MayUr SS: Forgive Me (Epilogue - Page 30)

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ShwePoo

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Posted: 15 years ago

#41

Great part....
WOW!!! Mayank Nupur... Arjun Rati.... Double treat!!
Pls continue soon....!!!

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Divya

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Posted: 15 years ago

#42

this is amazing!!
I loved Mayank and Arjun's interactions
and Nupur is in such an understandable dilemma
but Rati was something else!
Like a miracle -a voice of reason- in the confusing life of Arjun
Fab stuff Akansha!!

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abb01

@abb01

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Posted: 15 years ago

#43

I am really happy after reading it,feeling relived

at last Rati made him to understand ki his father is really feeling guilt

and he should give a chance

only thing is that they should accept them

I loved it and thanks for the PM

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Mahima

@Mahima_13

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Posted: 15 years ago

#44

loved the arti scene........

mayur were tooo cute......

update soon.......

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399703

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Posted: 15 years ago

#45

amazing part AK (If I can call you that :P)

Love your writing style!

x x

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sharanya

@shaaranya

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Posted: 15 years ago

#46

wow akanksha love dis fan fic of yours!!

upd8 soon cant wait

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SunshineGirl6

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Posted: 15 years ago

#47

Awww it was such a a wondeful part..............just loved it....nd appreciate the fact that it was long tooo.....

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pari sharma

@kiarathediva

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Posted: 15 years ago

#48

oh lovely update dear...

i loved it completely it was such a heart touching update..

and arti were just fantabulus..... and of course arjun can drive.. many do the same.....

arti were lyk aweeeeeeee........ mature rati ....... it was so pleasing and gud.........

overall the part was great.....

with luv

pari

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neetu

@mayurg2010

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Posted: 15 years ago

#49

hey akanksha.........very cute and matured talk between the kids.........and dont say me that they are not kids..........because they are just 13 so they are kids...............and my mom used to treat me as kid only when i was 13...........ok please update soon.....................

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sruthi

@mayur.forever

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Posted: 15 years ago

#50

great part akansha...just luved d way arjun n rati conversed...it was really super sweet...their chemistry was really gud....seriously,i feel like i'm rooting for rati n arjun more than mayur😆...fabulous part...luved it akansha...