Mayur FF: No One to Trust - Page 7

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Posted: 15 years ago
#61
Hey...very nice CS dear....

loved Mayur's characters.....

seems very interesting.....

cont soon...

love u...
varsha


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Posted: 15 years ago
#62
Hehe would love to read this, mafia and gangster, never read such stories man.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#63

nice character sketch.continue soon dear.looking forward to the update.😃

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Posted: 15 years ago
#64
really nice concept
do cont sooooon
n tnx fr da pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
#65
Heyyyy shreya
Lovely cs
PlZzz continue soon
N thanx for pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
#66
lovley cs
waitng fro the update soon update and pm me ok
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey friends... I hope, you all remember that I introduced the concept and character sketch for this new FF. Agar bhul gaye ho, then plssssssssss.... forgive me for this much late start.


Ok, now I am stopping my blabbering and you can read the first part straight..




PART 1:


In some small outhouse away from city in America:


The out house is being guarded by 2 guards. They are going back and forth turn by turn to make sure, no one can enter the place and no one can exit the place. They know very well that if they did any single mistake, their life is in mortal danger by their boss RV only.


Nupur is sitting in one small room of the outhouse. The room is stinking. "Oh God! Pata nahi, is place se kese jaan bacha ke bhagugi. Abhi thodi der me guard khana leke ayega. Us waqt koi idea lagana hoga. Aur uske baad mujhe jaldi se jaldi Mr. Sameer Malhotra ke paas pahochna hoga. Kahi esa na ho ki vo meri wait kar rahe go, aur me yahi par RV ki personal jail me sad rahi hu. Nahi.. RV. Me tumhe kabhi tumhare irado me kamiyaab nahi hone dungi. Chahe uske liye mujhe apni jaan kyu na deni pade. Khatro se me nahi darti. After all I am Nupur Bhushan. RV, if you think that like other people, I will beg in front of you, for my life, then you are under the false impression. Finally, you have found your match in this game of life and death. Who can fight with you and still live.



In one office cabin in city Delhi:


Two persons are sitting on opposite chairs.


P1: Look, please try to understand. Mr. Sameer wants to meet you. At least meet him.


P2: Mr. Sameeer asked you to explain me, didn't he?


P1 (Hesitating): Actually... he just told me to talk to you..


P2: In helping him. No, Samrat, I can't do that. You know me. I have already decided that now onwards I want to spend my life peacefully.


S: But Mayank, he really wants to talk to you. This may be important, you know.


M: I can't believe this, Samrat. What does he exactly want?


S: That only he can tell you. I will not be present while he talks to you.


M: Thanks for that help at least. But where is he? It's almost time now.


S: He must be here in minute.


Knock...Knock.


The door opened.


A person in his 40's entered.


P: Good morning.. Gentelmen.


M&S: Good morning.


Sameer: Ok, now I am here. I need your help, Mayank.


M: Sorry, Mr. Sameer... But me yaha par sirf aap ko ye kehne ke liye aya hu ki me ye case hath me nahi le sakta.


Samrat: Excuse me guys. I am going outside for some time. I think you need to discuss your case in private.


Mayank: Sure.


Sameer looked hopefully to Samrat that may be he can help in persuading Mayank.


Samrat: No. Mr.Sameer, Mayank is my best friend, but I won't interfere in his proffessional life. Sorry to disappoint you.


Sameer: Ok, I understand.


Samrat left the cabin.


M: Ok, So I think, my point is quite clear. I have decided to leve this line and live peacefully.. So I can't take your case in hand.


S: You have no idea what is the case, Mr. Mayank. This is the golden opportunity for me. Since last 15 years, I have been waiting for this opportunity. RV agar is baar bhi hath se nikal gaya to me nahi janta ki baad me kab esa chance milega?


M (Narrowing his eyes): RV? Ranvijay Rathore?


S (Relaxed as he showed interest): Haan... Ranvijay Rathore. The mafia king.. The most difficult drug distributor.


M: Sorry, I am not interested.


S: Please, Mr. Mayank, us ladki ne kaha he ki agar hum udki thodi help karege, to uske paas kuchh saboot he, jiski vajah se RV ko hamare pichhe India ana hi hoga.


M: No ways. RV will not leave America at any cost. He knows that he is safe there. And in India, he is MOST WANTED in every state or say, every city. I don't think, he will leave America for anything.


S: Miss Bhushan told that he wants something badly, that is with her right now. He will come anywhere in world to get that thing, what ever it is.


M: And what does she want in return?


S: Fake ID to live in Australia, once she gets rid of this RV.


M: Where is she right ow? Don't you think all this must be a trap to get you, the most honest CBI agent?


S: I am not that famous as you are describing.


