AR - Love Hate Connection... NOT UPDATING SOON - Page 16

Originally posted by: vaish04

Hey ! 🤗
Wowww and that was a cutie part yaar !😳
Fullto description and ohww padma and billy hehe achahai 😆😉
Hmm well i thought ke ridz ka dress kharab hojayega u knw mud from car and all..phew that din happen coz i hate that🤢😆
And yeah welli guess its armaan on d other side..😉
As about the script style i liked both the ways
but u knw since this was full description part so it was ought to be written up this way...and i guess as story moves on its uwd automatically be like the intro style😃
All d best for this FF !!👍🏼
Luv❤️
vaishu :)

Originally posted by: nadz_J

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Originally posted by: brainychild92

i like this style but maybe it can be double spaced or something for easy read..

Originally posted by: star_fan

I hate you so much.. Firstly for such small part and second you are so like serial peeps.
what?? short i thought it will be long i ws like no one gona read it cause its too long lol.. well thats the twist na

Awesome update ! Greatly written.. I like it. 😊
thank u soo much!

It was good part with sweet intro of Riddhima's family. Sweet talks as well. Will we seeing some fun full convo between Riddhima and Muskaan in future ?
THANKs once again.. of course u will see many many more fun fun scenes between them..

I really like the racing scene, it was fantastic. It's Armaan ?
lol see its diffrent na..? well u know my shetaani demaak so keep wondering

I always love the way you write and describe the whole scene in style. Great writing !
thanks thats why im not worried writing like that cause i know u like it lol

You aren't a episode writer so don't be the one. You're an FF writer so be the one.
dont get the diffrent cause both need to make the readers/viewers fill with suspense so n darling u wont understand these tricks cause these tricks keeps the viewers/readers hooked

May I shoot my questions ?
now is there any post without them lolz

You know the mistake of yours in your eyes in 'Mistake' which I love, was the meeting of the leads at first go. 😛
i dont get it wat u said so u saying its a mistake i made the couple meet at fisrt go in mistake or its a mistake here? confused.com lol

P.S: Sorry, If I didn't mentioned everything but I like the whole part. I am still not in condition to do this today as well but I have to do becoz I told you.
its kk hunny buns i understand ur trying to keep ur word n thanks for that its alrite no probs i like it this way rather than u 2 pages long replied rolf

Please update soon.. reached 10 pages so am looking next update.
u say darling n i wont do it kabhi nahi.. expect to read one more part soon!!

Originally posted by: LaLi17

what?? short i thought it will be long i ws like no one gona read it cause its too long lol.. well thats the twist na
No, it wasn't a long part.

lol see its diffrent na..? well u know my shetaani demaak so keep wondering
No, It won't be different, if only you changed it after reading my reply. Whatever your mind is but you know.. I know you inside out.


dont get the diffrent cause both need to make the readers/viewers fill with suspense so n darling u wont understand these tricks cause these tricks keeps the viewers/readers hooked
No, it's different at both points. I am telling you to start writing scripts for shows.

now is there any post without them lolz
LOL.. But you won't answer back at all.

What Muskaan do ?
How you gonna shape the story ? 😃😳
It's Armaan and there gonna be a nok jhok between them, isn't it like that ?

I forgot some questions.

The most important question: Will you complete this FF, if yes then by When ?

i dont get it wat u said so u saying its a mistake i made the couple meet at fisrt go in mistake or its a mistake here? confused.com lol
<< This is what I done after reading your above reply and I did this very hard that my forehead is paining. 😒 Ms. Confused. com I am saying that I love the first meeting of leads in Mistake and as you didn't done that in your other FFs so that must be something which you called Mistake. Did you understand it now or not ?

its kk hunny buns i understand ur trying to keep ur word n thanks for that its alrite no probs i like it this way rather than u 2 pages long replied rolf
Haww.. That's insult. 🥺 Now I won't give long replies.

