Kaisa ye Pyar hai - part 16 page 60 16/05/2010 - Page 30

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Posted: 15 years ago
i hope the original video is found soon....i wanted sheena to make nupur jealous and fight for mayank....but didnt want something to actuallyyyyy happen between mayank and sheena....i though maybe sheena and mayank were friends and they were just fooling around for fun to annoy nupur for a few days!....didnt knw it will be all so serious! o dear.....i just hope that now even when mayank tells nupur that he does actually want to marry sheena....nupur doesnt believe him and doesnt believe he was wrong....i really hope her trust doesnt break and she fights and strands up for him! and makes mayank realise the truth too!
poor mayank. update soon! x
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Posted: 15 years ago
😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
πŸ˜”πŸ˜”πŸ˜”πŸ˜”πŸ˜”πŸ˜”πŸ˜”
do you want me to say more now..........
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Posted: 15 years ago

it was really sad one..............😭😭😭😭

awesome update...............

do continue soon.........
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Posted: 15 years ago
Aruna..

I hate Sheena

Any ways, Superb update

But please try to make everything fine for Mayur asap

Waiting 4 next part

Love,
$hrey@
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome! luvedd this part
thnks for da pm
do continue soon...
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Posted: 15 years ago

Well Baap re baap


Nikki : wht??????????????????this is truly disgustin.....i hated this d most...i really cant beleive u did this....isse zyada main kuch nahi likh sakti......

aruna....really sorry for a comment like this...bt this is my true reaction.....an update like this i nevr expected here.....

Tapoor :what is this yaar
u made me sad
ab pls jaldi se sab thik kardo
otherwise i will kill u
do cont soon


Shafoo :tht was nicee butt i hateeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee sheena how coud she do tht she such a cheep girl manyak only love nupur how itni ghir sakti hai sheena ka mayak ko apana fake tears say show offffffffffffffff i feel to much angry on sheena she is such bitch.

Pari : i hate you..................... (nothing else can i say,, and i m not talking to you)

Aur Faria ne to koi comment hi nahi kiya , i believe she must be writting a big comment to fire me ,kyon faria kaha ho bhai ????

So guys i actually loved all the comments , but the above one came directly for Sheena or me....

I really enjoyed nikki (Dil se nikli hai ye bat),Tapoor is ready to kill me
Shafoo ( Sheena ko kitne bura bhala suna diya )
aur hamari sweet si pari jo mujhase bat hi nahi karna chahti hai

Par dear her relation ka phase hota hai thoda sa bura thoda bhala ,aur unke realtion ko dikhane ke chakkar me sari dant mujhe padi 😭😭😭😭😭

So please bear with me aur itna naraj mat ho please warna main likhungi kaise ? πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰

Khair bahut ho gayi nautanki now see the update and mujhe aise comment pasand hai jo dil se nikale so write what you feel

Part 12:

Mayank has hurted himself.blood is coming from both of his hands

Nupur calls uday and tells that she will be starting in another hour so send benji he says fine.

Nupur has nt recovered from the pain obvious hai uski life khatam hoti dikh rahi hai use

dusari taraf mayank entered in the office .and nupur heard a sound

N : abhi kaun aaya hoga ,and when she saw he was mayank .She saw him all in blood ,his eyes were red and swallon.her heart felt like going and hugging him but her mind started ,nupur ruk jao mayank ne tumhe dhokha diya hai par dil nahi nupur mayank tumse pyar karta hai
she was standing thr only and mayank did not notice any thing how can he uski to duniya loot chuki thi

he saw nupur's photo and started talking : Nupur maine tumhe dhokha nahi diya hai ,wo itna jyada ro raha tha ki nupur ki aankhe uske halat par ro padi.
wo bar bar yahi kah raha tha ki maine tumhe dhokha nahi diya main sirf tumse pyar karta hu ...........

