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part 1 and 2 are soooooooooo funny plzz add me to your pm list
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update the next part soon
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hello friends .....thx for your response i want to thank you all by replaying your comment but i am too busy and i can't do this i have exam on 16 so too busy but ya i have a short update for you....... i don't know whether you like this or not but i try my best to write it .... may be it can make you to laugh ............. thx everybody for your lovley comment thaks to every silent reader................. well the next part i will be update on 1 june and may be that time two parts so wait for the next update and enjoy this update ok
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my dear friend faria and tapoor i ahve one good news for you and i need some time to tell you just wait for this news ok....my sweet sister...............and i miss you everybody ok
tapoor fariaa and everybody no more trouble with my message
here is the update
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part 3

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everybody was ready to go hospital...........they reached there doctor was exmaine somebody else...... so they have to wait.......maynk and benji sammy all are waiting impatiently for there turn but they forget for the reason why they come here........ya they forgot nups was missing........

when there turn come they saw the seat besides them she was no where...

be- arre nupur kaha gayi..............

sam- omg yaar where she gone pata nahi usse is hospital or is city ke barre mein kuch pata bhi hai kya nahi.....................

they were hell worried for her and searching for

her............

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and here she was playing with a doll.....
there was some other lady .........

nu to the girl next her- tum apni ye doll muje dogi kya.......

girl- nahi ye meri hai mein nahi dongi...............

nu-plz muje de do na mere pass aise doll nahi hai....

gi- mine kaha na nahi dongi..............and saying thsi the girl push nupur........and she fall from her seat......and hurt her head...........and she started crying..............


nup was crying loudly .................😭

maynk and sammy hear her crying and run and found her head was bleading...............

they run.................

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sam- what happen nupur why are you crying my sweet sis...............

nu- isne muje marra or muje apni doll bhi nahi di........

be- how dare she touch our sister........he come forword to shout at the girl.........but maynk hold his hand...........😡

may- benji leave her she is child................

be- maynk how she hit her ...see it's bleeding........

sam- tumhe doll chayia na hum abhi purchase kartien hai first hum doc. uncle se medicine lenge......ok

nup- no i am not going ..i hate doc. vo bahut gande hote hai....or injection bhi laga dete hai muje nahi jana.............or unme se gandi si smell aati hai chii

may- no nup you have to go plz...........

nup- nahi nahi nahi ........mein nahi jangoi.........mein yahaa se nahi hilne wali............saying this nups sit on the floor...........

may- dekta hoon kassie nahi chalti.............

maynk saying this lift her in his arms...........she was struggling for leaving but vain...............


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sam hold nups hand and benji legs.........it was very difficult to control nupur................

doc tell her to breath.........but she was impossible.......she burped...............no act her which was not embarrese maynk and samdoc tell them to do an x.ray of nupur........

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after struggling for two hours atleast they done with
the x.rays and left the hospital..............

nup- muje doll chayia............muje doll chayia............

may- ha we are going to mall to purchase this ok......

and they drove to a mall...........


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after reaching there maynk park the car he signal benji to hold nups hand............

benji hold nups hand ...but poor benji he forget public place sometime dangerous......

nu- mera haath chodo .........

be- nahi chodga ............

nu- chodo varna mein chillaogi.......

be- chalo chup karo muje pata hai tumhe doll chayia na ab chup karo..............

nu- nahi chodo mera haath.............benji was not leaving her hand.............
she started crying loudly.........maynk and sam was
coming but poor benji ................people thought he was trying to misbehave with the girl and poor benji yaar de dena den............after a little pitai maynk and sam saw benji was hitting the ground and nupur was again missing.......they have to take care of benji and nupur tooo.........

sam and maynk both pick benji and make him sit in the car.........poor benji...........

