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Posted: 15 years ago
#81
oh gosh .. luv triangle..😲.
Mayur & adi....nahi!!!!!!!!!😒
luvd d update 2 d core...
pls update soon....🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: mjhtmayurluver

awesum CS & start dear👏....
luvd d concept... its very interestin...
gr8 wrtin....👍🏼
luvd d gunur & dia convos...😳.
pls add me 2 ur pm list....
rush 2 read d 2nd part....
-supriya

thanx a lot dear....v r very glad that u like the ff......u r really sweet....thanks a lot once more.........
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Posted: 15 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: mjhtmayurluver

oh gosh .. luv triangle..😲.
Mayur & adi....nahi!!!!!!!!!😒
luvd d update 2 d core...
pls update soon....🤗
-supriya

yes dear mayur and adi..u have to bare adhi in this ff dear....will be updating 2day dear....
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Posted: 15 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: achoose

i will update soon dear.......

when???
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Posted: 15 years ago
#85
awesome ff.....
a love triangle n cold war between sajan. benia wer gud too....
cont soon n plzzzz add me in ur pm list...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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nice ff guys
cont. soon
and pm me for next one plese
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: SaJan-SaJan

awesome ff.....

a love triangle n cold war between sajan. benia wer gud too....
cont soon n plzzzz add me in ur pm list...

thanx a lot dear...surely i will add u to the pm list.....
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Posted: 15 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: hiiiiiiiiiii

nice ff guys

cont. soon
and pm me for next one plese

is feeling lonely....
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Posted: 15 years ago
#89

Part 3

Nupzi, gunji, dia and adhiraaj enters to the class and noticed that smarat was noting down something.

Gun-nupzi...what he is writing?? the classes have not started yet na

nup- yeah..thats what even i am thinking

dia- oh...he is a padkoo type. its better to stay away from him...otherwise we will also become padkoos.

adhi, nupzi and gunji chuckled at this.

nup- chodna yaar...let him do anything.

gun- he is juz showing attitude.

samrat was hearing all this and gunji's last sentence just infuriated him. samrat got up and came near where adhi and angels are standing.

sammy- excuse me...what is your problem actually? why the hell are you always irritating me?

gunji- irritating you????? never as if i dont have any other job.

sammy- i will do whatever i want...better u stay away from me.

gunji- hey MR.attitude..thats what even i wanna tell you....better u stay away from me...warna...

sammy-warna kya?? and points his finger...

gunji too points her finger...before the situation worsens...adhi holds sammy and nupzi holds gunji....

dia was busy in enjoying their fight....

then the teacher entrs and all got seated

both gunji and sammy was fuming in anger...

The classes where going on. it was the 1st time nupzi is not listening to the class, she was still thinking of the guy who has saved her and adhiraj was busy staring at nupzi....adhiraj had a satisfied smile that he has found his true love..
The teacher asked gunji and nupzi to collect the library form and id cards..and both moved out to library.,....dia had to clear out some admission work...so she too went out...mayank was also going to library and sees nupur and gunji walking. he was so happy to see nupur and was behind them. mayank was hearing their conversation

nupzi- still in thoughts...

gunj- nupur...down to earth nupur...tell me...what happened? i am noticing u from long time...whats bothering you...missing ur parents???

nupzi- ofcourse i am missing them yaar...but..(after a pause)...i wanna meet him..

gunji(confused)- wanna meet whom??

nup- the man who saved me from falling...if he would not have been there...

gunji (cutts her) and says- your leg would have been fractured for the third time..and smiles...

by hearing this nupur smiles too

gunji- i think my sweetheart has fallen in love

mayank ws surprised to hear this and was waiting for her...

nupur- what???? love and me?? what a nice joke,,....juz wanna say a thank u to him...thats all.. nothing else...

gunji- ok ok....carry on..carry on

nupzi- stop it gunji

mayank( thinking)....hmm nice...she is very sweet.

