking to you and am not angry. Happy now??" He giggled and hugged her looking at her cute face. She knew he knew what she was thinking and smiled at his antics to get her to speak to him again. Finally Armaan resumed their journey happily with both of them again bantering and pulling each other's leg.

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Please comments or criticize. Its really valuable.
Lots of Love,
Chahat
Edited by chahat_j - 15 years ago
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hey nice update like always..really well done....aww AR are so cute...armaan is so smart...he knew how to make her talk to him..lol..good job ammy...cant wait to read more..i really hope ridz dont get marride to someonelse other than armaan....cant see them apart...update soon and thankx 4 the pm..
❤️MONA
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: .:.MONA.:.

hey nice update like always..really well done....aww AR are so cute...armaan is so smart...he knew how to make her talk to him..lol..good job ammy...cant wait to read more..i really hope ridz dont get marride to someonelse other than armaan....cant see them apart...update soon and thankx 4 the pm..

❤️MONA

thanks darling....and yeah Armaan has his own ways to get things done around Riddhima 😉
he is way too cute......
and about Riddhima's marriage, you will have wait for a couple of parts to know everything. I will try to update tomorrow so you wont have to wait for long 😉
Love,
Chahat
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Heey Chahat = )...I just caught up with your ff..i love it...loved all the 3 parts...the story is really nice...i hope Armaan reaches bangalore really fast:D..and i love the way you write..do add me to your pm list ! =)..looking forward to the next part:D
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amazing parts
AR scenes were beautifully potrayed
cant wait till they meet each other again.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesoem part
love armaan and his naughtyness
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Great parts!!!!!!!
Par........KOI RIDDHIMA GUPTA KO SADBUDDHI DO!!!!!!
[don't mind the caps it is the frustration I'm penting up after seeing the latest promo and I want to kill both Riddhima and Sid.SR fans don't mind]
Is FF mein bhi why does she think she is indebted to the Guptas?Riddhima kahinki bhi ho yahi sochti hai.Even in actual DMG before our Armaan knocked some sense into her.
oopsss!!!!!Poori frustration aapke FF mein nikal li SORRY!
Par sachmein they were great!!!!!!
Thank God yahan par to atleast Anjali saw something 😆
And Armaan wow!!!!! He surely has his own ways of manofying Riddhima 😆
Thanks for the PMs....
N haan even I don't watch CN my friends call me Tweety n I used to love her a lot when I was a kid apart from my all time fav Tom & Jerry 😃
Take care.........
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Hi dear...

wooowww wat a story...

amazing...i just loved it...

plzzz do continue....

n plzzz add me to ur pm list.....

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey Guys, Thank you so much for your overwhelming comments. I am glad you all like my story. HopeI won't disappoint you in this part as well.



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PART 4


"Tumne pehle kyu nahi bataya hum Khandala ja rahe hai and why Khandala by the way" asked a confused Riddhima as still remember an incident when all their friends were planning a road trip to the same place and how Armaan chickened out giving a lame reason and Rahul unintentionally blurted out "Armaan still hadn't overcome that incident" but suddenly diverted the topic and dropped the plan and decided to chill at Armaan's place.



She was sure there was more to the story but didn't probe Armaan as she thought if there is something consequential then he will tell her in his own time. But now this sudden trip to Khandala was really confusing her. He looked at her with a very different emotion in his eyes which she couldn't understand at all. She didn't probe further when he didn't reply.



Soon they were entering a very beautiful farm house which was slightly secluded from all others. Finally they got off the car and Riddhima was left mesmerized to see the scene infront of her. It has to be the best place she had ever seen on earth. Ahuge garden was surrounding the concrete house from all the sides with colorful flowers spread all over the garden. There was a small fountain in the centre of the garden with a swing next to it. The smell of the place was so exotic that she felt she could spend her entire life there.



She excitedly turned towards Armaan but stopped short to see tears in his eyes. Riddhima was shocked beyond wits to see her Armaan in such a state. She immediately went and hugged him without saying anything. She didn't know what exactly has happened so as to make him cry but she knew he needed her right now. He didn't have words to express his gratitude towards her so he hugged her back tightly and hid his face in the curve of her neck. She could feel him sobbing softly and was really worried for him.



