*~When Opposites Attract~* [Rahul Muskaan] - Page 5

interesting.. cant wait to read more:D add me to the pm list plz:D

Originally posted by: dhruvikaluvsKSG

lovely part

Thanks dear!!!!😃

Im happy u liked it!!! TC😊

Originally posted by: kasuforever1

Woww Dear Nice Upd. Seems Precap Will Be Awesome..

Jus Cont. Soon..

Thanxzz For The PM..! 😊

Thanks a lot!!!!! 😳

I'l try my best to make it awesome. Hope ul like that tooo😉
Yes i will asap😃

No, problem! Im just glad u liked it😊😊

Originally posted by: brainychild92

interesting.. cant wait to read more:D add me to the pm list plz:D

Thank u sooooooo muchhh!!!!😃
Im glad u liked it.😳

I definitely will. TC😊

awesome first part, Aly!!! =D

Originally posted by: -Lush-

awesome first part, Aly!!! =D

i loved the way you described RM's background and relationship with their family, and the details and dialogue was great! ahhh, their trying out for the same job. uh ohhh. lolz, can't wait till the next part!! your doing a wonderful job!!

lots of love,

Sabz

Awww!!!! Im flattered😳. That was such a sweeeet comment Sabz.🤗 Thanks a ton😃

That really means a lot to me. Im extremely glad u liked it.😃

Yup!!! they r trying out 4 d same job,😆 so theres gonna b a lot of entertainment from the time they first meet😉. Wont keep u waitin tooo long, I promise.😊

Thanks again!!!!!🤗

Recap:Muskaan stuck in the traffic. She has to sell her dhanno and she gets Rs8000for it. Meanwhile we see Rahul as a focussed person, he helps in getting groceries for the house, hates anyone touching his hair and being called bachcha by Ridz. He plays a small prank with his neice n has to be sorry for it later. He gets a call letter for an interview at Poise magazine. Muskaan finds her mom fussing over her brother and tries to stop her. Her mom brings up the topic of her marriage and she avoids it. Aman gives her the interview letter and she is excited.

PART 2

The Next day.

The Garewals are at the table having breakfast. Akshita's plate was still as full as it was 10 minutes ago. Rahul finished his breakfast and got up to leave the table.

Ridz: Arrey yeh kya? Tune toh kuch bhi nahi khaya. Chal baith and have some more.

Rahul: No bhabhi. Im done. Aur waise bhi, mujhe interview ke liye tayyar hona hai. So I got to get going. Aap mujhe chodo aur is prankster se kaho ki apna nashta jaldi khatam kare. (And he goes to get ready)

Ridz: Theres no use telling her anything. Woh agle ek ghante tak yahin baithne wali hai.

Akshita: Mom you know me soooooo well. Im impressed!!!😉

Ridz: Shut up! Aur jaldi kha. Waise Rahul, Its just 8o'clock why are you hurrying so much? Interview toh 10 baje hai na?

Rahul: Bhabhi aap jaanti hai ki mujhe kahin bhi jaldi pahonchne ki aadat hai. Aur yahan toh aadha time traffic mein hi phasse rehte hain. By the time I reach Bandra it'l be exactly 10. (he said from the other room)

He is ready in 15 minutes and comes out looking dashing as ever!!!!! He is wearing a black formal shirt and black pants (like the one he wore in the 5^th march scene)😉

Akshita: Wow chachu!!! Ur looking so hot.

Ridz: Exactly!!! Who log toh samjhenge ki koi naya model aaya hain unki company ke liye. Haiiyye mere bachche ko kisi ki nazar na lage.😳

Rahul: OMG Bhabhi. Can u stop being sooo dramatic.

Ridz: Kyun? Sirf Sonia hi tujhe handsome bula sakti hai?😛

Rahul: OH puhleaseee. Woh ladki toh peeche hi pad jaati hai. Anyways, Im leaving now. OK Bye!!!

Akshita: Bye chachu. All the best.👍🏼

Ridz: Ya All the Best!!! And Take care. Go safely.

Rahul: OK. Thanks a lot! Bye bhaiyya, bye bhabhi & bye Akshi!!!!😊

About 2-3 buildings away, Muskaan was still fast asleep in her bedroom. The alarm rang half an hour back, but she shut it off and went back to sleep. Her mom walked in sometime later.

Jasmeet: Arrey Muski abhi tak nahi uthi tu? Bhool gayi kya interview ke liye jaana hai.

But when she goes nearby she sees Muskaan muttering in her sleep.

Muskaan: Main Naina Catherine Kapoor Patel aur yeh thi meri kahaani!!!!😆

Jasmeet: Haiyee rabba!!! Kya hoga is kudi ka?😕 (She then bends down and shakes her) Arrey meri jhalli Priety Zinta!!!! Sapno ki duniya se bahar nikal, kyunki tu Naina Catherine Kapoor Patel nahi, Muskaan Kaur Chaddha hai, jisse aaj 9:45 baje interview ke liye jaana hai. Aur 8:30 toh baj chuke hai.

