Mayur FF: No One to Trust

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Archana

@a-little-hope

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Posted: 15 years ago

#41

Interesting story... please add me to the PM list.

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Varsha

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Posted: 15 years ago

#42

first of all my heartiest congratulations to u on ur new FF dear !!

Now....lovely concept dear.....

i have never read any suspense/ thriller FF......... so would love to read it !!

do cont soon...

love ya...
varsha

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affu123

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Posted: 15 years ago

#43

hey dear ..wen ru gonna start..

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Anamika.5

@Anamika.5

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Posted: 15 years ago

#44

Hey, friends

THANK YOU SO MUCH

to all of you for liking the concept...

I don't know how much justice I will give to this story but I promise to try my best. You know na, this is my first try on suspense thriller story. So bear my mistakes and forgive me for any thing stupid I might do in future.

Ok, here I am posting a little character sketch for the FF:

Character Sketch:-->

Mayank Sharma:
A handsome hunk, never notices any girl… Too much dedicated to his work. He is an old gangster type person. Always wants something to do. Suspicious like anything. Doesn't trust people easily as his life has taught him so much.
Nupur Bhushan:
A girl from rebellion group, who is saving her neck as well as her son's life from a dangerous mafia. A too much suspicious. A good competitor when it comes to hand combat or any gunfight, too.
Ranvijay Rathore aka RV:
A mafia, a famous drug distributor, he wants Nupur and her son badly. He wants to kill Nupur as soon as he gets her. Can do anything to achieve what he wants…
Aditya:
A 5 years old boy around whom all the story will flow except Mayur… Why does RV want Aditya? Read next parts to know that… Aditya loves his mother so much and gets along with people so well.

Other characters will also play some or other interesting role. They will be introduced as the story will proceed.

Ok, so leave your comment.

I will continue as soon as possible...

Love,
$hrey@

Edited by mayurlovers - 15 years ago