Tanhayian(SaJan FF)-DISCONTINUED (Note on Pg. 73) - Page 39

Originally posted by: ght_sajan

as usual it was a fantastic update

i am waiting know how this track unfolds

how will sam react to the fact that gunjan has a kid he is still unaware of it.

what about gunjan's past pls reveal it soon

continue soon ........

Originally posted by: meens1981

@res......wow looks like i made it afterall before ur next ud.....seee i told u "me first" link is broken now😭😭😭....hey EQ itna emoshanal hone ki zaroorat nahi hai, i didnt do nething big......okie no water...thanks but no thanks🤣....jokes apart....as i told u earlier, i always knew u will get back to ur ff, ti was just a matter of time😆, but am so very glad🤗 that i cud be of help in ne small way, in making u get back to this ff n thus not depriving d readers from such a beautiful story.😳😳😳

welll on d update, i told u lock ur modest bones in d cupboard when u write ur FF, how come u forgot to obey that order of mine🤣.... r u crazy, the ud was too good ashu.....wow the way u describe gunjan always bring a satisfied smile on my face ashu😃😍.😍😍😍.......ur love for her is obvious in d way u write........i liked sammy so much in this ud......atleast so far he seems like a simple character n am loving the flavor of that........d small activities that u write in detail make d update so much interesting , even when its about some redundant office job, meetings etc........u give readers every reason to get hooked to ur story word by word.....grt work ashu👏👏👏⭐️ n hope u dont take a long break again before ur next update😆😆

I knowwww Meens...the consistency broke in this chapter, but am glad that we are back on track with the next one 😉😆

And madam, now u're being extra modest. U know wat u've done, and I love u sooooo much for always being there for me. U have a tough duty ahead also U weren't any small help, u were and are the strength and support...so, this is for u 🤗🤗🤗

Awww!!! Meens, thank u soooooo much for liking the update. U've brought a smile on my face. I'm extremely glad that u liked my interpretation of SG. It means a lot to me.

Long break....sorry, took a long one, but atleast updated

Originally posted by: aarthi.ramani

ashu update????????

😉😉😉😆😆

Originally posted by: muzic_lyf

lovely..:)

Originally posted by: cuteangelgirl95

awesomeeeeee updt

loved it

it was superb

do continue soon

n thanx 4 the pm

PS: sorry 4 commenting late actually i had exams hope u understand

lov

-deepali-

Originally posted by: -Drishti-

ayesha!!🤗 ahhh...i can understand abt u not wanting to write ahead coz of everything happening in MJHT and to SaJan...but i am sooo glad u did...coz this is one of the best FF i've ever read!!
and i just loved the update....SaJan...were damnn cutee!! haha...samrat and his nautanki...with him telling her to call him only samrat....poor gunjan wud hav been ever so confused!! i'm soo in love with the gunjan in ur FF....the way u describe her is just awesome!!! ahh...sam asks her if he can drop her...sum1 wants to spend more time with sumbody!!😉😆 loved the update ayesha!!! thanks for the PM!! and plssss try and continue sooner this time!!!

P.S.- sorry for suchh a small and late comment...i'm a bit inactive so comments and all may be irregular!!

Originally posted by: aysha1010

You updated!!! 😊

And that was one beautiful update' Absolutely loved it.

Loved the way you described Excel early in the morning. And how different it was for Samrat. So peaceful. So quite!! And the image was so beautiful'

And then he sees her and she sees him and they smile at each other' 😳

The way Samrat makes sure she calls him Samrat and not sir was just SO cute. And then she makes sure he doesn't call her Ms'. Awww!! That was just sho cute.

SG talking about the changes in college was sweet. And Samrat already wants to spend more time with her??? Wonder what will happen in the future!!

Gunjan's already so comfortable with him' Aww. And Samrat gets worried when she simply screams "Oh No". Could that get any cuter?

They were again standing in front of each other, in fact, very close to each other..just inches away. Their eyes met again and a sweet pain rose from their hearts. They stood still for a while, and it seemed, as if with them, the things around, the world, also came to a stand still. He could see her innocence, her beauty, her purity, her simplicity from so close now. And his eyes, that gaze, was melting her heart. It was a feeling, which was unknown to both of them, yet, they were going deep down in that sea of feelings. Was it a dream.....or a reality.....they didn't know, and neither did they want to know. 😍😍😍

With this, they both started walking towards the main gate. There was complete silence, but within their minds and hearts, there was an unknown excitement. They kept on walking together, but didn't say anything. Maybe they were listening to their minds, hearts, or.......the silence. The evening shade of the sky increased the peace surrounding them. Though no word was spoken, yet an occasional look into each other's eyes and sharing of smiles conveyed a lot. 😍😍😍

On the other hand, she was still numb. Her heart was at war with her mind and she was walking with him, trying to forget the battle going inside her, because walking by his side, gave her a pleasure. It gave her a feeling of completeness......really.......wasn't she already complete? 😍😍😍

Sorry for quoting so much but had to tell you just how beautiful all this was. All those feelings were so so so beautiful'

Loved how Samrat waited with her, refusing to leave her alone and how Gunjan was overwhelmed by his concern. 😳

And then the way you ended it'

Gunjan opened the door and just as she was about to sit, she turned and looked towards Samrat. He waved a small bye to her and she nodded. With smiles on their faces, they ended the day. After their car left, Samrat looked up to the sky, sat in his car and off he drove back home. 😍

That was so beautiful' and so SaJan and reminded me of all those beautiful SaJan scenes. 😍

Loved this chapter Ayesha. Am glad you decided to continue this FF!! 😳