Muskaan: (Wakes up startled) Oye teri!!!!!!😲😲😲 Mummy main toh bhool hi gayi. Ab toh rajdhani ke speed se tayyar hona padega.

Saying so, Muskaan runs into the bathroom. She somehow gets ready in 20 mins and comes out wearing a lavender salwaar-kameez. Her mom and Aman are at the breakfast table.

Jasmeet: Aa gayi!!! Waise mujhe zyaada dikhai nahi de raha hai, par main jaanti hoon, tu bahot soni lag rahi hai.

Aman: Haan ma! Didi bahot sundar lag rahi hai. Unhone salwaar-kameez jo pehena hai.

Muskaan: Hey brother! Main toh hamesha sundar lagti hoon. Anyway, mujhe late ho raha hai. Chalo Bye!!!

Jasmeet: Arrey aise kaise ja rahi hai? Ek sandwhich toh kha ke ja. Warna kahin chakkar aake tu gir gayi toh uthanewala koi nahi rahega.

Muskaan: Ufffo ma!! Chakkar-wakkar kuch nahi aayega. Don't worry, main baad mein kuch kha loongi. Ok bye!!!

And she turns to leave, but byt the time she reaches the door, Aman comes upto her running and gives her a sandwhich.

Aman: Rickshaw mein kha lena. Ab jaldi bhaago. All the Best!!!👍🏼

Muskaan: How sweet!!!!!! 😳(she kisses his forehead) Thanks Aman! Bye. Bye ma.

Jasmeet: Bye puttar. All the best. Apna khayal rakhna.

At the bus-stop there is a long queue. Rahul is 3^rd in line and has been standing there for the past half an hour, but theres no sign of a bus. Finally he decides that he needs to take an auto if he has to reach in time. So he waves out to an auto-rickshaw which he sees coming that way. Muskaan is standing on the divider trying to cross the road and stop an auto at the same time. The auto stops and she comes running whereas Rahul is entering it from the other side.

Rahul & Muskaan together: "Borivli station chalenge?"

Rickshaw driver: (looks confused and amused simultaneously)😕 Theek hai, baitho.

Just then on the other side of the road, an accident takes place. A bike crashed into a vegetable vendor's cart and so theres a huge commotion.(Disaster toh hona hi tha, after all its RM who meet for the 1st time😉)

Seeing Rahul and the driver distracted, Muskaan enters the rickshaw.

Muskaan: Chalo bhaiya!

Rahul: (coming back to where he was) Excuse me!!!! I called for the auoto first. Yeh mera auto hai. (he said angrily)😡

Muskaan: Lekin main already baith chuki hoon. Toh yeh mera auto hai. (she casually replied)😛

Driver: Bura mat manaiye, par abhi tak toh yeh mera hi auto hai aur kisi ka nahi.😆

Rahul: Arrey haan bhaiya. Lekin inse kaho ki yeh doosra auto le kyunki maine aapko roka tha.

Muskaan: Oye dekh!!! Mujhe bahot late ho raha hai. Doosra auto lena hai toh tum le lo. (she said frustrated)

Rahul: Jee nahin!!!! (And he got in and sat down) Late mujhe bhi ho raha hai. So im sorry, but you have to get down. (he said trying to keep his cool)

Muskaan: I wont (she said acting stubborn)

Rahul: You will. You have to!!!! (he retorted being equally stubborn)

Muskaan: I wont. Kya karoge?

Driver: Arrey sirjee aur madam jee aap dono ko station hi jaana hai, toh main dono ko leke jaata hoon. Itni si baat ke liye aap subah-subah jhagda kyun kar rahe ho?🤪

And he starts driving. Rahul n Muskaan both wanted to say something but kept quiet as both of them were getting late. However, seated at the extreme ends they kept giving dirty looks to each other.

Muskaan: (to herself) Haiye Rabba!!! Din ki shuruaat aise. Please koi aur gadbad na ho. Bas yeh interview acche se jaaye. Aap sambhal lena ok babaji.

Rahul: (to himself) Yeh bus ki problem bhi aaj hi honi thi. I hope I reach in time.

Muskaan: Arrey bhaiyyaji!!! Aap kitna slow chala rahe ho. Jaldi bhagao na. Late ho raha hai.

Driver: OK madamji. Ab dekho hamara kamaal.😉

Then he starts driving really fast and takes an immediate right turn, which makes Muskaan fall sideways on Rahul😳. For a moment, both are shocked as to what happened.😲However when she tries to get up, her hair gets stuck in Rahul watch. And she falls back again.😉

Muskaan: Ouch!!!! Mere baal. Aaah!!!