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sam was laughing..................😆

sam- yaar aaj pehle baar poor benji yaar is ko bina kissi galti ki pitati dekh hai..............😆

be- just shut up both of you aaj to mein nupur ko nahi chodne wala.........aaj uski wajah se meri ye halat hue hai.........yaar aaj first time bina kissi ladki ko cheda bina hi mein pit gaya ............or ab to mein usse bilkul bhi nahi chodne wala.............😡

sam- pehle usse pakad en ki condition mein ho ja....acha ab mein maynk ki help karne ja raha hoon kahin vo bhi teri tarah pit na jaye..........😆

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maynk was searching for nupur in the mall.........

sam - maynk milli kya............

may- nahi milli.......................

they both searching in different shopes of mall..............

here nupur was in toys section she was searching for the doll.......................
searching the doll she did not realize when her
duppta slipped from her neck and showing his neck ...and chest............a boy was looking her with hungry eyes she did not realize this....he was slowly approaching her.....
here maynk and sammy both think that she must be
in game section............

they both reached there and saw she was there.......they both run to her befor the boy approach her......and saw her duppta was on the floor ....they both covered her with her duppta..........she turned to saw both of them breathing heavily...........

nu- muje vo doll chayia................

sam- no we are not purchasing this why you run away.....we are angry at you............😡

nup- becoz banji bahyia is hurting my wound she showed them her wound benji was actually caught her hand which was hurt..............so i tell them to leave my hand but they not..........so i scream ......but i can't understand why people was beating bhai...........

may- nothing now purchase whatever you want and lets go i am feeling hungry.............

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they purchased the toys and going when nups saw
something she run there...............both sam and mayn watch her running ...........

may- what happen............

sam- lets go...........
nup saw a lady which was pregnant ....she slipped
when nups caught her hand................

lady- thank you because of you my baby is safe.........she hugged nupur.......................
may and sam understand why she run..............

nup- she asked lady.........-ye baby kaha hai muje to nahi dikh raha ahi.......lady started laughing........

la- you are so funny ....here is the baby saying this lady put nups hand on her stomach .......see baby will kick............

nu- he kick baby kick.................but how baby can be in your stomach.....baby kaha se aaya...........mere pass to nahi hai...........before the lady go further someone called her.........


maynk and sam was listening there talk ..........

sam- maynk is se pehle ki nupur hamse kuch poche hum chaltein hai yahaa se.........saying this sam run from there.............

may- sam you are right.............

nup- ruko muje kuch pochna hai.......saying this

nupur run behind them..............

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may- nupur hum gahr ja ker baat kartien hai,........

nu- nahi muje abhi baat karni hai................

sam- vo nupur muje abhut bhook lagi hai plz .....or benji ko bhi rest karna hai.............

nu- nahi muje ..................

may- no nupur now if you don't stop we will not talk to you............

nu- ok..............i will not speak...........

the trio set in some reatro to eat something........benji was giving angry glare to nups...........

suddenly benji saw something and started 😃smiling.........

nupur was the one who make him smile she was holding her ears with her hands and doing push ups and saying sorry.............

be- it's ok now stop it ok i will forgive you............😛

nu- you are so sweet bahyia.......saying this she kissed benji's cheaks......and this is for you she give him a choclate.............😊

may sna sammy both watching them ........acha ab tum dono ka ho gaya ho to lets eat something..........

nu- muje kuch pochna tha..............

may- nahi plz lets eat................

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maynk an sam noticed nupur was not eating she was
playing with her food...............

sam- nupur kya hua tuje ye acha nahi laga .......

nu- nahi .............

be- to kuch or order ker de............

nu- nahi.........

may- to phir kya hua nupur.................

nu- hum ghar kab jayene ............said nupur uncomfortabley....................

may and sam noticed the uncomfortable look on her face................
benji look at the direction and saw ..three boy was
giving .disgusting looks to nupur...................
he felt himself boiling with anger..................😡

be- sam tu nupur ko laker ja mein abhi aa raha hoon.......

sam sensed anger in benji's voice................may and nupur both was waiting for benji it was almost ten minutes but he was no where .........
sam tell maynk to wait there and he also left and
here maynk and nupur left...............
after 20 minute when both not returned .........maynk
too went there and saw..........
both were beating some boys............

he grab both's hand and drage them outside ..........near there car..............

may- are you mad tum kya ker rahey they andar...........

sam- chod muje maynk ............us boy ko to mein chodne wala nahi hoon........
benj- or tuje nupur ke pass rahne ko kaha tha na phir
tum dono usse chod ker kyo aaye.........

sam- acha tu tuje akela maar kahte dektha kya............


be- just shut up sam vo log i will kill them ............


may- just shut up both of you anybody plz tell me what's going here............

sam and benji together.........-nothing.............

nupur saw there was some blood on benji's t -shirt........

