do dil ek jaaan #2 ~~~~~~~part34 pg 142 - Page 29

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Posted: 15 years ago
welll on saturday or may be tomorow
actually kal un i me full dayhogi na till 11 pm at nyt due to papers so will try
warna saturday ko to pakka pakka
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sizzlingsis

welll on saturday or may be tomorow

actually kal un i me full dayhogi na till 11 pm at nyt due to papers so will try
warna saturday ko to pakka pakka

no problem...... both friday and saturday would do for me
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Posted: 15 years ago

ok thn it wuld be in saturday

as i dont want to make u wait

but saturday pakka

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sizzlingsis

ok thn it wuld be in saturday

as i dont want to make u wait

but saturday pakka

ok.......
saturday would be perfect
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Posted: 15 years ago

Part 22

Mayank came back to home and directly went to gunjan room

G: bhai tum yaha aur itni der se kaha the

Mayank without answering hugged her

G: bhai kia hua aj kuch ziada hi khush lagrahe ho bhabhi maaan gaye kia

M: ha meri pyari behena nupur maaan gaye aj me buhat buha zyada khush hu

G: wooooooooooowwwwwwwww to humari bhabhi maaan gaye finally per kaise

Thn mayank told her all the scene and listening this gunjan was happy

G: oh to mjhe treat milni chaye right bro

M: ha to bol kia chaye tmhe

G: hmm abhi to apne pyare haaatho se ek cup coffee hojaye

M: sure abhi laya

G: ok

Then mayank left and make two cups of coffee

And bring it to gunjans room

G: thnx bhai

M: mntion not

G: waise bhai nupur ab kaise hai means usko jo chot ayi thi

M: thk thi

G: tum ne use call karke pucha

M: oh wo to me bhul hi gaya abhi karta hu but aj pta hai me buhat khush hu yr aj mjhe mera pyar mil gya hai

G: khush kismet ho k tumhe tmhara pyar

Gunjan becomes sad listening to it

M: are udaas nhe ho tumhe bhi tumhara pyar mileyga

Gunjan becomes shocked as how cum he knw abt it

G: kia keh rhe ho

M: e jaaanta hu k tum samrat se pyar karti hu

G: but kaisie ( in complete shock)

M: tum kia samjhti ho k me apni behen ki feelings nhe jaanta kia

G: oh thnx bro but pta nhe wo mjh se pyar karta hoga k nhe

M: is ke liye tmhe sahi waqt ka intezaar karna hoga

Gunjan hugged mayank

Shilpa aunty came to gunjan room but stopped at door to listen their convo

G: to tum jaldi jak bhabhi ko call karo warna aj hi maani hai aj hi bigar jayegi

M: ha baba karha hu

G: bye good nite

M: good nite

MM went from there

Mayank went to his room

And thn he called nupur

Nupur who was waiting for his call immediately received it

M: hi jan!!!

N: hi mere pyare mayu

M: tum kaisi ho ab

N: me thik hut um sunao

M: kia sunao aj kal to kismet hi kharab hai

N: kyu kia hua tumhari kismet ko

M: bus kia btao tum mili to kismet hi phut gaye

N: kia kaha tmhari to me jao me bt nhe karti

Thn she cut of the phone

N: samjhta kia hai apne ap ko ab to me is se bt nhe karne wali

Thn her cellphone vibrated

There was text msg for her

It was by mayank she angrily picked it up

It was written " soooooooryyyyy dear"

She replied him with a blank msg

Mayank thn aleed her she cancelled it

Abt one hour passed and mayannk was calling her and texting her but she was

not replying

finally mayank got up from his bed and started his bike and directly went to nupurs house

on the way h bought flowers and some chocolates for her

thn he climbed to her balcony

nupur saw someones shadow and becum afraid

as more as he started moving towards her she started fearing more and more

thn he switched on light

nupur at once screamed

n: tum yaha?????????/

listening to her cream armaan and ridhimma kncked at her room

ar: kia hua angel(armaan call nupur as angel)?

N: oh god ab kia karu bro bahir khare hai tum jao

M: oh madam me itni mushkil se ayah u aur tum kehrhe ho k jao wait me bathroom me chup jaata hu

N: ok but be careful

Thn nupur go and opened the door

Ar: angel tum chilayi kyu sab thk hai na

Ridz: ha nupur kia hua

N: kuch nhe bus wo………..wo ha chipkali dekh li maine

Ar: oh me to dar hi gaya tha chalo angel sojao gud nyt sweet dreamz aur ha ek bat btana bhul hi gaya kal tumhara aur mayank kaa hospital me off hai aur samrat aur gunjan ki bhi to un ko inform kardena

