Mr & Mrs Shergill (Sajan FF) Sequel - Page 6

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Posted: 15 years ago
#51
nice twist into the story Sana
Sajan seperated? :(
And ending the other ffs? :(
awwww
I will miss them a lot
I hope you make more later on!
excited for the sequel!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#52
Hey Sana... =D
Nice concept....!
lovelyy...but SaJan r seprated..😭
very nice CS...!
do cont.soon
n thnx for the pm!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#53
YAHHHHHH IM HAPPY
MR N MRS SHERGILL ARE BACK
LOVE U 4 THIS
CONT SOOOON
N THNX 4 THE PM
LOVE
SONAL
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Posted: 15 years ago
#54
wow cs to mast hai mayur already sath me hai badiya hai
update soon dear
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Posted: 15 years ago
#55
awesome cs
loved it
continue soon
n thanx 4 the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
#56
sana ..
i am really happy dear that u are contd ..FF ..its been one of fav. ffs...
and would thank sweet charmee ..for being kati with you... and made you contd .. this ff ...
concept and CS of the kids are awesome ... loking forward for sajan and company.....
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Posted: 15 years ago
#57
wow sana gr8 concept eagerly waiting 4 next part.....
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Posted: 15 years ago
#58
nice concept yaar
really i thought u fooled us abt mr n mrs shergill but i m happy to know u r writting its sequel.
love u
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Posted: 15 years ago
#59
thanx guys for commenting it really means alot to me keep commenting and reading.
lots of love
sana
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Posted: 15 years ago
#60

Part 48

Samrat was kissing gunji in their bedroom when suddenly they heard aditi crying voice and they immediately got separated gunji was blushing madly and sam was embaressed to get caught by her daughter they immediately ran towards her to make her stop from crying more.it was sam who first took her in his arms carefully and to their surprise she stopped crying gunji was shock how in a one take of sam she went quit and within no time she was not smiling but laughing gunji felt glad that her and and father had gr8 understanding.

But to their surprise adi too started crying gunji took her in her arms and made him quit after some time both felt a sleep sam and gunji mmade them lie together and smile seeing them and than smiled seeing each other.

S:they r looking januable nah

G:hmm akhir bacche kis ka hai

S:ofcource mera

G:samrat tum bhi nah

S:kyun mera nahi hai

G:shut up

S:ok (they were about to get up from the bed when again both of them started crying sajan signed together and took both of them in their arms sam took aditi and gunji took adi in her hands and brought them near window and stood there they stopped crying the happy family looking last time happy which was witness by moon that night)(guys I will keep writing the scene of past in btw the updates).

4 years later

G:what do u actually want to say mrs gupta akhir meri beti ko hua kya hai

Mrs gupta :dekhiya mujhe pata hota toh kuch batati nah mr gupta nah aap ko Mumbai bulaya hai urgently

G:par baat kya hai

Mrs gupta:maina bola nah mujhe nahi pata

G:fine kab jana hoga

Mrs gupta:abhi

G:what this soon

Mrs gupta:he told it is emergency

G:fine(by saying so she left doc cabin thinking how she is geoen be alrightin Mumbai theplace which she left 4 years ago she is going back their the memories of samrat and her rushed back in her mind a tear escaped from her eyes when suddenly)

Aditi:mumma dekhiya nah adi bhai mujhe sata rahe hai

G:''''''

Adit:mummy

G:''''''

Aditi:mummy aap sun rahi haina (she said pulling gunji pallo which irritated gunji and she shouted)

G:chup ho jao aditi kyun tang kar rahi ho mujhe chalo yaha sa jab dekho tab adi ki complain karti rehti ho(aditi had tears in her eyes but she did not said anything adi who was witnessing all this felt very bad for aditi they came home)

At home

In adi and aditi room

Adi:aditi yeh dekho mai tumhare liya kya laya hoon

Aditi:mujhe nahi dekhna

Adi:par

Aditi:mumma har baar mujhe hi daanthti rehti hai kyun

Adi:woh pareshaan thi nah isiliye dekhna woh tumhain bahut jald manyegi

Aditi:sachi

Adi:muchi ab yeh loh yeh kholo

Aditi:yayyyyyyyyyyy meri farviouit ice cream wowwwww(she took ice cream from adi hand and started eating when gunji came in and saw aditi eating ice cream and took the ice cream from her hand throwed out of window)