nu- khoon dekho khoon......
sam and may both saw benji's hand was bleeding
but here he only want to smack the guy.......
nupur tied her hanky on benji's wound.........
and she cried too when she saw the blood drop.......

nu- bhai tumhe dard ho raha hai na.......she said sweetly.......koi baat nahi abhi sahi ho jayga...

be - his eyes become teary when he saw nups love.... only he can do was he hugged her.........

sam- benji aaj sister mil gayi to dost ko chod dega kya ............

be- nahi yaar tu bhi aa ja......saying this they all hug each other

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when they reach home............

nu- muje bhook lag rahi hai...........

be- abhi andar to aa jane de meri maa.........phir kuch kha lena..............

nu- acha abhi mere ek question ka answer do........

may- nupur first hum sab ander cahle..........

nu- ok .............


now they were sitting on soffa...........

may now gave a question look to benji and sammy.......

nu- muje bhook lagi hai......

may- nupur go to gest room and i will bring something for you.............

nu- ok..................

nupur left and maynk ask benji ............

be- maynk you know today i realize how girl feel when someone gave her disgusting look ,.......when somebody gaze her ....the gaze is not only a gaze but it was just we are doing x-ray of her body .....maynk the boy i just want to kill that .........he was giving our nupur ...........that basted..............

sam- benji even me to want to kill the boy how he look at my sister .................

may saw his friends was changed only meeting of three days with unknown girl just changed them alot na.............even they don't know about this girl but she meant alot for them ........

may- relax benji and sam ..............even he was also boiling from inside but he don't want to show this...............before they talk more they hear loud voice of nupur......

nu- muje bhook lagi hai............


be- yaar lagta hai uske stomach mein jo animal hai bhook wala vo jaag gaya hai............nu was behind them..........

nu- benji bhai kya sach mein stomach mein animal bhi hota hai...........

be- just turned and saw she was listening them.......

nu- bato na dost ,kya stomach mein animal bhi hota hai ya phir bachaa hi hota hai.........

samy ,maynk and benji just looking each other

face......

nu- she hold maynk's hand and just put it on her stomach ........bato yahaa baby hota hai....kya......?

benji just covered his face with pillo...and sam listening this he just fall from the sofa............

may he was shocked................

nu- muje bato na yahaa per baby kassie ataa hai .vo aunti ka stomach kassie itna badaa ho gaya tha ....mera kyo nahi hai.........muje bhi aisa badaa karna hai ........plz muje bato ...........

sam he just closed his ears and run outside..........

poor benji and maynk.........

she left maynk's hand and just put her hand on

maynk's stomach .........

nu- dost tumhare stomach mein se kick ki awaj kyo nahi aa rahi hai .........saying this she put her ears near maynk's stomach ......kuch gudgud ki awaj aa rahi hai......kya tumhari stomach mein bhi baby hai....bato na............tumhare pass baby kassie hai.......

may- nupur vo mein vo mein tumhe raat ko batonga....plz ab muje chod do...............😳

nu she leave maynk and benji was still covering his face with pillo .....nupur put her ear near benji's stomach .............

nu- kamaal hai bahi ki pate mein se to or bhi fast awaj aa rahi hai iska matlab inke patt mein bhi baby hai .........wow do do baby .........she start jumping with happiness........😃😃😃

mean while sam also comeback ....
may and benji too noticed she was jumping with
joy........

sam- nupur kya hua.........

nu- bahi abhi yahha two two baby hai ....ek maynk ke pass or ek benji ke pass.........😛

both maynk and benji just fall form there seats when 😲they hear this................

sam just started laughing...........😆

sam- to nupur tumne unhe congratulation nahi kaha........

nup- sorry mein to bhool gayi she hugged both maynk and benji..........

sam- acha ab agar tumne jayda noise kiya to baby angry ho jayga tum jao or movie watch karo mein kuch lata ho tumhare liye..........

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in kitchen.........

trio was standing............

sam- congrats both of you ..............😃

ben- just shut up...........

sam- benji is condition mein tuje itna gussa karna acha nahi hai or phir tune batya nahi ki tuje konsa month chal raha hai.................

ben- just shut up sam.............

sam- or maynk tune bhi is baby ki mummy ka naam nahi batya..............

may- ruk abhi bata hoon.............saying this maynk run behind sam with a stick.........after eating and with there non stop bak bak they fall asleep............

