~Until The End~ 'AR' - Chapter 20 ( Pg. 92 ) - Page 57

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Posted: 15 years ago
Hina! I absolutely positively loved the update. It was amazing from the get go! I honestly loved it! Your writing skills are improving through every update - and so is your imagination.

I LOVED the interaction between Atul & Anjali. It was so good - I always thought of Atul as the calm and reserved guy, but when he hurt Anjali, that was a surprise. I loved the way Anjali responded, and they became friends - awesome!

THEN there was Sanskar & Ridhima - I hate Sanskar, just to let you know... LOL. He was a pain, I can't believe he hurt her. I thought he was obsessively possessive over her - why would he hurt her? Kameena. Anyways - I loved how Anjali came in, and stopped him. I thought it would be Armaan - BUT I LOVED THE TWIST! & Atul standing up for Anjali <333

THENNN there was Armaan & Ridhima. AMAZINGLY done. I love love love how she ran to him, and he took care of her - and calmed her down, and called her Miss.Perfect aloud! Ahhh, that was to die for! I loveeeeeed the interaction between the two. Armaan's definitely head over heels for her. & I love that (:

GREAT update hun! Looking forward for much much more <3

XO.
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey Hina

Wow ! dat was really a wonderful update ...
Sanskar is such a ...😡😡 ..i so hate him lyk anything since beginning ... n hw inconsiderate of him to hurt ridz lyk dat! m glad Anji slapped him TWICE... he actually deserves much more den dat..!!
its such a sick feeling wen u consider sum one as ur bro and u find him harboring sum different feelings for you......🤢...
AR moments were really amazing... please cnt soon ..
thnx 4 d pm...

Love
Vini
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Posted: 15 years ago
Ada'ab
hey nice update..
OMG sansker is really bad..so he is in love with ridz
but is mad cause ridz gives more attention to armaan ..........
poor ridz stuck in between............
thankx 4 the pm
with love tc
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Posted: 15 years ago
wheeeeeeeeeeew!!!!!!!!!!!
oooooooooooooooooof.............i dint breathe till i finished reading the whole update......🤢
it was like PURE AWESOME👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
u r just toooooooooooooooo good...............luuuuuuuuuuuuved it......😳😳😳
thanx a ton for the pm.........do continue as soooon as you can😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
woah Hina its really rocking so Anji slapped Snaskar cool i m so happy now Armaan is with her he can take care of her & also that Sanskar plz continue it & thanks for the pm




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Posted: 15 years ago
hey hina,
WOW ya, such a mind blowing
its really cool tat sanskar got slapped by anjy, yeah armaan is the only one who cud tc of ridz, she is completely safe with him,
im very much waiting for ur next update
thanks for the pm
cont soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
sanskar deserves more than 2 slaps
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Sweet_Ashum

Wow!!!!!
Awesome update Hina!!!

Thanks <3

Anjali slapped Sanskar?
He deserved it!
Of course he did! Stewwwpiggg Sanskar xD

N aww Riddhima's wound got worse
I know... All thanks to that ew ew Sanskar :(

N Riddhima opened up?😲
Told the feeling it mutual?😲😃😃😃
Haha, itni jaldi? Let's see 😆

Loved it
Thankies again <3

N you may get my comments late owing to my hectic college schedule[though I'm the 1st 1 to comment here😃😆]
It's alright hun! ehehe...Yeah what luck you got there! xD I need to be faster with my PMing ..Haww xD

N Sorry! But I will keep reading 😊
You better ! Or else ahem ahem... 😈

Thanks for the PM in advance😆
Take care,
Ashu
No problems hun, keep reading and commenting ehehe =D

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Dark_Desire

reserve

*edited*
WOW⭐️
hina yaar
its not good to make pppl cry😭
don't worry i waz crying outta bliss tho😆
Owhh.. You scared me for a second there! *phew*
the AR scene waz jus so beautiful😍
awwwwwwwwwwww
I know ya? AR are just too sweet, so I have to write beautiful scenes for them <3
u r a fabulous writer
awhhh.. Realllyyy? Or just buttering me ? ehehe. Thanks 😛
i was hating anjali thinking she might beat the **** outta armaan
but how ironic she is the one i luv most ok second most after AR of course😉
Nawhh, Anji is a sweetheart, I hope I'm explaining her character well enough hunz! She is like the modernized cultured girl... She respects everything, but handles things in her own way. And yes she loves Ridzi like helll =D I'm glad you started loving her!
anyways back to where i waz ahem ahem yaar anjali has done the nation ok atleast ma la la land proud for slapping tat stupid sanskar. woh toh ek number ka idiot hai.
Aur slap karni chaiyeti nahi? xD That Sanskar! 😡
lol u kno wen ridd waz like i thought him to be ma brother i waz laughing so bad even wen she waz crying. like he says i love u and she say bhai😆😆😆 how sad yo...
LOLOLOLOL! You made my day with that comment. Ahahaha! Exactly, Sanskar should realize her feelings for him is no way near his! 😆
the part waz jus too awsum
especially the AR scene
hope u update soon
Awhhh <3 Thanks so much ! Hopefully I can write more nice AR scenes ^^ Anything special you guys want?
luv ya
NIKKI :D
Luv you toooo hunz <3 =]

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: LOVEDMG-AR

HeyDear,

Hiya hunz!
OMG Mindblowing part,
awhhh! Thanks so much 😃
And loved the way anjali helps ridz and slaps Sanskar hehe,
I know!!! Anji really loves her sis like anything ya? Ufff Sanskar... I hate myself for making him like that. lol... Awhh
And AR scene was cho cho cho sweeeet!
I'm glad you liked it! I hope I can write sweeter scenes.. I'm not so good with the mushy mushy ones xD
You made my day with this , i have no words for that scene really!
And you made mine with the comment 😆
I hope in next part more off them cuz dying to see it hehe!
I hope I can write scenes like those. Once again, never really wrote such scenes so I dunno if you guys like it or not!
Once again lovely part and specially AR scene,
Thank yewwww bby!
Update-Cont Soon / PM me asalways=)
LoveSurat.
<3 =]

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