MayUr OS Gallery: OS 19 - Upd Pg. 114 (5/7/2011)

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Nithya

@tellycrazy

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#731

That was one long OS!😃 But hey, I simply loved it. The casanova Mayank and ...how shall I describe Nupur's character- nerdy perhaps😃 Yet it was fun to read the inner turmoil of Nupur. I really liked the tone that you used in the FF and even the occasional jibes at Samrat😆 It would have been kinda interesting to see Samrat's reaction to Nupur's choice of her man😉 If you ever feel like writing a sequel to this OS, please consider this viewpoint.

Hope your studies are going well😊 Do write more OS's.

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Shruti_0505

@Shruti_0505

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#732

this was an amaziong os

specially the last part

the PS cherry on the cake

loved it

plz do write more such os

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Kankshita

@thegameison

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#733

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Lady! 🤗

You're incredible!

I love the OS.

It is mushy, but you know - all of your pieces have a distinct touch. It's your personalized way of writing, you could say. It's very enjoyable to read. And mushy stuff is supposed to bore the hell out of me, but here that's not the case. 😃

-K

Edited by -Kanky- - 14 years ago

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556195

Hibernated

Posted: 14 years ago

#734

amazing os akki
just awesome
loved it

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komal samdariya

@dazedworld

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#735

hey akki........

ths ws jus wow yaar......😃

it ws difrnt but really awsm.........

like i ve no words but jus wow.........👏

hugs n kisses yaar....muwahhhh....🤗

bahut bahut hi pya ra tha...

thnx fr d pm n plz write more......😊

love

komal

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Divya

@myownarea

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#736

Akssss!!! 🤗 🤗 🤗

I m grinning like a fool sitting in my office in between sorting out a critical situation and all blame goes to u :D but u know what I m not complaining, infact I m just so happy that I got to read this...I love Ur Oss...MN ones...(not just the kissing sweety..Rolls eyes) ...everything abt this makes sense u kno..the kind that can actually happen.. and some of ur references...hmmmppp!! I told u u sound older than u r!! but its all good esp when u get to read a lovely love story :) Having fallen rather hopelessly in love from being a practical person who should know it better than me :)

Loved it akki...Love ya 🤗

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x.Heena.x

@x.Heena.x

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#737

I LOVE your Work....its always sooo real, soo funny, so emotive...Im always waiting to know what happens next...once I start reading I can't stop until it's over!

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.SilentPrincess

@.SilentPrincess

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#738

Exellent Os Akansha... Really enjoyed reading it... I thought maybe in the end Mayank breaks her heart... ut he didn't...😃 But awesome shot ...👏

Loved it....😳

-Laiba

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kirti123

@kirti123

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#739

wow had a huge smile seeing ur pm

lovely os

something different

enjoyed reading it

hope u continue ur ffs also soon

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459718

Suspended

Posted: 14 years ago

#740

Akki, this is Beautiful, i had a huge smile on my face the whole time reading it. The style you have chosen to write this OS through is quite different and uniqe! Mayank sharma is so cute here....i love him.😳 I was smiling like a fool reading it😆

Thank you for sharing.

Sajjal

Edited by -Sajjal- - 14 years ago