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Posted: 15 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: rose.mn

Adi new SS wowwwww
Its nice yaar, i liked this one.........
am so sorry for being so late
but do cont soon...........wanna read ahead now...........


hi rabi
it 's ok your comment matter for me
i am happy you like it
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Posted: 15 years ago
#62
just caught up with this FF

oh first i thot Mayank loves her n is happy to meet her
but he s ill treating her 😲
shocking ..but gr8 update!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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part 3

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nupur was unconcious and maynk was watching her she was frowning in her deep sleep ..........

may he called his office and tell them that he and nups are not coming office today.

he saw nups who was in deep sleep ....he remember all the moment which he spend with her .the time when they were not enemyies,the time when he love to tease her , to pemper her......

flashback
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nupur was very poor in cooking she does not even know how to make coffee or tea ..only know to drink it...

but today she was cooking for her best friend maynk..because today is nups birthday..
gunjan was telling her not to do this because she know it when ever she trying her hand in cooking the kitchen was not able to handle her cooking gujan have to clean the kitchen and this taken two or three days to sort the mess which nups create....

gun- nups tu kya kar rahi hai.aaj to tera b'day hai phir tu kyo maynk ke liye halwa banaa rahi hai....ulta maynk ko tere liye halwa banana chayia ......

nups- di ,vo kya hai na ,mein maynk ko apne b'day per gift dena chati hoon mere haation se bana hoon world ka best yummy halwa ,kabhi kabhi apne birthday per doosre ko bhi gift dena chayia......na is liye....

gun- nupur mein teri help ker doongi tu muje bata tu bus muje dekh le ke mein kassie karti hoon ye kaam....

nu- no way di,aaj to halwa mein he bana ne wali hoon .or mene is ke respee bhi learn ker li hai...... ab plz tum jao muje disturb mat karo tum janti hoon na ke mein jaldi bhool jaogi ab tum jao........ jao she push gujna outside and lock the door........
gu-arre door per lock kyo laga rahi hai.......

nu- vo kay hai na tum aaj muje disturb mat karo mein mere maynk ke liye khud halwa banana chati hoon.......

guujan hear her saying my maynk......and then she does not speak .......

after half an hour maynk and sam too came ........

gun- maynk aaj tumhare liye surprise hai......

may- mere liye kyo ? birthday to nups ka hai to phir mere liye kya surprise hai......

gun- well mein nahi nupur batygi ..........

sam- chasmish kya mere liye bhi koi surprise hai...he said in very romantic mood.......

gun- ha hai ,she showed him a thapad with angry look.......

well ab nups ke entry hoti hai......she has the bowl of halwa in her hand .......

nup- tnata .........sab shaant ho jaye or aaj ke birthday girl aa chuki hai apne gift ke saath.......well ye jo aaj ka gift hai this will add a new feather in my cup......

arre mein smart hoon,intelligent hoon,hot bhi hoon......perfect hoon or aaj to mein cookin bhi sikh li hai ....ab muje mein koi kami nahi hai.....

sam and maynk both shriked together - kyaaaaaaaaaaaa............. they both jumped from their chair....

gun- ha yahi to surprise tha ........... nups stop him in middddddd......

nup- arre tum dono abhi itne khush ho rahey to mein imagine ker sakti hoon ke isse khane ke baad to tum or bhi khush hoge........

sam- arrey nupur tum muje pehle hi bata deti to mein ghar se breakefast karke nahi aata or aaj to mein access mein he load ker liye sorry he make a sad face......

(nupur was sad )

may- arre y nupur bahi breakfast karke aaye hai mein nahi mein jarur kahoga ...or vasse bhi tum koi bhi cheez bano or vo achi na ho ye to ho he nai sakta.......

nupue serve him the halwa.......
maynk took the first sppon and taste it........

nupur and gunjan was lookin at maynk's face to know his reaction ......

nup- kya hua maynk kassia bana hai.........

gunjna and sam was looking worried becoz maynk was not saying anything.......

may- wow nups it's yummy ,mene itna acha halwa kabhi taste nahi kiya .........
nup- di aap ko serve karo .......... or hone wale jiju aap ko.......

may- nahi ye halwa sirf or sirf mere liye bana hai or isse sirf mein he kahoga or kissi ke sath sahre nahi karoge...... saying this he grab the bowl fron nups hand and eat the whole halwa in few minute.......

nup - (she was very happy but sad too)arre maynk muje to taste karne dete .......

may- nupur tune mere liye banaya tha na is liye sirf mein he taste karoga.......

nup- don't worry di,mein thoda sa aap ke liye save kar liye hai abhi lati hoon aap ke liye........