After some time, when he was feeling better, he parted and looked at her. She gave him a small smile and without asking anything said "lets go inside". Armaan was touched by her gesture to not probe him when she felt he needs time. She almost dragged him inside and was again left spellbound to see such a beautiful house. It was nothing big or luxurious. It was an average size house but the simplicity with which it was decorated and maintained was what Riddhima liked the most.



Suddenly she stopped when she felt a tug at her hand and turned to see Armaan looking at her with so much love in his eyes. He came closer and kissed her forehead saying "you are the most amazing woman I have ever known. I LOVE YOU" Riddhima was surprised as well as touched hearing the words. It's not that she hadn't heard these words from him before but the sincerity and spontaneity with which he said it now touched her. "I LOVE YOU TOO ARMAAN" she replied smilingly.



"This house belongs to my mom dad" she was literally shocked to hear that from him. She knew how much he loved his parents and how much emotional he gets on the mere mention of them. Suddenly everything fell in place, the way he looked at her when she asked him about this sudden trip to Khandala, his aloof behavior ever since then and finally the way he broke down a couple of minutes ago. She understood how difficult it would be for him and held his hand tightly to give him some strength. He smiled at her gesture and continued "this was their vacation house. They used to come here whenever they felt that they had got too busy in the day to day life and were not able give each other the time thatthey should. They used to come here and spend 2-3 days, away from everything and everyone. They called it Paradise. I haven't been here ever since their dea....". He choked on his word and couldn't continue further.



Riddhima understood what he must be going through and hugged him. He hugged her back but didn't cry this time as he remembered the promise he had made with himself to never cry in his parent's memories but remember them with a smile. She wanted to ask him why had he brought her here but knew it's not the right now. Whereas Armaan answered her question the next moment "I wanted to bring you here since this is going to our PARADISE too now".



She suddenly moved back and looked at him with a blank expression as the meaning of his words dawned upon her. He smiled and kneeled down infront of her. Pulling out a ring he said "Would you mind changing your last name to Mallik from Gupta?" She laughed out aloud at his way of proposing. Instead of asking her directly to marry him, he is coming up with cheesy lines like this. "Hmmmmm.....not that I don't like my current last name but the offer is too lucrative to pass. A handsome hunk like you with just a change in my last name. I think I wouldn't mind the change then".



Armaan was surprised with her quick come back but didn't stretch the conversation further. He laughed and slipped the ring in her finger and kissed her hand. She blushed and looked down. He got up from his kneeling position and lifted her face with his finger under her chin. He came forward and softly kissed on her lips to seal their commitment. It was nothing passionate but a soft kiss full of promises. "I love you to be Mrs. Riddhima Armaan Mallik" he whispered against her lips before parting. She was so over whelmed on hearing this that she hugged him without uttering a word. And Armaan needed no words, her gesture said it all.



He was planning to propose to her since quite sometime now but wanted to make it special for both of them. And finally this idea struck him last night "what better place to propose to her than Paradise" and here they are now.


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"Armaan lets go. We have claimed the baggage" Rahul shook at him to bring him out of his lost state. Armaan came out of the flashback of the most beautiful day of his life. But it pained him big time when he realized that Riddhima has agreed to marry someone else. He still carries the ring in his pocket after she had left it at his place along with the letter. With a thumping heart, he moved towards the exit gate to get some answers from the woman he has loved with all his heart.



He was confused whether to hold it all against her or to understand her situation and the kind of mental state she would be in to take such a step. He wanted to hate her. He tried to hate her when he saw the ring. He tried to hate her when he learnt about her departure. He tried, he really did. But everytime he tried, her beautiful face, her twinkling eyes, her childish smile, everything, just everything flashed infront of his eyes and he couldn't help falling in love with her all over again.


"Anjali is coming to pick us up. I didn't tell her anything about you and she thinks I am coming here alone so as to help her and her family for Riddhima's wed....." Muskaan left it at that and couldn't bring herself to complete her sentence looking at Armaan's expression. He closed his eyes to compose himself as he knew it's not the right time and asked "Does she know about Riddhima's adoption??" "I don't know but hope she does. I mean she was 7 when Riddhima was adopted, old enough to understand the happenings of the surroundings but what if she doesn't??" Muskaan looked at him with a troubled expression to find the same on his face. "I think we need to find that out first before telling Anjali everything" interjected Rahul looking at their expressions.


