MANZIL-The Ultimate Goal[RN]-Part 3/Pg24/14.04.11

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Nisha

@dazzling_glory

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Posted: 14 years ago

#241

Welcome back...its great that you are going to continue with this Fanfic. And this time..update jaldi kar de na.

Update was too good..very emotional.

Naina is worried about Raj as she knows that he has gone on a very dangerous mission..but she has full faith that he will come back to her..like he has always. She also has confidence in his skills and knows that he is a very skilled soldier.

Naina is remebers the past...when she has first seen the emotional side of Rajveer...when she had first heared him confess his love. She could not believe that she was the lucky girl whom he loves so deeply, But later there was no room for any doubt. Alekh and Shalini handled the situation perfectly. But why did you stop there...waiting to know what happened after raj saw naina there.

So jaldi se update kardo yaar...waiting eagerly

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-jia-

@-jia-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#242

Kamini..u there??? go back to page 24 😆

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Esha

@esha143

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Posted: 14 years ago

#243

Originally posted by: -jia-
Kamini..u there??? go back to page 24 😆

haa kamini...jaa rahi hu...😆

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-jia-

@-jia-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#244

Originally posted by: esha143

haa kamini...jaa rahi hu...😆

Chal ab aaja vapis pg 33 par... ya vahi rehne ka irada hai???😆😆

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Esha

@esha143

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Posted: 14 years ago

#245

Originally posted by: -jia-

Chal ab aaja vapis pg 33 par... ya vahi rehne ka irada hai???😆😆

na re...main toh samundar mein dubkiyan laga rahi hu...tum sab kaminis ke saath...aaj kal humaara woh fav. adda ban gaya an😆😆...waise Tahnks for the comment...I'll reply to it in due course...😆

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luvraj4ever

@luvraj4ever

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#246

loveeeeeeeed it...waiting to know the real reason for nandani's comeback.....and plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz bring raj back.....i dont like this long distance relation thing......arre yaaar kam se kam fic mein to raj aur naina ko alag mat karo....lrl kaafi tha....hehehehe

continue soooooooooooooooooooooooooon

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Priya

@Sweet-Lioness

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Posted: 14 years ago

#247

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arey yaar...maine toh pahle hi padh liya tha...!!! magar hua kuch yun k jo yahan par LIKE button hai voh jyada kaam nahi karta...!!! kabhi karta hai toh kabhi nahi karta...ab main kya karun bol...???

aur tere ud se pahle pakka comments kar dungi yaar...!!! thodi si busy thi main...upar se tujhe pata toh hai hi na ke mere sath kitna bhayanak haadsa hua tha...

aur khabardaar jo nahi likhne ki baat kahi toh...taang todd dungi...samjhi...

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Preet

@RadhaKrishan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#248

Agla part post kr de na Siri!!! Please...

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Priya

@Sweet-Lioness

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Posted: 14 years ago

#249

pahle toh tujhe pet bhar ke galiyan dene ka dil karr raha tha...kyoun ke...ud late karne me...tune toh sab ke records ko maat de diya...

vaise ek baat se main baht khush hun...!!! pata hai kya...ab main na tera xample bhi de payungi... sab ko..."mujhe late ud ke liye daantne walo...pahle ja kar Siri ko kuch karo...phir mujhe late kahna...'...ha ha ha...

lekin kya comeback episode tha yaar...maza aa gaya...!!! kafi emotional tha...aur Raj ko le kar mujhe aise emotional scenes achhe lagte hain...

naina kafi shocked thi...par sahi bhi hai...use pata toh chala ke raj use kitna chahta hai...

le ab yeh mission...!!! dekh...kisi ko kuch nahi hona chahiye...varna...mujhe Telugu sikhni padegi...!!! kya hai na...tere hi language se tujhe gali dungi...isiliye...

chal ab phata-phat next part ud karr...