Rahul: Arrey kya kar rahi ho tum??😕 Utho!!!! (He said trying to push her away asap)

Muskaan: Abey oye!!!😡 (she yelled inspite of the pain) Ek toh khud aisi bakwaas ghadi pehni hai aur upar se tu mujhe suna raha hai!!!😡

Rahul: Bakwaas ghadi?????????😕 And anyway, its your fault! Why did you have to fall on me?😡

Muskaan: (totally frustrated now) I didn't fall on purpose.😡😡😡 Did you not see the steep turn this guy took? Ab yeh jaldi se nikaal do. Mujhe bahot dard ho raha hai. (she demanded)

Muskaan was sitting straight by now, but Rahul's right hand was up in the air, near her head. He tried removing the 3-4 strands of her hair that were entwined in his watch strap, but it was taking too long. So he got irritated and just pulled his hand away.😆 Thus pulling her hair, breaking it and making her scream in pain.

Muskaan: Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You Idiot!!! What do you think youre doing???????😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡 (she asked angrily)

Rahul: (not paying any attention to the curses she was giving him) Eeeeeewwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!!🤢 Yeh baal hai, ya gai ka chaara. Gawddd!!!! How do I get this off my watch????????😆😆😆

Muskaan: How dare you!!!!!!!!! Yeh apna attitude mujhe mat dikhao!!!! Bahot dekhe hain maine tum jaise👎🏼. Ek toh khud galati karte ho aur phir mere baalon ko dosh dete ho.

Rahul: Listen, just shut up. Ab jo hona tha, ho gaya! Mujhe aur behes nahi karni.

Muskaan: Tumhara matlab hai main behes kar rahi hoon? Haan bolo, main behes kar rahi hoon? Tumhe kya lagta hai, ki main akeli hoon to tum mera faiyda uthaoge?😆

Rahul: Kyaaaaaaaaaaa??????😕 Yeh tum kya bakwaas kar rahi ho?????? Tum hosh mein toh ho?

Muskaan: Oye piddhe kahin ke!!!! Main toh hosh mein hoon, lekin agar tere hosh na udaoon, toh mera naam bhi Muskaan nahi.

Rahul: (to himself) Yeh main kahan phas gaya? God save me. Itna meetha naam aur itni teekhi zabaan!!!

Muskaan: Kuch kaha tumne????????

Driver: Lo ji station aa gaya!!!! (and he stopped the auto)

Rahul: Thank God!!! Yeh lo aapke paise.

Driver: Sirf dus rupiye???😕

Rahul: Toh baaki ke dus yeh dengi na!!! Yeh bhi toh baithi thi.

Muskaan: Haan toh de rahi hoon na! Main thodi kahin bhaagne wali hoon paise leke. Yeh lo (and she gives him the money)

They both get off the auto and look at each other with so much hatred that if looks could kill, theyd both be dead by now😡😡😡. Walking towards the station, theyre thinking;

Rahul: Chalo, finally jaan chuti!!!! Ab bas train jaldi se mile so that I reach on time.

Muskaan: Jee toh kar raha tha us kaminey ko patak patak ke maaroon.Mujhse panga le raha tha!!! Agar aur ek baar mil jaye na…toh use chodungi nahi….. Waise usko phirse milna hi kaun chahta hai? Muskaan thand rakh thand. Aur ab sirf job ke baare mein soch. Patah nahi ab yeh train mein kaise sandwhich hoke jaana padega!!!

So that was part2. Hope you guys liked it. Im looking forward to your comments and suggestions. And if you liked it don't forget to hit the LIKE button. THANKS!!!!😳

Luv,❤️

Alyesha!😊

PRECAP: Kya phirse hoga zameen aasmaan ka aamna-saamna???

And the Job goes toooooooo……………………………………….

Janne ke liye, intezaar karo mere agle PM ka!!!!😉

I will be out of town for about a month. So im really sorry I wont be able to update the FF for that period.😔 However, if I do get a chance to , I promise I surely will.😳 Im really really sorry to disappoint u guys. Please gussa mat hona!!!😔

Love u All !!!!

🤗~ Alyesha~🤗

PM list updated on PG 1😃

OMG ALy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I am just loving your writing style
hehe 5 th March hayye want to see that scene again!! aur rahul always looks hot lol
hehe sonia the creeper 😆
i luv Akshi yaar she is just soo cuteeeeeeee

ok Now to muski bilkul filmy hai humari muski😆😆
int ke din bhi sapne lol hehe agar chakar aake ghir bhi jaye tho humara rahul hai na to catch her😉
yay!!!!!!!!!! RM meeeeeeeeet aur milte hi jagda and accident
thik kaha yeh tho hona hi tha😆😆😆
awwww the fall😳
😆😆😆 i can soo imagine muski screaming and going on with her galiyaan lol
poor auto wala yaar till the station he had to listen to their galiyan😆😆
oooooo yeh dono tho phir milenge hi i soo want to see agli baar milenge tho kya hoga😆😆


aww Aly understand enjoy and time mile tho update kardena

loads of luv
little dadima🤣