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Posted: 15 years ago
#41
Noo need too say thnnxx.....yaar...
But main confuesd hoojatii hoon main kon hoo aur woh wali SaNa kaunsii hain... 😕
Soo yum mujhe Sanu kaaaysakthi hoon...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: SaJan_Sana4ever

Noo need too say thnnxx.....yaar...
But main confuesd hoojatii hoon main kon hoo aur woh wali SaNa kaunsii hain... 😕
Soo yum mujhe Sanu kaaaysakthi hoon...

arrey u knw me
common courtesy!
I knw the golden rule,😉 but i just express how happy i am with tht thnk u!!😳
Actually maine bhi notice kiya!😳
isliye main sana_sajan ko sanu bulati hoon, aur tumhe sana😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#43
awesome concept!!
loved it =D
glad to see another ff frum yu zeejay =D
<3
HiNaL
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Posted: 15 years ago
#44
Awwwww so so so sad 1st part so emotional btw awesome concept it will be all emotional in starting updates I can tell n btw congrats for ur new ff n update soon n thnx for pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesomeee concept dear..
loved d CS..
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Posted: 15 years ago
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@HinaL- thnx a lot dear:D m glad u liked it:D
@anu- thnx dear:D ohh dont worry dear, only the next one, then its all adventure awaiting you😊 am glad u liked it! 😊
@aarthi- thnx dear! but u commented before...stil doesnt matter! I love reviews:D:D
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Posted: 15 years ago
#47

Chapter 2

My life is not a game

After 2 weeks

Gunjan and Nupur had shifted to Bui's place. They had wanted to stay at their home, home..where Bauji's memories still lived, but bui had been downright stubborn about the two moving to her place. Nupur and Gunjan as common coutesy accepted Bui's decision. They didn't have any other close relative,also it was only her bui who had come up to take their responsibility. This bothered nupur very much, her bui treated them like immature kids, while nupur was determined to guide the way for her sister, bui seemed to be the one taking all the decisions.

That morning Bui had told Gunjan that she would send Gunjan to a University nearby…Bui had also mentioned as to how it will be difficult for gunjan as she would have to travel all the way to her college by bus, which would add up to further expenses. Gunjan had accepted her bui's decision, but nupur was full flames at this.

"She cant take decisions for you" Nupur hissed while she arranged her clothes in the cupboard.

Gunjan looked up at her di "But she's only doing what she feels is right for me"

Nupur stopped in her actions.

"Gunjan don't get me started"

"But di"

"You know gun(promounced as half of gun-jan) Bauji left the house on our name, but still we are here! At bui's place and our house is on rent! he also left us his land, which is now being taken care of by Bui's son. Bauji didn't make Bui our caretaker, he left all the responsibilities on me! After all this you are being send to some small university in the city…you" Nupur pointed at Gunjan "are a very bright student, you deserve quality education, if bui only tries you may also get admission through scholarship"

"di u tell me, what should I do?" gunjan asked patting the place next to her, signing for nupur to get seated.

Nupur did as requested.

"Gun I will talk to Bui about this"

"oke" gunjan smiled.

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"Nupur tujhe kya lagta hai?" bui asked scolding nupur "mujhe gunjan ka khayal nahin hai kya? Bhai ne tum donon ko sar pe betha ke rakha tha isliye tu aisi baat keh rahi hai"

Nupur felt anger stab through her.

"bui" Nupur started.

"awaaz tez karke baat nahin karna mujhse" bui shouted.

"but I didn't" nupur said confused.

"yeh lo! Dekh lo saab ab angrezi jhaad rahi hain apni bui par! Agar zara si bhi sharam baki hai to abhi chup ho ja!"

"kya hua ma?" Bui's son interrupted.

"kuch nahin" bui said irritated

"kya ma..iske upar itna guzza kyun karti hai…shaadi biha karke ise apne sasural pohucha de..bas"

"tu in baaton main mat padh, aur waise bhi, nupur, kal tujhe ladke wale dekhne aa rahe hain, abhi bhi waqt hai sudhar ja"

Nupur stood shell-shocked hearing bui's words.

"Shaadi!?? Main shaadi nahin karoongey!"

"to phir kya karegey?ek to waise tera rang daba hai, gunjan to phir bhi chand dikhti hai.tujhse kaun shaadi karega? Aur main tum donon behnon ka kharcha ek saath nahin utha sakti"

"bui" Gunjan said shocked at hearing her words.

"Gunjan beta" bui softened up seeing gunjan enter, she gave a nervous laugh "main to nupur se keh rahi thi ki..ki woh usse ladke wale dekhne aa rahey hain…kal to eh"

Nupur fumed in anger.