Please update soon.. reached 10 pages so am looking next update.
u say darling n i wont do it kabhi nahi.. expect to read one more part soon!!
Always.. whatever I ask, you don't do that. Update soon !

P.S's:
1. Where is my KaSh sigs ?
2. When you gonna comment on my gallery ?
3. Are you planning to write your FF 'The Other End' ?

Originally posted by: star_fan

No, it wasn't a long part.
4 pages in a word document yaar ur hard to please when it comes to length of the part

No, It won't be different, if only you changed it after reading my reply. Whatever your mind is but you know.. I know you inside out.
i meant the meeting is different well u know inside out of me so u mite no who it is lol

No, it's different at both points. I am telling you to start writing scripts for shows.
no its the same... i will if i can get into any show writing lol..

LOL.. But you won't answer back at all.
of course u told me to keep my lips sealed n now u blaming me?

What Muskaan do ?
wat u mean? the job? wait yaar let me update lol..
How you gonna shape the story ? 😃😳
u wait n see there will be lots of noke joke fighting before they get 'married' mayb even falling in luv
It's Armaan and there gonna be a nok jhok between them, isn't it like that ?
u wait n see there mayb not much noke jokes but u wait lol

I forgot some questions.
i can see that n next time double lol
The most important question: Will you complete this FF, if yes then by When ?
most likely i will cause i got upto like 23 parts ready.. no not typed up bt know wat happening in each part so most likely.. n i like this concept o mine.. lol

<< This is what I done after reading your above reply and I did this very hard that my forehead is paining. 😒 Ms. Confused. com I am saying that I love the first meeting of leads in Mistake and as you didn't done that in your other FFs so that must be something which you called Mistake. Did you understand it now or not ?
aww shall i send armaan to kiss ur forehead so it wont pain.. so ur saying im thinking its a mistake that i made the leads to meet in my other ff (mistake)? im asking u this Q after reading ur reply for atleast 5 times lol

Haww.. That's insult. 🥺 Now I won't give long replies.
nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo was a joke yaar

Always.. whatever I ask, you don't do that. Update soon !
this time i will keep my word darling!!

P.S's:
1. Where is my KaSh sigs ?
im not sure if i would be able to do it
2. When you gonna comment on my gallery ?
oh damn im so bad at keepingmy word.. should learn sumthing frm u!!
3. Are you planning to write your FF 'The Other End' ?
hehehehehehehe 😆

Originally posted by: LaLi17

4 pages in a word document yaar ur hard to please when it comes to length of the part
Then write on Notepad. 😛

no its the same... i will if i can get into any show writing lol..
I am a reader and also viewer so I am telling you that it's different means it's D I F F E R E N T.

of course u told me to keep my lips sealed n now u blaming me?
Sealed your lips.

u wait n see there will be lots of noke joke fighting before they get 'married' mayb even falling in luv
Missy.. I know that.

u wait n see there mayb not much noke jokes but u wait lol
I mean there gonna be fight between them and that's make them disliking each other and Riddhima also going for the interview in his office. 😳

most likely i will cause i got upto like 23 parts ready.. no not typed up bt know wat happening in each part so most likely.. n i like this concept o mine.. lol
I hope so.. 🤔

aww shall i send armaan to kiss ur forehead so it wont pain.. so ur saying im thinking its a mistake that i made the leads to meet in my other ff (mistake)? im asking u this Q after reading ur reply for atleast 5 times lol
No.. Just send Karan to kiss Shilpa's forehead and my pain will be gone. Seriously, when I read this part of reply, I still felt the pain. 😵
Listen, just FORGET that I have said something.

nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo was a joke yaar
I know you were serious. 😒

this time i will keep my word darling!!
We will see.

P.S's:
im not sure if i would be able to do it
WHAT ?

oh damn im so bad at keepingmy word.. should learn sumthing frm u!!
Good.. you get to know that you're bad with keeping your words. Yeah you should. ;P

3. Are you planning to write your FF 'The Other End' ?
hehehehehehehe 😆
Don't laugh and give me answer.