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nupur here door bell ring while rubbing her eyes....she open the door..........there was some girl at the door.........

gi- who are you.............

nu- mein nupur .....aap ek minut ruko mein abhi aayi saying thsi she come back with a white bed sheet...and covered sheena............

gi- what is this nonsenese............

nu- vo aap ke clothes lagta hai phatt gaye hai is liye to aap ko chadder de rahi hoon..................


gi- what rubbish....................you stuipd she throw the bedsheet .............. pata nahi maynk bhi kassie kassie servant raktha hai .......aane do usse aaj to mein tuhme nahi chodne waali ......i will kill you......saying this she left...........

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in the evening........
everybody besides maynk was watching t.v and
siping their tea....

nu- bhai she said to benji pata hai aaj koi chaddi wali aunti aayi thi........ pata hai mine usse bedsheet diya uske clothes phatt gaye they lakin usne muje danta or kaha ki vo dost ko kahegi ki muje ghar se nikal de....

be- chaddi wali aunti..........

nu- ha bahut gandi thi kya dost ke aise hi gande gande friend hai .....mein to ganda nahi hoo or nahi aap dono phir vo chddi wali aunti kassi dost ki friend hai......................................

sam- pakka sheena hi hogi .........kyoki uske pass hi aise varity hai clothes ki.........

nu- us aunti ne muje danta...............

be- koi baat nahi aj dekna usse is lyke nahi chodne wale ki vo tuje dant paye................
saying this benji hug her..........hai


nu- vo aaj aygi dost se milne..........

sam -to mein bata hoon ki uska kya karna hai.........saying this they both tell each other some idea..........

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idea night
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8 : 00 pm

nup- muje icecream kahni hai.................

sam- nupur icecream nahi aaj fridge mein icecream nahi hai.............

nu- nahi muje khani hai............

be- nupur tu zid mat ker icecream nahi hai samji........

nu- plz muje khani hai...............

be- tuje ek baar mein samj nahi aata kya icecream nahi hai...........sarra din kha kha ker elephnat ho jaygi phir hum khaa rakhege tuje ye ghar to hamera liye hi choota hai

nu- kutti kutti kutti mein tum dono se baat nahi karogi jao......tum nahi laker doge to kya dost bhi nahi laker dega........... saying this she turned to maynk....

may- ok i will ........

nu- you are so sweet saying this she kissed maynk cheek..........

may pov-
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omg plz god don't do this this girl will make me crazy with her act .......her smile her.talk just making my heart to fall for her ...her childish acts ........oh god......

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thinking this he left............


sam, benji and nup hugged each other.............

be- aaj to chaddi wali aunti gayi...............

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here is the next part soory isme thoda laughing elemnet less hai but next time i will try to write more good i don't know you like this or not plz comment and press the like button and if i forget to pm anyonme then plz forgive me i have updating in so much hurry so plz forgive me ok
with love
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aditit

Edited by adi_gupta - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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fantastic update adi

loved it
loved benji and sammy's concern for nupur
loved mayank
and nupur and her questions 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
loved her scene with sheena oops sorry chaddi wali aunty🤣
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Posted: 15 years ago
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first of all it is so sweet of you to update even during exam time

you are really nice
i know dosti mein koi thx nahi hota par phir bhi dil tumhe thank you kehna chahta hai
the update was awesome
i was rolling on the floor and holding my stomach
i was laughing like hell
people in my house thought i had gone mad
hospital scenes were awesome
nupur wanting a doll was cute
and then the mall scenes were great
bechara benji
aur woh ladka jo nupur ko dekh raha tha in games section........ uski toh
accha hua samrat and mayank came in time
then the restuarant scene was great
loved benji and sam's concern
nups is so lucky to have brothers like them
and ghar par woh baby talk.......
mayank aur benji ke pait me baccha........ that was the best
and phir woh sheena....... oops chaddi aunty
aur phir sam, benji aur nups ka plan was so cute
waiting for mayur ice-cream scenes


update soon
luv
mahima


Edited by MjhtFan_Mahima - 15 years ago
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awesome update yaar....loveed it...pls continue soon.................loving the bond btw the trio and nupur..........
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OmG.....it was sooooo funnyyy...🤣🤣🤣
loved it....
continue it s000n....

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