Making Memories Of Us (MayUr) Last Part (23.6.10)

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-sam-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#101

This is really beautiful
please add me to pm list

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nanchie sharma

@mayur-ki-diwani

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Posted: 15 years ago

#102

gr8 part
mayur were so passionate and romantic
update soon

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seema mittal

@seemamittal

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Posted: 15 years ago

#103

Heyyyyy sonam
It was so amazing update
Loved this update very much
But wat is vivans problem???
Do continue soon
N thanx for pm

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naina

@naina0123

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Posted: 15 years ago

#104

whoa!!!

how did I ever miss this beautiful FF???!!!

Thanks Akansha for the recommendation!!🤗

Ok..lemme start over..

Hi Sonam di..

just read the entire ff...in one word,it is-SUPERB!

It took me some time to get used to Nisha and Vivaan as mayur but no issues..I am sure you have something in your mind..

cumin back to the story..I loved evry bit of it.Right from accident,Nisha's first day at Oracle,Grace,Sam,Sarah,Clare,Vivaan the freshers party, every lil bit!beautiful story...and Nisha-Vivaan's chemistry..the way the silence between them speak volumes..Vivaan's perfect timing when it comes to save Nisha..phew..lovely!!

Oh my fav.part of this ff is the names of the chapters..they are top notch!it kinda prepares me for the chapter..lol.ok ill stop my blaberring 4 now..

pls add me to ur PM list..cant miss any more parts..

continue soon di..

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You-Know-Who

@You-Know-Who

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Posted: 15 years ago

#105

@Naina..I am gr8 aren't i?

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-sam-

@-sam-

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#106

I want to comment again....
I am in love with this
I had started reading this earlier but somewhere i lost the track
Now got it back.

Sonam, u are an amazing writer....
I loved the names too
Its just enchanting and reading this was a bliss for me, it took me away from my worries atleast for some minutes...
Continue soon

@aku- Thank u.....

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ShwePoo

@ShwePoo

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#107

WOW!!! WOW!!! WOW!!!

Awesome update....
Loved it....
Finally, Vivaan shows that he also loves Nisha...
But, why does he behave rudely then and why was he saying that Nisha can't be happy with him.....??

Very excited to read the next update.....

Pls update soon...

- Pooja

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manjeet

@love.mayurarti

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#108

wow.....luved dis ff
vivaan is a mystery man. he is unpredictable
bt he is sweet
and nisha is a sweetheart & beautiful...
really luved dis ff
grt work
eagerly waiting fr nxt update
n tnx fr pm

Edited by mehramanjeet88 - 15 years ago