'Hamari Love Story'(MayUr SS) PartVII(Ending)

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Natasha

@Naughtynatty

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Posted: 15 years ago

#11

i am so glad u r writing another ff !!
loving this new flavour !!!
cnt wait for the next update !!
n i knw u r super quick at updatin so no complains on tht at all !!!

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: mahaklovesmayur
di!

yipee i am the first one again! abhi abhi just meri sister ne mujhe pc diya tha! how lucky yaar!

wow......kya story hai! its too different and too nice!

i really loved this one!

i mean nupur and mayank frds......nupur rejecting his offer......and then break up with vikram.....her career shattered......then telling mayank why she refused......he thinking her as nice.....then they becoming frds.......

di.......aapke paas itne acha ideas aate kahan se hain? shower some on me too!

loved this one too much!

it was amazing and mind blowing!

di do continue soon.........aur baaki sabka theek hai.........but galti se bhi mujhe pm karna mat bhooliyega!

i really loved it totally!

love,
Mahak

Hi Mahak,

Yipeee U came first yaar.. aur this time as soon i had finshed with the Pm and was loggign out I saw u reserving.. and i was as excited as u may be u know..ehhe..congo chalo chalo isssi khushi mey ek Icecream cheers kartey hain aur khatey hain..its very hot na these days..:)

So u liked whatver i tired to brign out here.. different pata nahi.. hai ya nahi.. i have tried to keep script less here thats a change para are more.. very less poetic lines uptil now and will be there as story unfolds..

So u want ideas.. leloo leloo maine shower kiya hai..but yeh kya tumharey par to pehley sey hi creativity ki baarish ho rahi hai... my god floods na hojaye with too many ideas...lol

chalo tum bore nahi huee aur main khush huee..

yup will conitnue in just few minutes as i finsih my replies here.. i dont feel like gogin ahead with my story until i have repplied ot my readers who have taken time to read and comment..:D

yup Pm karungi.. luv u lots dear..

Bhoomi

Originally posted by: dolly18
oh god oh god di this one was just shooo adoreble
loved it too the core

i was right

u r one asome writer

thanlks loads for the pm

pls continue soon

loads of lov

dolly

Hi Dolly,

u Liked reading I am glad.. i guess first part is always a bit thanda naa..hehe hope u have great time reading ahead.. with less of scripot possibily.. i am ok writer but ya i have awesome reader.. that i am sure... oh dont thank me for the Pm.. :D yup will post the netx part.. pretty soon...tc

Bhoomi

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: sakura_mayur
Heyyyy bhoomi
Amazing concept
N amazingly written
Mayurs character is really good
Continue soon

Hi Seema,

glad that u liked the concept dear.. U liked the charcters.. i havnt tried ot go by what the serial shows but tried to convey some feelings up here thorguh both of them..hope u enjoy reading.. thats what i want.. luvu tc

Bhoomi

Originally posted by: sariska_mjht
Hey man awesum cocept do pm me

Hi,

good to know u liked the story uptil now..hope u enjoy reading as the story unfolds.its a short story so not many parts here.. tc

Bhoomi

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: Divya_kaldivya
I am jumping with joy... Bhoomi's Mayur's SS are back.. and I am just elated.. Kya story hain.. BY GOD... hatke.. but the one line I loved was "she was not grounded to her roots".. and later the explanation Nupz gives for not accepting the money because he's a womanizer...

This shows that no matter how successful we are, we should always remember our roots, because it won't be veru difficult to get back to where we belonged to. and then this also shows that in this industry also apart from everywhere else, where woman are respected, that's the place to be there, and if that is not there, accepting money from such a person is dirty money.. You have portryaed Nupz so well.. an actress well grounded with her values and principles still instilled in her....

Beuatifully written dear.. and do continue PMing me...

Hi Divya,

U r jumping iwth Joy and i am smiling with joy lookign at ur comment that u rightoo time pey haiii:D..hatkey to pata nahi tried to project whatver was comign in mind.. and hope u all enjoy reading it.. yup I have come across or observed in media its better people think u r arrogant rather than let anyone take advantage of ur nice nature. so here NUpur shows she is rude when she rejected but without saying much she explained her side well later. Glad that u liked that little segment there..

Yes i agree with what u have said and beautifully put across..whatver i have seen in media all type of people r there and its up to u how u carry urself and project urself.. values u have and u stick to...

just tryign to build a story here..hope u enjoy the aspect segments in this story ..luv u dear.. tc

Bhoomi

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: jyothi_cool
wow bhoomi awesome start loved it cont soon

Hi Jyothi,

glad u have ur comment here..and good to know u r reading and liked it. tc

luv u

Bhoomi

Originally posted by: mjhtnupurmayank
Very nice...plzz pm me when u update..!!

Hi,

nice to know u liked reading this story so far.. and yup will update soon..tc

Bhoomi

Originally posted by: achoose
awesome yaar.very realistic.........

Hi,

glad u liked it and felt its realistic.. hope u enjoy the next parts too.. tc

Bhoomi

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: monikaseth
Awesome , Mid Blowing very nice i like nupur she is so clear and nice , i like it he understand her and they become friends again so sweet ..thank you dear for such a great story ..

Hi Monu,

U like Nupur here, i am very glad to know dear.. yup they r friends now.. and good to have ur comments dear.. hope u enjoy reading furthue on into the story... tc luvu

Bhoomi

Originally posted by: Naughtynatty
i am so glad u r writing another ff !!
loving this new flavour !!!
cnt wait for the next update !!
n i knw u r super quick at updatin so no complains on tht at all !!!

Hi,

Yup i had to na write another ff on MayUr the jodi is liek this rockign and thoguhts errupt soon na.. glad that u liked and felt this is a new flavour..oh the update will be very soon.. yup i have too i am as impatient as u all..heheh 😆 tc

Bhoomi

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: annie07
Awesome start Bhoomi.................looks promising

Hi,

glad u liked it.. and hope u enjoy reading further.. tc

Bhoomi

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adi_gupta

@adi_gupta

Inactive

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Posted: 15 years ago

#18

hi bhoomi
another ss.wow well today is the best day one by one my allwishes coming true.........
happy to see you ss...........
lvoely script bhoomi.............
nups as actor and maynk as director.........
the reason nups tell maynk was true and their friendship was aging happen
lovley thought
i love nups courage she nevergave up tried hard lovey way..........
and the lines which maynk write was too lovely and i love it
thx for the pm

Edited by adi_gupta - 15 years ago