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@I-love-dmg

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: PheliNazar
zoeeeeeeeee sis
me reserving first read then unres! kk
luv yaaaa
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first big hugs to zoah for forcing zoe to do this cuz she is an awsome writer!!next thanks for the dedication, i'm sooo honoured sis!!🤗 and i bet the rest would be too!!anyway love the name of the story so different and unique! now love the begining but i'm confusedthough once the story starts to flow i'll understand!😆,... I'm sure you'll rock this ff and oh yeah no probz first uni than this okay! so don;t worry we will always support you!!
aww zoah is nupurs chadddi bhuddy how cute na!!,,,but swear to god when you said chuddi buddi that made me laugh sorry kya karoon!
Okay now i hope you updt soon but don't worry if you can't okay!!
luv yaaaaaaaaa
-sanam-

hehehehhe.... thanxs Sana!!!
hehehe yeh i kno i laughed when i wrote that chaddi buddy part! it jus sounds funny! hehhe
what part are you confused bout? maybe i can clarrify it or you will understand as the story progresses...

thanxs for being so supportivee! Sanuuu!!
love loadsss
xxxxx

p.s. this is soo cool... so far two of my IF bestfrenz have replied on the first page! hehehe awesomee!!!

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Faria Ferdousi

@Faria.

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#12

Nice start Zoe.
loved it.
plz continue it.
and count me in ur pm list

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amrutha,akhila

@ammuakhi

Navigator

Posted: 15 years ago

#13

great start zoe....

do continue n add me to your pm list...😊

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Divya

@myownarea

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#14

Zoe!! 🤗
glad to c that u have opened an FF ..Fab!!:)
I loved this part :)
I m looking fwd to read the rest of the parts!! :)

cheers
Divya

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Hgrhrnwl

@hgrhr

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#15

its mayur and you can count me in..!
hehe
do continue soon...
and add me to the PM list...

P.S. Loved the Peter Facinelli as the doc mention..! ;-)

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Mahak

@FragranceOfLove

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#16

Thanks Zoah for pushing her!

i am so happy that u have started a new ff!

and besides its for all of us!

i am honored by your dedication!

i really can't believe this!

and i never knew that u write so well!

i am so damn shocked!

u never told me that u write!

and that too so exceptionally well!

and Zoah is here too!

she is chaddi buddy? that made me laugh! sorry!

I just loved the start!

u described it like awesome!

loved it........

and by the way, i am a little hurt.....where is my name in the pm list? don't talk to me now! u shud have had taken me as a default reader....

and i know that u would rock this ff!

do continue soon.....

and i am there if u need anything.....there for u!

love u loads,
Mahak