Tanhayian(SaJan FF)-DISCONTINUED (Note on Pg. 73) - Page 17

Originally posted by: meens1981

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ashu......as usual brilliant stuff....god am in love with ur ff and the first reason for that is it allows me to relive the best days of my life....i.e coll days of my life.....u know i was also into lot of cultural n socienty related activites in my engg days n inspite of a hectic schedule i used to put in time in organisaing and MCing lot of events.....i juts went again on a trip down the memory lane....d best moment was when u expressed sam's nervousness about going on stage in-spite of being confident person n d moment his eyes connects with riya n uday a smile lights up on his face was like deja vu fro me....coz that was my tactic as well ....i used to get very nervous when i had to get onto stage for all these events n in-spite of so many times the nervous energy wud accompany me always ....n like u said i used to search for my friend's face n after connecting with a known face i wud relax a bit....ok enuf of my bakwas😆😆
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i loved ur description of sam's pov of gunjan's beauty n her reaction to his stare n gunjan's POV....god u play around with words so well sweety.....its all like i am seeing them right in front of my eyes.....to make u live a scene which is only decked up with words is truly a brilliant writers gift👏👏👏👏👏.........how cud u stop it at this point....pl write long updates....am waiting for their first convo eagerly....acha out of curiosity tell me do u teach in d coll where u studied???...waise another question i was a lil onfused ...is gunji's reaction just that of shock of finally meeting the person abt whom she has always only heard or is there more to it....coz from the intense expressiong i felt there's some other connection.....am i right or wrong....okie i know u will say "jaane ke liye padte rahiye "tanhayina"....n i just have one reply to that u better update it fast😆😆....loved it ashu.....grt work!!!!!

Originally posted by: ammykhan

awesome

mind blowing update

loved it to the core

loved the samrat n gunjan pov

and there reactions seeing each other

you are a fabulous writer

keep it up

now em waiting for samrat reaction when he vl came to know that the girl is gunjan

continue soon

thx 4 the pm

Originally posted by: sajanroxx20

beautiful updt dear...
mindblowinggggg..
awesomeee
luved it to d core..
i literally gt goosebumps while reading it.. 😳
d way u expressed sam's POV, gunjan's POV....!! n their reaction on seeing each other... 😳
it ws all amazinggggg..
u r a brilliant writer.... 👏 👏 👏
pllzzzzzzzz do cont soon.. cant wait to read further..
n thnxx for d pm..

love
jyotika

Jyotika, first of all, i'm sooo sorry for such a late reply..

Originally posted by: ramramramram

Another amazing part Ayesha,

You described the part where SaJan's eyes were just lost in each others soooo well,

It was awesome i mean i'am speechless,

The curiousty and feelings were giving and projected in a brilliant way

Keep writing the parts so well and we'll keep writing you appriciating comments 😆,

But seriously it's a delight to read your FF

Originally posted by: ght_sajan

wow loved it completely but when will you reveal gunjan's past ? hope you don't keep us waiting for long

Originally posted by: kavya.b

AWESOME!!!!
i jus loved everything of it....his nervousness, her humbleness, his excitement her sincerity,their confusion n most of all, they considering each other as students in spite they being Hods


do update soon.... atleast i'll b able 2 give this size reply....orelse, i'll have to end up with jus a 'like' for such beautiful parts also

n also it'll b hard for me to survive like this...... i dont get this much of suspense n excitement even when i watch a thriller