They reached the libray and gunjan goes to the library form sction and and nupzi was standing there in the id card section.

mayank(thinking)- so her name is nupzi..and she wanna say a thank u to me...but for whatt??? ok...its a chance to meet and talk with her and by thinking this he juz move towards and stands near by her..

now nupur sees mayank and smiles at him...

nupsi(thinking)- i have seen him somewhere..but where>>> ?? wait...is he the man who saved me??..if he is the one..then he will be talking with me now...stop ur non sense nupzi...juz chill

mayank gaining all the courage and decided to talk with her

mayank- hi

nupzi heart stopped a bit

nupzi- yah hi

mayank- am mayank..

nupzi smiles- ok...my name is ....

mayu- nupzi rite?

nupzi(shocked)- hey...how do u know my name??

may- yeah...i know everything dear...

nupzi- but how? i am meeting you for the first time..then how come u know me and my name?

mayank was shocked to hear that...

mayank(thinking)- what?? she didnt know me that i am the one who saved her...shit shit shit...ab mein kya karoo???

nupzi- ok ok....leave it now...by the way my name is nupur bushan and my pet name is nupzi

mayank is upset by now..and juz bid a bye to her and leaves from there....

nupur(thinking)- y he suddenly got upset? did i say something wrong?

Gunji sees mayank talking with nupur and leaving...she rushes to nupur and asks her...

gun- so finally u met hhom?im haa?? happy now?

nupzi- met whom>?

gunji- ur saviour (with a wink)..

nup- what? i didnt get u

gun- arrey budhu...i am talking about the guy who saved u..

nupzi was now shocked....

nupzi- where is he?? just show me gunji..please...

mayu- what ??? u didnt meet him?? i saw u talking with him...

suddenly it clicked nupur...

nupzi- mayank...yes..its him...oh GOD...i will just come gunji..and she just rushes outside...but by the time mayank was nowhere to be seen.... nupur was on the verge of tears now....

Gunji comes near her and notices that nupur is in tears...

gunji- what is this nupzi?? for a silly reason u r crying?? r u mad?

nupzi- its not silly gunji..this is the time i am missing him and she just goes away from there

but for the 1st time gunji was not upsate by seeing nupur crying

gunji just smiles and says "LOVE IS IN THE AIR"...

Now the scene cut to dia...

While dia was coming from college..."the great standing there ready to rag dia...dia sees them and juz tries tt go way from there..but they stopped her and started bugging her...

guy1- hey beautiful...whats ur sweet name?

dia tells her name

guy2- diya ir diva? u r soo hot to handle...wanna come with me??

dia- excuse me...jus behave yourself...k???

guy2- oh...we are afraid...what you will do haa?? show me and catches her hand

dia starts crying and at that time...our benji enters

benji saw the guys teasing dia and dia crying.

benji lost him control by seeing tears in dia's eyes but calms himself and tells one of the senior that principal has asked them to meet in the auditorium..

guy1- ok...now we are leaving you..but dont think that you are safe anymore...got it?? and the guys disperse from there....

benji comes near her and put his hands on her shoulder...dia jerked his hands off and says...

dia- how dare you touch me?? trying to act hero haa???

benji- no...u misunderstod me..i was juz trying to save u....

dia- oh really??? i know u where trying to save me so that u can rag me alone haa...and starts scolding him badly....

benji tries his maximum to stop dia but afterall its dia...she was continuously scolding him...

at last beji lost his contol..

benji- shut up

dia got afraid and just stops...

benji- 1st u juz hear me ...first of all..as u think.. am not a senior...and i was juz trying to save you from the seniors...u know whatt?? if they comes to know that i said a lie and tried to save y..then am gone..but now i regret for what i did..i was so dump to save a girl like you....and am sorry...bye and leaves from there...

dia was just shocked and realised her mistake..she just rushed to say him sorry but couldnt see him..

dia(thinking)- oh GOD...what did i do?? he was just trying to save me and I misunderstood him...what will i do now??? thinking this ..she went to class

Gunji was coming to the class wand clashes with someone...it was none other smarat...both fall down and then gets up with a jerk...both are fuming in anger....

Now the screen divided into three...

gunji(thinking)- i know he clashed with me purposefully...this is the lomit..i will show him who i am....

nupur lost in thoughts of mayank and thinking how to meet him again

dia: thinking of benji and tells herself that she will meet him soon and will say sorry to him..................

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Posted: 15 years ago
#90

Gr8 update dee.........

mind blowing..
totally luved it..........
Do cont. soon...........😃
Edited by KomaliciousXOMN - 15 years ago

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