do dil ek jaaan #2 ~~~~~~~part34 pg 142

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Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#291

this story is really sweeeeeeet. Nice update. Please add me to pm list...

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Mahima

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Stunner

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Posted: 15 years ago

#292

got to go

goodnight

sweet dreams

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bhargavi

@gopi06

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#293

nice updt
thanks for the pm

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sehrish

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Sparkler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#294

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima

no comments........ (actually aaj ke mjht ka influence hai)....... 😆 😆

perfect update par comment kaise karoo........ tu hi bata de na....... 👏

mazza aa gaya update padkar

really well written

the majan talk was rocking

gunjan calling nupur bhabhi was so cute

and mm hearing their talk was the best

mayur convo was so sweet

par nupur naraz ho gayi...... so sad

but mayank kept texting and calling her

and later went to her house....... how romantic

that too with chocolates and flowers

but nupur shouting was scary

the nupur-armaan-ridhima scene was so cute

and then the mayur convo was best

mayank apologizing was cute

and their date plan was rocking

gunjan's advise to mayank abt date was so cool

and samrat's way of dressing up nupur was the best

waiting for the date

i'm dying for monday to come......

p.s- hope you don't mind me requesting some scenes....... but its upto you if you want to put them....... i hope to see a scene where mayank tries to impress armaan

arey tere comment k bagair mera updte kabhi pur nhe hoskta

shooo sweeeeeeeet yr

welll me ry karuge k sunday ko upde karu bt depend agar prepartio puri hogaye

aur tere ideas r alwayz welcum

will definitel put up ur suuggestion in upcoming part

with a leap

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No_Comments

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Sparkler

Posted: 15 years ago

#295

grr888 part..
Loved it dear..
Cont soon

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sehrish

@sizzysehrish

Sparkler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#296

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima
got to go

goodnight

sweet dreams

gud nyt

sweet dreamz dear

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sehrish

@sizzysehrish

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#297

Originally posted by: kulsumd
wah badhya update.. 👏 👏 👏

Mayank vz soo happy wen he vz tellng abt nups

Bro sis hug vz cute.

Mayur phone convo vz nyc..

Awww mayu nups ko manane uske ghar flowers aur chocolate k saath chala gaya..how sweet.

Thank god ar ko mayu k bare mein nai pata chala.

Wow it vz rocking k how sajan helpd mayur to get ready 4 der 1st date wid each odr choice.

Awwwsummmme precap...

Luv
*kulsum*

shooo sweeet

tumhare comment na parhlu to neeend nhe ati bye god

take care dear

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sehrish

@sizzysehrish

Sparkler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#298

Originally posted by: arunabehere

date je idea ko jaise phrase kiya hai

i just loved it

Too nice ab to sirf date ka wait hai

plzz update soon

will updte sooon

thnx for comments

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sehrish

@sizzysehrish

Sparkler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#299

Originally posted by: aashizin
hey dear superb update loved sajan's help to mayur and can't wait for mayur's date and sajan's movie do continue soon and thanks for pm

thnx a lot dear

u r so sweet

will updte sooon