M: Yes. You are. I know this because I was one of them. They know that you are the only one who is damn honest and who can't be bought by green notes.


S: What ever. But I need your help right now.


M: That sounds like a trap for you to me. Sorry, I don't want to join.


S: Don't you want revenge for your two hired persons that were killed because of RV?


Mayank clenched a fist.


S: See, we both will get what we want. Just help me, Okay?


M: Who is this.. Miss..Umm... Bhushan? She may be a trap set by RV itself. I don't think you should trust her.


S: I trust her. She is in need... Badly. She wants help soon.


M: How can you say that this is not a trap?


Sameer shrugged.


M: See? Even you are not sure.


S:I don't want to lose this chance.


M: Sorry, I am on retirement vacation.


S: Please. Help me with this


Mayank thinks for 10 minutes.


M: Ok, I will help you, Mr. Sameer.


Mr. Sameer relaxed and heaved a great sigh of relief. "Thanks Mr. Mayank. I can't thank you enough.. How will I ever.."


Mayank cut him.. "But I have a few conditions of course.."


S: Of course, anything you say.


M: Firstly, I don't trust this Miss Bhushan at all. I am 101% sure that this is a trap. I am joining because I can't stay away from problems for a long time. I need some problem.


S: So?


M: So if I would have any doubt at all, I will leave you alone in this MISSION RV. Ok?


S: Ok, and other?


M: We will work in my manner. I don't think you are involving CID officially, right?


S: Right. I am working on my own.


M: Ok, so you can't call or meet anyone without asking me. I don't want to take any chances. Ok?


S: Umm... alright.


M: Ok. Where should we go first?


S: To meeet Miss Bhushan...


Mayank made a face again.... "And where is this Miss Bhushan waiting for us?"


S: She has given me an address. It's in America. Shikago. We have to go there.


M: I am telling you this is a trap for sure. Why should she still wait for RV to kill her in USA? Can't she run away and come to India?


S: May be she can not use her passport because of threat of RV. You know USA police is already in RV's control.


M: So we will have to go there, save her and bring her to India via private plane or helecopter?


S: I think so.


M: Ok. When we have to meet her?


S: Tomorrow night.


M: Why should she pick up night time to meet a stranger. I don't think I can trust her.


S: Oh. Please Mr. Mayank. Tell me when and how we are going?


At that time, door of cabin opens and Samrat peered in.


M: I will meet you after 2 hours at air-port. I would hire a private jet.


Samrat: Hey, you are joining then?


M: Yup.. Your friend convinced me in spite of some doubts. I am pretty sure both of us are going to meet a trap and meeting our death there.


Samrat. Chill, dude. You know that you are going because this is your passion. You like dangerous problems, right?


M (Sighs): Hmm.. right.


Sameer: Ok, Mr. Mayank. I will meet you in 2 hours.


Mayank: Hey, you can call me only Mayank.


Sameer: Ok. Bye Mayank, Bye, Samrat.


M & S: Bye, Sameer.


In USA Nupur:


Nupur was running to the destination she must reach to meet Mr. Sameer Malhotra, the CID agent. Thank god, he was going to help. Otherwise, there was no any person in the world, who could have helped her to save her life from RV.


She tricked the guard and ran away from there, killing both guards by her chopping trick and grabbing one of their guns.


N: Come on Nupur, you can do it. Just reach to the hill on other side of town and wait for Mr. Sameer.


She tried to leave no any footprints, but it was hard as it was muddy land. She crawled on hands when she thought it is danger in open ground, and continued towards the destination.


Somewhere in America....RV:


RV: What the he**? How could she run? Ran away from RV's personal jail ... just like this? Where were the guards?


Mr. Dayal, who was his assistant and trustworthy person, was standing in front of him looking at floor.


D: Boss, she killed the guards. When the night guards came for duty shifting, they found their dead bodies and her room was empty. So they informed me.


RV: Oh no.. Bloody her... I am the only match for her. No Nupur Bhushan.. You will have to pay for this. I will kill you certainly. It's just a matter of time that when I will kill you?






Ok, that's enough for today. It was not that long but it was long enough I think. I am nervous like anything in writing this one, because t's my first experience in suspense, mystery and thriller. Tell me how was the first part. Hit the Like button if you liked it. I am waiting for your comments.


Love,

$hrey@
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Posted: 15 years ago
#68

Thank God.. u updated.. otherwise, I was all set to forget this FF... Quite interesting... continue fast now!!

Nice update!!!!!😊😊😊
Edited by Divya_kaldivya - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#69
oh my poor nupzi...hope mayu will save her...great update..loved i.t
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Posted: 15 years ago
#70
interesting updt
thanks for the pm

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