may- kyaaaaaaaaaaaa.......................he screamed.....

sam- maynk tu itna chilla kyo raha hai yahaa hum sab sahi dun saktien hai............

gunj- nups bring the halwa

nups bring the halwa maynk snatched the bowl from her hand ....
gunjan said sam to hold amynk so she can taste it.......
sam hold maynk in his tight grip .........
gunjna taste the halwa and single tear bring out from her eyes......

nup- kya hua di aap rone kyo lagi........
gun hug maynk ........
nupur and samrat was watching in amusement what is going there.....
then nupur taste the halwa and she throw it she added salt and zerra instead of sugar..........
(nups started crying )
nup- itna burra banaa tha to khay kyo keh nahi sakti they ke bahut bura hai .is liya muje bhi taste nahi karne diya na........

gunjan and sam watching her

may- arre kisne kaha ke burra the actually ye new type ka halwa tha jo mein aaj tak taste nahi kiya........or phir tha bhi to world's best girl ke haato to ye opportunity kassie miss ker sakta tha......
saying this he hugged nupur......or phir itna special gift bhi kissi kissi ko milta hai.

nup- maynk tum bahut ache hoo ,bahut che.ho.........
sam and gujan both together - to kya hum dono burre hai........

nup - nahi di you are worlds best di and jiju.........

nup- acha ab mera gift kaha hai.....?

gun- ye le tera gift..............

nup- kya hai iassme ?

may- oh kitna illlogial question tha ,hume kya pata is me kya hai ...........

nup-just shut up meine tujse nahi pucha di se pocha tha........

may-to kya hua agar mein answer ker diya........

gun- just shut up both you ,nup plz open the gift..........

nup open the gift and was very happy to see a beautiful watch she hugged gujan......

nup- di this is so beautiful ,you are worlds best di........

nup- acha to ab jiju aap ka gift kaha hai........

sam- aare tuhe aaj ke din abhut best gift mil raha hai ,ek date mere sath bilkul free.arre sabhi ladkiya is din ke liye pata nahi kya kya karti hai or tumhe ye offer free mein mil raha hai........

nup- actually jiju aap apna offer apne pass rakiye muje nahi iski jarurat..........

gun- lakin tumhe jis cheez ke jarrat hai vo mein batai hoon.......

sam- yahaa bata rahi hoo ya room me..saying this he run from there.........

gun- wait sam i will kill you......
sayin this she also left nupur and maynk alone...........

nup- acha ab tum bato mere liye kya gift laye hoooon........
may-acha aisa bhi kuch hota hai kya ....muje nahi pata hta........

nup- to kya tum kuch nahi laye......

may- nahi......
nup-ok..she was sad.......

may- arre kaha ja rahi hoon itni jaldi naraj ho gayi ye raha tumhara gift........she open a box and bring a beautiul chain written "mn".

nup- wow maynk ye to bahut beautiful hai...........
may- arre jab mein isse tume pehan doonaga tab ye sach mein beautifull lagegi........
maynk toouch her neck and push aside her hai and open th lock of cahin ........
when maynk touched nups neck she feel the beautifull feeling which she want to tell but she cant so she hugged maynk....feel so secure in his arms........she said those word which she want to said from a long time ..maynk hear some whisper.......

may- nup tumne kuch kaha kya.....?

nup- kya tumne kuch suna... ?

may- nahi ,per aisa laga ke tumne kuch kaha......

nup- nahi mein kuch nahi kaha...... she lied........
gujna and sam was watching them from door.......

gun-sam do you thing maynk feel something for nupur......

sam- gunjan mein tuhe sab ke feelings bata sakta hoon lakin duniya mein agar emin kissi ke baat nahi bata sakta vo hai maynk .........uski baat ko samajne mein muje thoda time lagta hai........

gun- lakin mein nups ke baatin janti hoon she love maynk alot........

nupur broke the hug and saw sam and gujna....

nup- di see maynk gave me this beautiful gift........

gun- wow maynk this is the most beautifull gift ....

may- no bahabi actually ye nupur ke neck mein hone se beautiful ho gaya hai otherwise ye kuch anhi tha......

gun- ha is per write words bhi ek dossre ke liye he bnnaee lagtein hai......."mn".

nup - acha ab muje party kaun de raha hai.........?

sam- kamal hai aaj kal to bus lotney ka season chal raha hai.....birthday tera or party hum de kyo ........

nup- vo is liye ke miss ,nupur apne hone wali jiju or di ke saath time spend karna chati hai is liye......