G:aditi maina kitni baar tumsa kha hai ice cream tum nahi kha sakti phir bhi tumna

Adi:mumma aditi ko ice cream maina

G:kisina bhi ho jab maina mana kiya toh khayi kyun(aditi started crying and ran from there adi looked at his mom in anger)

Adi:mom aap aditi ko dantti kyun rehti ho aap bahut buri ho(by saying so he went fromthere towards aditi gunji *signed*)

G:mujhe aditi ko aisa nahi dantna chaiye tha par ab kya karon hmm mujhe pata hai mera dono bacchon ko kaise mana sakti hoon(she go into kitchen to cook gajar ka halwa while cooking she remember the time when she use to make halwa for sam when ever he get anger)

*Flashback*

G:samrat meri baat toh sunno

S:nahi sunna tumna vivek ka samna aisa kyun kaha ki tumhari aur meri shaadi galti sa hui hai

G:par samrat maina jhoot kaha kha

S:jhoot hi kaha chashmish tum janti ho ki maina tumsa shaadi apni pura hosh ur awaz mai ki hai phir bhi

G:par(before she could say futher he went from their than gunji made halwa for him and went into bed room)

G:samrat

S:mujhe tumsa baat nahi karni

G:abhi nahi karni(she said showing him gajar ka halwa in bowl sam saw that wanting to eat too he said he don't want too)

G:itna nraz ho mujhsa ki ab mera haath ka kuch bhi khana bhi nahi chate (she said crying fakely sam understood that)

S:chashmish tum natak math karo(gunji started to cry more)

S:ok ok fine lao do khata hoon

G:mai khilaungi(she feeded him when sam hugged her)

G:kya hua samrat

S:chashmish hamari shaadi kisi bhi wajah sa hui ho u know I love u

G:I know and im sorry ki maina hamri shaadi ka barain mai aisa bola

S:its ok(sam said kissing on her nech than he kissed on her check and was about to kiss on her lips when gunji pushed her)

S:what

G:abhi nahi

S:matlab(he asked confuse)and now don't tell me shaadi ka baad kyun ki hamari shad ho gayi hai(sam started to walk towards gunji and soon they started to run in whole room like tom and jerry and finally sam caught her hand and pulled her towards him and lean inn and started to kiss her passionately when gunji responded with same passion)

*flashback end*

Gunji came out of the dream when she heard cooker's ceti.she switched the gas off and took halwa in bolws and started walking towards children room wiping her tears which escaped from her eyes remembering the past.

In adi aditi room

Adi:aditi tut oh janti haina mom ko woh pareshaan thi isilitye unhone tujhe danta bas

Adit:pata

Adi:toh phir itna muh kyun phulayi hui hai

Aditi:dad ki yaad aa rahi hai

Adi:sssshhhhhhh mama na sun liya toh phir rona shuru kardaingi isiliye plz

Aditi:par

Adi:aditi

Aditi:thik hai but humain muma kab bataingi dad ka barain mai

Adi:bahut jald (just than gunji entered the room)

G:hmm toh kis kis ko bhook lagi hai(adi and aditi did not answer)

G:beta tum mujhsa naraz ho(gunji said to aditi coming close to her she nodded in negative a knife pierced from gunji heart aditi always understand gunji whe ever she shout on her she don't say anything which make gunji feel more guilty she hugged her)

G:im sorry beta im so sorry

Aditi:its ok muma mai aapsa naraz nahi hoon

Adi:aur mai bhi

G:I know aur mai tum logon ka liya gajar ka halwa banayi hoon

Adi+aditi:GAJAR KA HLWA yayaa(they shouted to gether n started eating happily when gunji called to her boss)

G:hello sir

Sir:yes

G:hmm sir mujhe kuch mahinon ka liya Mumbai jana hoga so mai iss job sa istefa de rahi hoon

Sir:par tum Mumbai kyun jaa rahi ho

G:bas kuch zaruri kaam hai

Sir:thik hai mai tumhare kuch kaam aa sakta hoon

G:yes sir hmm if mujhe Mumbai mai kahin job mil jata toh

Sir:oh job thik hai mai dekta hoon mai kya kar sakta hoon

G:thanx sir

Sir:its ok(gunji cutted the call and declared in front of her children that they r going to Mumbai.

