Battlefield: AR FF: Part 1 - Page 5 l 6/05

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Aparajita

@yikes

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Posted: 15 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: Sani_Rani
wow man great intro. i am hooked. plz continue and pm me when u update
love

saniya

Hey Saniya :) Thanks! 😃

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Aparajita

@yikes

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Posted: 15 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: arluver15
Hey
nice intro very intersting.............wud love to read this one.....armaan and ridhima are agents thats sound totaly thriling...........cont soon and do pm me.......

nruti

Hi Nruti, thankyou so much. Yeah, I'll PM you 😃

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Pebblez

@Pebblez

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Posted: 15 years ago

#13

If u dont continue, I will spam your PM inbox to a limit where u will go insane. :D

SO you know what I mean. Update soon!

Kiran

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Aparajita

@yikes

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Posted: 15 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: Iqbal Neha1
amazing intro
souns really intresting, cant wait 2 read da next part

Hi, thanks for commenting! I'll post it soon =)

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Aparajita

@yikes

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Posted: 15 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: dhruvikaluvsKSG
heyy dear
great intro

wanna reead it more so cont soon

n pm me plzz whenever u uodate

thxx

dhruvika

Hi Dhruvika 😃 Thanks! 😃

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naureen

@Norz

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+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#16

do contd soon

awsome intro

dont 4get to pm me

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Aparajita

@yikes

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Posted: 15 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: ..Mira..
Very nice intro. Continuee soon lol, you have me very intrigued!

Thanks! 😃

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Neeta

@U-No-Poo

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Posted: 15 years ago

#18

Okay, Me LOVES the intro 😆 I don't know what you're going to do about the whole 'private investigators' thing cuz I'm pretty sure you don't know anything about it 😆 🤔 Kidding!

Ridhima's dream was very aptly described, I think it really sets the tone for her character. So well done :) But I really really hope that 'BROOOMANCE' doesn't come into this too soon, because I'd really like to see some solid action first! And needless to say, a solid base for the relationship (future) between AR.

Cool storyline dude. We really need more of such fics here =)

P.S - You so cannot beat MTM woman! 😆