Arrange Marriage #2 [Mayur] : NTL : Page 147 - Page 21

Wow..!!! Kudos..!!!
This update was better than i had imagined... Too good... Mindblowing... 👏
You have potrayed Mayur's feelings very nicely.... One can actually know what they were going through...
And your description about their outfit was just perfect... I could actually imagine them...
Seriously great....
Hmmmm.... Mayank gonna sing a song...WOW!! Hey.... btw is it that English song you had mentioned earlier???

On the whole, it was a very beautiful update.... I truly loved it........

Hey... You mentioned me at the start...Thanxx yaar..
Also, thanx for bearing with my constant pms..........

You have no idea about how HAPPY I was when I saw that you had updated....!!!!!!!!

P.S. Don worry, I will again start disturbing you for part 2 only after 2-3 days.... hehe.....!!!!! 😉
BTW, I think this is the longest comment I have ever posted...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Continue Writing....Keep Smiling.... Take care.....

Love,
Pooja

wow
loved it
soo cute
mayank must have looked soo hot
so sweet of him to book the whole hotel
contd soon

awesomeeee upd.dear

OMG

amazing update..!
loved the desriptions...
can't wait to witness the song game..!
and i'm curious as to which song he'll sing...hehe
plzzzzzz update soon..!

Waw.......Song 😳 😳 😳
thats really amazing waiting for Mayank 's

lovely update yar 👏 👏 👏

mujhe "Aahista aahista" from Bachana ye hasino or