In Mumbai

In SGAA company

S:kya sach kehraha hai

B:ha sach bol raha hoon khushi aur karan khushi ki behan ki shaadi sa wapis aa rahe hain aaj in flight sa

S:oh my god it's a gr8 news mai abhi unhain pick karna jata hoon

B:itni jaldi flight land hone time hai

S:thodi jaldi chali jaunga toh kya bigad jayega mera (by saying so he cut the phone and was about to run out when his PA said)

P:sir aap kahan jaa rahe hai mera aaj akhir din hai aaj aur aap ki meeting bhi hai

S:oh meting cancel karo and bye I hope tumhari shaadi acchi ho bye

P:bye sir(she thought ab inhain roka toh na mumkin hai as karan ki baat ati hai toh yeh bacche ban jate hai anyways mera toh akhiri din hai mai chali by thinking so she went out of sam's cabin)

In London airport

Adi:muma hum plane mai jainga

G:ha beta ab chalo c'mon aditi

Aditi:yes muma

In flight

G:aaj phir mai waha jaa rahi hoon jaha sa mai kabhi ayi thi kahin samrat sa samna na ho jaye mera kahin usna adi aur aditi ko dekh liya toh mujhe aaj tak samjh nahi aya ki samrat nah mujhe adi aur aditi ko lejane kaise diya chaye toh pata laga sakta tha ki mai aur bacche kaha hain kya woh bhi yehi chata tha ki mai usse chodh kar chali jaun par kyun she was thinking all this in plane as adi and aditi were asleep

In Mumbai

In car

Samrat mobile started rining

S:dam iss bhi abhi bajna tha(sam said to himself and stopped the car and picked the phone up)

S:hello

Person:hello samrat

S;yeh Mehta bolo kya hua

M:samrat maina suna hai tumhain ek P.A ki zarurat ha

S:haan ha kyun

M:meri naraz mai ek ladki hai joh tumhari P.A banna layak hai hamare company mai hi kaam kar chuki hai

S:oh that's gr8 but woh waha say aha kaise I mean

M: I get u woh Mumbai aa rahi hai aaj

S:ok than aap uski details fax kar dijiye mera manager dekh lega

M:ok thanx

S:thanx toh mujhe kehna chaiye mr Mehta

M:ok bye

S:bye(sam cutted the call and started driving)

In Mumbai airport

G:acchon tum logh yahi khado mai abhi ayi

Adi+aditi:yes mom

Just than sam entered the same airport and started searching for karan and khushi when suddenly he saw a small girl fall down

S:oh my tum thik toh ho nah (he said picking up the girl the girl lifted her head to see samrat and was seing towards him continuously sam was busy in seeing is she hurt but when he saw her that she seeing him)

S:kya hua PRINCESS tum thik toh nah(she just nodded before he could say anything he heard)

K:chachuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu(he immediately turned)

S:karannnn(they hugged )my sweet heart how r u

K:fit and fine(he said in childish tone swetly which melted sam heart and he hugged him again )i missed u beta

k:i missed u too(he said smiling than sam broke tha hug and said to khushi)
S:khushi tum kaisi ho
Kh:and bhi thik hoon ghar chale
S:ha ek min(sam turn to see the girl but was no where)
K:kya hua chachu
S:kuch nahi ghar chale
K:yeh(they came out of airport and went to benji house)
Gunjan got a call
G:hello
Sir:gunjan
G:yes sir
Sir:u got a job
G:really
Sir:yeh detail maina fax kar diya hai tumhain maina naye address par
G:ok
Sir:and the company name is SGAA's company.
Kis sa takraya tha samrat ? gunjan ko mil gayi ha naukri samrat ka hi company mai ? kya karainga sajan jab honainga yeh dono aamna samna ? kyun chodh diya tha gunjan nah samrat ko ? kyun nahi dhundha samrat nah gunjan ko ? kya hua tha akhir past mai ? kya adi aur aditi kabhi bhi il payainga apna dad sa ? kya hua hai aditi ko jis wajah sa gunjan ko ana pada Mumbai ? in sawalon ka jawab jana ka liya wait kijiye mera update ka.

Notes:here is the update I hope u all liked it plz let me know by ur comments and plz press the like button too and if any mistake is there im sorry.

Muhhhhhhhhhhh

Lots of love

Sana.😉

Edited by sana_sajan - 15 years ago

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