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Hi everyone :) I'm Aprajita (Neeta's cousin - didn't want to mention it, but hey, who doesn't want some free brownie points šŸ˜†) and not really new to this forum. I posted my story 'Solace' here but no one really commented on it šŸ˜†
Anyway, this is my first ever FF, and it's on Armaan-Ridhima, and well, they were my favourite couple until DMG was ripped apart by the creatives and doomed for eternity šŸ˜† ( And this happened 5 months after it started, so yeah, pretty soon) I like Karan-Shilpa so that's the couple that I'm envisaging while writing, although you can think about Jenny/Sukriti/or someone else 😃
Armaan and RIdhima are two private investigators in my fic, and they're partners. I must warn you that my romantic bits may be a little lame and useless, but I'll try my best to write then properly 😃 I hope you like it and please comment and/or press like button! :)
*P.S - Do suggest a new title if you find a more suitable one, this one's just random šŸ˜†
Introduction:
She was running, and running fast, from someone. She didn't know who it was, but she wasn't thinking about his identity at that moment either. All she could think of was escape - escape from whoever was chasing her, because something about him scared her. She had an inkling feeling that it was a man, and her instincts were usually right.
Beads of sweat had formed on her forehead, and the tension in her body rose to a higher level. But she kept running, and kept looking back to see whether he was somewhere in near sight, until she ran into a dead end, and there was nowhere to go. She looked around frantically, her eyes searching for an escape, but found none. Running both her hands through her hair, she forced her mind to work something out. Suddenly, she heard footsteps behind her. He was closing in on her, and somehow she knew that this time she would not be able to run away. She slowly backed up against the wall as he came closer and his face emerged out of the faint mist..
*Beep Beep* *Beep Beep*
Ridhima snapped open her eyes. She didn't know where she was. Panting, she lay in her bed, thinking about the dream that had seemed so real, so vivid, so alive. She touched her face to make sure she was real, and slowly wiped off the sweat that had formed on her forehead. Looking around, she realized that she was in her room, and slowly turned off the alarm that had been incessantly ringing for the past 10 minutes.
It had been the same dream, and each time, he came closer and closer. She wished she could just identify who he was, and what he wanted, so that she could face him head on. Suddenly, her cell phone rang, making her jump. She groaned and sat up straight in her bed, turning on the lamp, she picked up her phone and looked at the caller ID, and sighed. Armaan.
"Yeah?"
"Hey, were you sleeping?" came the reply in his usual deep voice.
"Not now, what's up?"
"We have a case. Need you here now"
Ridhima became slightly excited, and to a certain extent, relieved. The cases always helped her take her mind off things, and focus on something productive. Like catching a murderer.
"What's it about?"
"Not on the phone. Can you be here in 20 minutes? South Indian for breakfast", she could hear him grinning on the other end. 2 years of partnership had given their relationship a new name - friendship.
"Sounds good. Will be there" and with that, she disconnected the line. Time to get in action Ridhima, she thought to herself and jumped out of bed, looking forward to another thrilling case.
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So? What do you think? Worth continuing? Not? Please let me know! 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow man great intro. i am hooked. plz continue and pm me when u update
love
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Hey
nice intro very intersting.............wud love to read this one.....armaan and ridhima are agents thats sound totaly thriling...........cont soon and do pm me.......
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amazing intro
souns really intresting, cant wait 2 read da next part
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heyy dear
great intro
wanna reead it more so cont soon
n pm me plzz whenever u uodate
thxx
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hey nice concept...cant wait to read more..update soon and do pm me..

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Very nice intro. Continuee soon lol, you have me very intrigued!
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omgg!! yesshhhh please continue!! i cant wait to read more!
can you pm me when you do continue again? thanks!!
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Hey nice concept dear . Do cont soon and pls pm me .
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LOL, what? šŸ˜†

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