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<i>"MUSKI MASIIII" Prachi ran to Muskaan and jumped on her as soon as she spotted her among the passengers coming out of the arrival terminal. Muskaan hugged her tightly and planted kisses all over her face. Prachi giggled and gave back the same amount of kisses to her. Riddhima, Muskaan and Prachi were always a team in all their pranks and mischief. Whenever Anjali visited Delhi or Riddhima or Muskaan visited Bangalore, all three of them used to have a blast together. Riddhima and Muskaan always becomes a child themselves with Prachi.

"I missed you sooooo much. Why didn't you come to see me before?" asked Prachi. "I am sorry baby, was just busy with a lot of work but now that I am here, we will enjoy a lot and will play a lot of pranks of everybody. What say partner??" Muskaan and Prachi giggled and hi5ed each other. But soon the happiness from Prachi's face shrunk and she said "You know Ridzy massi is also here but she doesn't play with me anymore. Bas apne room mein chup chap baithi rehti hain aur maine unhe rote hue bhi dekha hai."



Armaan's heart beat grew fast as soon as he heard Riddhima's name but after hearing the rest, his heart pained like never before. One thing that he can't see is "tears" in his princess's eyes. All he wanted to do right now is to run to Riddhima and take her in his arms to release all her pain and suffering but alas it would have to wait. He needs to know how much Anjali knows before he spills the beans infront of her. Initially when Muskaan suggested that he should tell everything to Anjali as only she can help them, he was very apprehensive since he has never spoken to her before. He had heard of her and their bond through Riddhima but never had interacted with any of her family members. But then when he realized that there is no other way to get back Riddhima, he reconciled with the idea to tell Anjali everything.


All this Anjali was standing and observing Muskaan's and Prachi's interaction and the other two unknown men who seem to have accompanied Muskaan. But what caught her attention were the expressions on one of the guys face (Armaan's face) when Prachi mentioned Riddhima's name. Anjali's sharp mind started working overtime but she knew she would have to wait to get her answers.



So she spoke aloud "if you guys are done with your reunion then I am also here and if I am not wrong there is some introduction that is still to be done" "OOPS!!! Sorry di, how are you? How's Atul jij? Everything good?" Muskaan said while hugging Anjali. She smiled and hugged her back "Atleast you remembered me. I thought you have forgotten me after shifting to Mumbai. I have seriously started doubting that there is definitely something's wrong with the air of Mumbai. Pehle Ridz aur ab tu. Anyways I am glad you are here. Only you can handle your friend since she has sworn not to listen to me. Pata nahi kya ho gaya hai use." Anjali said everything about Riddhima deliberately to see what she is thinking is right or not. And she patted herself mentally after seeing Armaan's expressions.



"Anyways chod ye sab. Ghar jake aaram se discuss karenge is bare mein. But I think the introduction is still impending" "Oh!!!! I am sorry. Guys, this Anjali di, Riddhima's elder sister and her beautiful daughter Prachi and Di, this is Rahul and Armaan. We all work together for Armaan at Creative Advertising" Muskaan introduced all of them. "Nice to meet you both. Are you guys here for some business trip or for Riddhima's wedding?" Anjali poked further. Rahul answered first before Armaan could even react "Nice to meet you too. And we are here for some personal work. Muskaan was flying today so thought we all would travel together" Anjali smiled at Rahul and Armaan turned towards Muskaan. "Now would mind making a move ya yahi rehne ka irada hai".


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Phew!!!!



Please leave you valuable comments.

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Lots of Love,

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Edited by chahat_j - 15 years ago
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PM milne se pehle hi reserve kar diya 2nd time I don't believe it 😆
lekin me first me first 🥳 😆😆😆
The part was awesome di[hope I can call you that]
n I loved Armaan's cheesy way of proposing and Riddhima's answer to it....
Anjali ka dimag sahi jagah daud raha hai..jaldi uski manzil tak pahunch jaye..
Loved the part....
Take care....
Edited by Sweet_Ashum - 15 years ago

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