Arrange Marriage #2 [Mayur] : NTL : Page 147 - Page 22

Mahiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

loved it continue soon don't keep us waiting for long

mind - blowing update mahak.
loved the way gunjan was teasing nupur abt reading the book.
oh my mayank is totally falling for nupur, hayye how dashing would he be looking in black jeans & black shirt.
loved the game samrat suggested, just can't wait to know which song would he be singing.
well i would like the song maula mere maula mere as i like the song very much. its just my pov.
continue soon.

First of all my heartiest congratulations on your new thread mahi !!!



Now.....it was an awesum....mindblowing....superb update dear !!!

It was fantabulous........don't have words to describe what i felt reading this !!!

You really paid off for our such a long wait.....with this wonderful update !!!

loved the way you described Sajan's and Mayur's POV........ it was so natural.....so real......so beautifully described !!!

loved the way ..... Samrat n Gunjan were teasing Mayank n Nupur respectively......it was really cute...... Mayur are really very adorable !!!

Mayur are really irresistable......can't get over them !!! I just love their characters in this FF !!!

the way you described the beginning of the dinner date....the boys thinking about girls...... Gunur entering the hall........was perfect......it was beautiful.......

and the decorations.....whole hall filled with ...white balloons....white candles .....wowww.....thats so romantic...😍..its lovely .....

it was so very naturally described.....that i was able to imagine each n every scene , live each n every moment of the dinner date....with each n every line i'm reading of ur update !!!

you are such a marvellous......fabulous.....superb..... writer dear......your each n every ff becomes so real for me....that i keep on imagining what will happen next.....how will the story proceed....all day....when i'm not online..... i have starting day-dreaming about your FF's yaar..........

I'm just getting crazy about your ffs ....... n especially this one !!! For me this is the most realistic one......n i love it to the core !!!

it was a mindblowing update dear.....


And THANKS a lot dear........for mentioning my name in the previous promo !!!





plz update next part soon......will be eagerly waiting for the next update !!!

I'm dieing to know Mayank's answer.....!!!

Its good that u know a perfect song for Mayur........ because according to me choice is the best !!

there's a song....'' Dil ne tum ko chun liya hai....tum bhi isko chuno na , khwaab koi dekhta hai....tum bhi sapne buno na ''..... its a lovely song ....dear....i would really love if u use this song in any of your ff......even if u don't , then also i wouldn't mind........its just a poor suggestion.........

you use your own liking because its always great !!!

now....i think it already has become so long.......so i should end it up now.....otherwise u'll get bored !!

sorry for taking ur so much time.....

ok...bye n tk cr...

love u...
varsha...

hey mahi awesome mind blowing update...........
i really loved it and i also loved the way u wrote it in the form of pov's ........................its really fab and waiting for mayu's song .....................
and i thought that samrat would drag gunjan to some other place to give some privacy to soon to be couple and for them self........................
but overall the part was awesome......................
waiting for the next part..................

hey mahi!!!

hey mahiii! awesome update
wain for d next one.....
and i am thimkin of a gd questn

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Heya Chco hows ya