sam- ok my dear salli ji ....tonight dicso mein.....mein janta hoon ke tum dicso nahi jati alkin ye thoda alag hai dekho na naam he kitna acha hai "friends "

nup-ok ...
may- nup jaldi aana tumhare liye ek surprise hai ...........

and saying thsi maynk and sam bothe left from there.........

gunjan - nupur tune aaj tak mujse kuch nahi chupiya hai ..........kya tu maynk se pyar karti hai.......

nup- she blushed and huged gunjan...... di mein aaj usse bata doongi ke mein kya socti hoon

flashback ends...
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maynk was watching the same chain which he presented to nupur written "mn".nupur tumne usse muje vapas ker diya ye kaho ke i said you to do this........

he press the switch of t.v and there was some news on channel" famous buisnessman maynk sharma spending night with her p.a.... "
he saw nups fearfull face and the news which was only showing that nupur is such a s****t. he know when this will come infront of his mother she will also hate him today he just play with a women selfrespect,but his anger is more important for him ...nothing else......
nupur was sleeping becoz the cofee which she drank maynk mix sleeping peels in this........

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in mumbai

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sam was doing somework on his laptop .....he recieve some e-mail when he open and read this and then chacked the picture........

he does not know either he will be happy or angry.........
now he know the reason why maynk was so happy .why he went there.........
he was happy to know she is fine ,she is alive,but the secong thought what happen was scaring him more.......
what did he tell gunjan ,he know nupur did was wrong but now what maynk did this was equally wrong......

he just want to run and tell gujna that she is here but what he tell that she is not fine .
he just left the office and start his car to tell gunjan about this but his p.A. remind him his meeting with some compamy members in taj hotel which was too important.

he reach taj hotel and he was walking towards his meeting room he stopped when he saw two person he was shocked to see them and the second shock when he listen theis talk .......

after listening what the two person said he was just ........show only guilt only guilt .he want to kill both of them but right now he just want to tell gunjan that she is there.........

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gunjan was dusting nups room she alwys do thsi whenever she came to her house .she was cleaning the room and crying ........
and remembering nupur 's favourite song
"chitti na koi sandesh
janne vo kaunsa desh jaha tum chali gayi
is dil per laga ker dass kaha tum chali gayi"

sam open the door and saw her crying ......he just run and hugged gujan......

sam- gunjan she is not dead ,gunjan she is alive ........

gun- she was so happy to hear this her sister is .......
where is she sam ?.she asked

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here nupur wake up from her sleep and when she open her eyes she find her self in maynk's flat and saw the news............

her eyes was wide open with shock when she read the news .......
she pick the pot and throw it on t.v screen........

maynk was watching her ......


may- i know this nupur ke tum yahi karoge aakhir tumhara best friend hoon itna to janta hoon tumhe.......

nup- maynk tum mere kuch nahi hoon ,kuch nahi ,agar tum mere dost hoti to muje jantein muje samaj tein muje per yakin kartein ke nupur aisa nahi ker sakti nahi ker sakti...........
you are not my friend not my frien........


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sorry for the delay
well this story will be ending soon in next part
i think the truth will be disclosed.........
hope you like the update
plz press the like button if you like the update
with love
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aditi


Edited by adi_gupta - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#64
i'm first to comment
awsome part adi
but i'm not liking mayank's behaviour
loved the flashback
continue soon
thanx for the pm
Edited by wind453 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#65
what????? is it going to end>????? anyways great update...pls continue soon.......
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Posted: 15 years ago
#66
Adi
lovely update meri jaan
mayur's frnship was amazing
mayank was so cute
nups ke liye puri naamkeen halwa khal liye
so sweet of him
nups loves him
i think mayu also loves her
sajan scene was nice
loved the gunur bonding
per tune bataya nehi ke huya keya tha
pls yaar itni mystery acchi nehi hai
ab to raaz khol de
or ha tera mama's boy ka update kaha hai?
tu kahi din se mujhe ghumarahi hai
per update nehi karrahi hai
tu maar khaye bina nei manegi hai na?
jaldi update kar
warna main danda leker ready hu 😆
jaldi, jaldi, jaldi
love u
Edited by Tapoor - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#67
gr88 prt
god it will end ind nxt prt 😔
anywayz plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update nxt prt sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
thanx 4 d pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
#68
awesome paart adi

it was too good

hated mayus behaviour

ho sadu

update nxt part soon

love pebbzzyy
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Posted: 15 years ago
#69
Awesome part.....
Pls dont end this ff so soon....
thanxx for the pm..
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Posted: 15 years ago
#70
Really nice but this is not fair don't end it soon plzz do ten parts aur chahiye plzzzzzzz

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