after listening this she just went to her cabin opened the email

and read it ,in entire day she did not get the courage to see it but after hearing mayank she felt like watching it again

and when she read the mail : Take care mayank tumhari zindagi me bhuchal aane wala hai

from some anonymous

Nupur started the video and was surprised to see the video
ye sab kya hua hai ,mayank aaj bhi mujhase hi pyar karte hai aur main bewkoof ,she could not think any thing and ran towards mayank

she called benji and said mayank has got new project so she needs to saty in office today but do not worry mayank is with her and she cut the call

She ran and hugged him

mayank apne hosh me nahi tha to he was not realizing ki nupur hai he thought it must be him imagination

he again started maine kuch nahi kiya nupur please mujhe maaf kar do

Nupur (kya kahu main tumse mayank ,mere dimag ne bhi tum par kuch palo ke liye shak kiya hai .she was actually feeling bad for his condition.she did the bandage for him and then wiped his tears.but she felt ki mayank ke aansoo to rukana hi nahi chahh rahe hai
Her heart was paining ,and she hugged him.he was feeling better when she kept his head on her lap.
after crying a lot he slept ,but still in his dreams he was saying the same thing.

Nupur was in full anger on sheena ( agar tumane mere sath aisa kuch kiya hota na sheena to shayad main bardasht kar leti par tumane meri zindagi ,meri jindagi ke aise insaan ke sath ye kiya hai jo mujhe apne se jyada pyara hai.maine apni sanso ke bina shayad kuch pal rah lungi par mayank unke bina mujhe sans lena bhi gawara nahi hai )

All the night she she was ruffeling her hand through his hairs and he was feeling some what relievd and slept peacfully.

in the morning when nupur got up she saw they both were in each other's arm.

she quickly got up and got fresh up ,and went to conference room she did some set up and when came to see mayank he was awake and sitting as of he does not have hope to live

N : mayank tum uth jao bahut thake se lag rahe ho?

M : nahi nupur pahle meri bat sun lo ,aur tum kal rat ko ghar nahi gayi

N : nahi mayank pahle fresh ho jao ,main tumse bad me bat karti hu plz

M got up freshen up and came and sat on sofa ,n came and about to say something ki Sheena apne dad ke sath enter karti hai


Sh : hi mayank ,

M : hi and namaste uncle

SD : namaste beta ,sheen kah rahi thi ki tum mujhase kuch jaruri bat karna chahte ho


M : haan uncle wo in middle

N : are mayank itni bhi kya jaldi hai tum aur uncle baitho i ll make arrangement for tea
vaise sheena u can join me

Sh man me ( ab tum yaha se out nupur ) : ok i ll join u

N took her directly to the conf room : so sheena itni subah subah office me ?

Sh : haan nupur actually mayank ne ye decide kiya hai ki he wants to marry me .

N (all in anger ) : oh aisa kis base par kaha mayank ne mujhe to nahi bataya abhi tak?

Sh : he decided it yesterday ,and for that only we came here.Use pata chal hi gaya ki tumhare aur mere standard me kitna fark hai

N (Kutil muskan ) : right sheena ,vaise apna standard batana pasand karogi

Sh : shut up nupur tumhara class hi kya hai mere samne ,main ekluti aulad hu jo bhi papa ka hia wo sab mera hai.aur tum tumhare pas kya hai ?no class all behanji type ,u do not deserve mayank

Nupur is watching this and listening it her hand is folded on her chest

N : oh right sheena ,standard rt ?

maine suna hai ki Mehta's to pure kangal ho gaye hai aur unke pas apna karobar chalane ke bhi paise nahi hai to wo mayank ko kya denge aur dusari bat mera standard mujhe mat dikho

tum ye nahi janti ki main uday bhushan ki bahan hu aur unke name ko is shahar ka her bada business man janta hai,aur main chahu to khade khade mehta's ko nilam kar dungi aur tum kuch kar nahi paogi chaho to apne dad se puch lo

aur kya kaha class : wo to dikh hi raha hai ,kapde bhale hi kitne chote kyo na ho jaye class high hi rahegi.kyon

vaise abhi to tumhari izzat me char chand lagane baki hai

and she pushed sheena on the sofa literly usne dhakka dekar bitha diya use

and started the video

sheena was totaly afraid : where she got it

she got up from the place and

Sh : what the H**l is this u B****h?

