AR- 'Inside these Brick Walls' Pre-cap Page 7!!

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~Its a tale of Beauty and the Beast. The Man who is living inside his own world, full of hate and isolation. She was brought to save him, save him from himself and his inevitable fate. She was meant to show him something which he thought he had lost, but really chose to ignore- his humanity. She has to capture his heart, she just has to...there are more lives entwined in this story.~

Riddhima Gupta: A shy, conservative, 24 year old girl from the hill station of Malanpur. Living inside her dream world of books, and intellectual endevours, she has never considered the thought of marriage. Love has always been her ideal, but something she knew she couldn't find admist the townspeople of Malanpur. She always knew her destiny lay outside of the hill station, but she never imagined, destiny can play creul games on those who keep such faith in it.
Armaan: A 27 year old, wealthy, estate owner. He lives on the outscurts of Malanpur, in his family estate surronded by acres and acres of land. His parents had died a long time ago, right afer his birth and he was raised by his grandmother. Unfortunately she passed when he was 18, and his spoiled attitude turned him into a heartless, self-centered individual. Although not a beast from the outside, his heart has become stone and his life meaningless. He lives in misery and hate and his inner self has become a beast.
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Malik Estate
Malanpur Hill Station
Gupta Residence
~Our Story Now Begins...A tale of passion, love and the chase to save the human spirit ...~
*Hey guys a little intro hehe...please tell me if you would like to continue. I would hope to write something not only dramatic and full of romance/passion...but something compelling that attempts to touch a bit of your heart 😳 and also for any of you who want to imagine Riddhima as Suku/Shilpa please go right ahead! I just put Kajen cuz they are my fav, but i love the other two as well :)
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Part 1- page 5
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Posted: 15 years ago
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"Curse you and all you stand for! Hate, misery, vanity...may you never feel what it is to be loved, may you never win someone's heart. The day will come when you thirst for someone's affection and may you never recieve it."

He stared at her face for sometime, decapitated, hideous and grotesque. "Crazy old woman," he muttered under his breath as he began to shut the door.
"It wouldn't be wise you know," she warned him, something eerie coming over her voice.
"It would be wise if you never had asked me for shelter in the first place," he retorted.
"You couldn't offer me shelter, you have shown that only vanity and pride is within you heart...but you must remember son, that pride is the fall of a great many."
He couldn't take it anymore, she had done enough, daring to taunt him on his own estate. He slammed the door shut on her, stood there for a moment and then turned around to see his servants standing in the large foyer. They began to walk away one by one, but suddenly the lights began to flicker and finally gave out to the darkness.
"Whats going on?!" he spat at his servants. None of them answered, he turned around to go out and check the main switch himself but the door wouldn't open. He tried and tried again but to no avail, he was trapped! Trapped inside his own home!
Then her voice filled the room, "I asked and you never let me in, and now you will never be able to get out, everyone can leave, except you...the day you learn to lose your pride and selflessy learn to love someone else, is the day these doors shall open...remember the enchentress's curse."
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Posted: 15 years ago
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plz counti very intresting intro waiting 4 update
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Posted: 15 years ago
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thank you i just added a small background intro :). I will tonight most likely.
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plz do comment guys if u dont think this concept will flow well :)
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Posted: 15 years ago
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its very interesting please do continue soon.......
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Posted: 15 years ago
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interesting intro........
continue soon.........

pm me...........with the update
bye
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Interesting concept n the part
Do PM me when you update
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will do as well :). can i save u guys on some sort of list? so i dont have to pm and go back and type names every time?
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey welcome to the FF forum and hope to see an update soon. The intro sound very interesting!

Nahida

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