N: ok bro and bhabhi gud nyt

Armaaan and ridhimma left

Thn nupur closed the door and take a deep breath

Thn called mayank

N: tum bahar asakte ho ajao

Thn mayank came out

N: kyu aye ho

M: m sorry plz aynda kabhi aisa nhe karunga

N: jao yaha se

M: mayank bent down and give her chocolate and lower

And thn hold his ears and said sorry

N: ok but ayna

Mayank cut her

M: aynda aisa nhe hoga

Thn both hug each other

Thn mayank fed her chocolate

M: to kal humara off hay to phir to kal complete rst karuga

N:by god ! tum to bachpan me hi budhe hogya ho

M: kyu

N: koi off day me ye karta hai

M: to phir kia kar hai( confusingly)

N: oh god choro tum nhe samjhoge

M: samjha k to dekho

N: kia samjhao k apni girl friend ko ……………… khair choro raat hogye hai…….good nyt

M: are naraz kyu horhe ho ………chalo good nyt sweet my dreamz

Thn he started moving

N: (mumbling) by god ktna bara idiot hai

Thn mayank turned around

M: kal sham ready rehna hum date pe chale ge

N: wow date me tayar rahugi

M: bye sweetheart

N: bye

Thn mayank went back to his house and both doses of to sleep

In the morning both mayur wake up early

Malik house

Nupur was tensed as she don't know how to get ready for her first date

So she called samrat

N: hi sam jaldi aja emergency hai

S: kia

N: bus tu aja phir btati hu

S: ok 5 min me ata hu

On other hand mayank called gunjan to help her

Samrat came to nupurs room

S: ha nups kia hua sab thik to hai na

N: ha yr bus ek problem hai

S: kia

N:wo aj mayank ne date k liye bola hai but mconfused k kia karu

On other hand mayank was confused as what to plan for the date

G: kia hua bhai itne tension me kyu laagrhe ho

Thn mayank told her his problem

G: oh to ye baaat hai

M: hmmmm

G: acha ek kaaam karo sab us ki pasand se karo

M: hmmmmm kaise

G: ek kaaam karte hai me tum se kch puchti hut um jawab dete jao

M: ok

G: to use kisa music pasand hai

M: hmmmmmmmm… I thnk soft

G: ok nxt …use konsa colour pasand hai

M: red I knw tht

G: acha nxt use beach pasand hai ya phir party at hotels

M: hmmm I thnk use beach zyada pasand hai wo samrat k saath hamesha wahe jaati hai

G: acha use kaise gifts pasand hai

M: hmmmmmmmm I thnk flowers zyada pasand hai

G: so its done

Tum red shirt pehnna

And arrange a date a beach with soft music playing

Gift her red rose with teddy bear

M: wow wht a nyc plan shukriya sis

G: mention not bhai

S: oh to ye problem hai acha ek baaat bta use konsa color pasand hai

N: hm white

S: ok and dreses

N: pta nhe me short skirt pehnu?

S: nhewear sum thing long

N: hnmmmmmmmm kia

S: ha idea

Wear a long white dress

Keep ur hairs open

And high heels

Light make up

S: wah yr ki idea hai

Frndz wait for date update

Nxt part promo

Mayur date at beach with long drive

Sajan movie at theatre

Frndz thisis it

Nxt part wuld be on Monday

So wait till thn

Luv all

sehrish
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Posted: 15 years ago

no comments........ (actually aaj ke mjht ka influence hai)....... 😆 😆

perfect update par comment kaise karoo........ tu hi bata de na....... 👏
mazza aa gaya update padkar
really well written
the majan talk was rocking
gunjan calling nupur bhabhi was so cute
and mm hearing their talk was the best
mayur convo was so sweet
par nupur naraz ho gayi...... so sad
but mayank kept texting and calling her
and later went to her house....... how romantic
that too with chocolates and flowers
but nupur shouting was scary
the nupur-armaan-ridhima scene was so cute
and then the mayur convo was best
mayank apologizing was cute
and their date plan was rocking
gunjan's advise to mayank abt date was so cool
and samrat's way of dressing up nupur was the best
waiting for the date
i'm dying for monday to come......
p.s- hope you don't mind me requesting some scenes....... but its upto you if you want to put them....... i hope to see a scene where mayank tries to impress armaan
Edited by MjhtFan_Mahima - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

date je idea ko jaise phrase kiya hai

i just loved it
Too nice ab to sirf date ka wait hai
plzz update soon
Edited by arunabehere - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
wah badhya update.. 👏 👏 👏

Mayank vz soo happy wen he vz tellng abt nups

Bro sis hug vz cute.

Mayur phone convo vz nyc..

Awww mayu nups ko manane uske ghar flowers aur chocolate k saath chala gaya..how sweet.

Thank god ar ko mayu k bare mein nai pata chala.

Wow it vz rocking k how sajan helpd mayur to get ready 4 der 1st date wid each odr choice.

Awwwsummmme precap...

Luv
*kulsum*
Edited by kulsumd - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey dear superb update loved sajan's help to mayur and can't wait for mayur's date and sajan's movie do continue soon and thanks for pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
loved the part cont. soon

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