"Gunjan andar chal" Gunjan followed her di inside.

Nupur picked up the phone and dialed the number of Bauji's lawyer.

"Hello"

"Hello may I speak to Mr.Kohl"

"one second maam"

Nupur waited for their lawyer to answer the call

"Hello Mr Kohl speaking."

"Mr Kohl, Nupur Bhushan here, Mr.Bharat Bhushan's daughter"

"ohh yes…am sorry for your loss, your father was a great man"

"thank you, I was wondering if I could meet you"

"yes sure, how about tomorrow morning at my office?"

"thank you"

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The next day after the meet with the lawyer,

Nupur paced around her room waiting for Gunjan, she didn't know wat was right or wrong for that matter, had bui been selfish? But surely bui doesn't know about it or maybe she does..

Nupur shook her head, it didn't matter! It didn't….all tht mattered was the fact that she didn't want to get married, that gunjan deserved better education, it was not about money,it was never supposed to be. It is their life's at stake, not bui's clever plans or any other motives.

But if she told gun about it all, what would her next step be? What would she do then?

Nupur sighed in frustration.

"Nupur!!" Bui called. Nupur pursed her lips in anger.

Bui entered.

"Nupur yeh sari hai, ladke wale do ghante main aate honge, tayyar ho ja"

Nupur accepted the sari politely. It was not the time to act in haste.

"Bui, Gunjan kahan hai?"

"College gaye hai, kuch papers jama kara ne the usse" bui replied.

"ohh" nupur turned to bui.

"haan aur main ja rahi hoon raat ka khana banana hai, ladke walon ka swagat ache khane se karungey"

"ji aur bui… gunjan aaye to usse help karne ke liye bhej dijiyega" Bui stared at nupur curiously.

"achha" with tht she left.

Nupur threw the sari on the floor, and locked her door.

This is it! Not anymore!

She dialed the lawyer's number, and arranged for everything.

She took a deep breath and dialed another number.

Bauji never agreed, she had always felt guilty, but today she was glad, that she didn't listen to her bauji.

"Hello"

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"Di?" Gunjan knocked on the door

Nupur opened the door for gunjan and pulled her inside.

"Di?" gunjan wondered, but her worries were cleared on a single glance at the room

2 packed handbags were set on the bed,The dressing table empty with a piece of paper placed under a paper weight(it's a letter), the cupboard was empty whose doors stood ajar.

"Gun, we are running away….we are not going to spend our lives here, I cant tolerate this anymore"

"but di?"

"no gunjan, I don't want to get married, bui wont listen, I have talked to the lawyer and"

"wat did he say?" gunjan interrupted.

"Never mind that now gun, I will tell you everything later, but bui she wont understand, she wants me to get married, and then u....i don't know wat she's thinking, but the way she's treating you is very fishy"

"ya but"

"no buts gunjan, this is not the time to think, I have planned it all"

There was a knock at the door.

"Nupur, gunjan tum donon tayyar ho gaye?" bui called.

"Haan bui bas thodi der aur" nupur replied

"achha" they calmed on hearing bui's footsteps retreating.

"gunjan chal main tujhe baad main sab samjha doongey" nupur threw the curtains open, it as dark outside and deserted.

"par di"

"gunjan u trust me don't you?" nupur asked her eyes questioning.

Gunjan was thrown away by her question "yes di, I trust you" gunjan replied earnestly.

"Par di hum ja kahan rahe hain?"

"Mumbai" nupur said as she threw the handbags down her window, and was now pulling at the bed sheets.

"mumbai?" gunjan was shocked.

"yes, now help me" nupur said.

Gunjan helped nupur throw the bed sheets out of the window, Nupur peered down, "we will jump" nupur said.

"what!?" gunjan asked aghast.

"yes!"

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Chapter 2 ENDS!

so thats it.

Any doubts questions? feel free to ask!😳

Do review! they mean a lot to me.

Hope u liked this chap.

luv

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Posted: 15 years ago
#48

mindblowing update

now gunur runs to mumbai where they will meet their heros sayank...i hope they dont get caught by bui phew.......anyways awesome update....plz continue soon....n thanx for the pm...
lots of love
sanu
p.s:may i know when r u updateing boys vs gals😆,question is out of part 😆😆😆😆
Edited by sana_sajan - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#49

OMG, OMG, OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This is AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Ughhhhhh I HATE Bui sososososososososososososososo much!!! and all those people that consider girls as burdens!!!!!!!!!!!!! But I really LOVE nupur in your story!!!! the way she takes care of gunjan and fights for their rights is awesoem!!!!!!!!!!!! Plz continue sooooon!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#50
beautiful update ... pls contd ASAP

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