Nupur came and gave a tigh slap on her face ,on thins sheena also tried hiting her par nupur ke hath ne use rok diya infect nupur ke hath me uski wrist thi and wo chtpata rahi thi,nupur was looking like goddess durga ka kali avatar


N : just shut up sheena. angreji mujhe bhi aati hai.aur haan agar tumhe ab bhi lagta hia ki tum mere mayank ko mujhase chin skati ho to jao chinkar dikhao,unhe sach pata chala to soch lena kya hoga.
khiar tum kyon main hi sabko ye sach bata deti hu.tumane unhe bahut dukh diya hai sheena aur main iske liye kisi bhi had tak ja sakti hu,aur main ye karke rahungi ,i will give this CD to media.phir tumhe class ,standard ka pata chal hi jayega.aur jis comp par tum rob dikha rahi ho wo main aaj hi nilam karwa dungi.samjhi na

Sh was too afraid she ran out from the room and took her father too

SD : kya hua tumhe kya bat karni thi?

S : kuch nahi dad ab chaliye hum yaha kabhi nahi aayenge

and both left mayank was shocked ki kya ho raha hai

he came there and saw nupur was in anger

M : kya hua nupur ,ye sheena aise kyon chali gayi.aur tumhe mujhe kuch batana hai nupur.

N : par mujhe kuch nahi suanan hai

M : nahi nupur this is related to our life ,mujhase bahut bada gunah hua hai

N : bus mayank aur nahi tum yaha baitho bus ,aur koi shabd nahi

Mayank sat and she sat next to him resting her head on his chest video started

His expression were going up and down and when it ended

M : tumhe ye sab ,nupur ?

N : mayank ,tumne kuch nahi kiya hai ye sab sheena ka plan tha,aur ab apne aapko aur mat paareshan karo.

M : haan par tumhe ye mila kaha se ?

N : tumhare kisi anpnymous friend ne mail kiya tha kya ?

He checked the email and called someone

guess who


M : hello ,stupid

G : hi mayank kaise ho aur us buri ladki ki wajah se pareshan to nahi huye na

M : tum nahi janti ki tumane mujhe kis musibat se bacha liya ,thanks a lot

G : koi bat nahi ,i ll call u later thodi jaldi me hu bye

M : bye

N : kaun hai mayank ,batao to sahi

M : CJ

N : CJ ? uska sahc me shukriya ada karna padega achhi tarah se ,,please hamari shadi me aane ke liye kaho na plz


M : thik hai nupur.

but mayank was still had a shock of yesterday he was not replying properly to nupur.he was going again and agina back same thought,he felt ki jaise use kisi buri chij ne chukar ganda kar diya hai uski ye feeling use bahut pareshan kar rahi thi.

N : mayank tum thodi der jakar rest kar lo (they had one room for rest in office)

M : he got up and went thr

N ( kya hua hai mayank ko,itne uda kyon hai ab bhi ab to sab thik ho gaya hai na)

she went back to him

M : mayank was in deep thought and she could see the tears in his eyes

she went near him and asked : kya hua mayank ,ab to sab thik hai na

M : haan nupur

N : par tum thik nahi ho ,ab tak us feeling se bahar nahi aaye ho

M : he nodded his head ,and pulled her and circled around her .

nupur could feel the tears rolling down from his eyes

she tried consoling him but he was in a guilt,how could he

suddenly she got up a call from home

and jaise hi wo uthi uske dupatte ka ek corner mayank ne pakad kar rakha tha aur she just went out and her dupatta was on mayank's hand only.

she told benji ki she will come with mayank so no need to worry

she came inside and saw mayank in same condition ,she swithced off the light and sat next to him.

He came close to her and told ,nupur meri help karogi.please agar tum na karo to bhi main bura nahi manunga.

N : ( mayank main aisa kya karu ki tum un buri yado ke bahar aa jao ) kaho

M : I want to feel you nupur please and saying this he hugged

Nupur knew what he meant and she said : bus itni si bat ke liye mujhase puch rahe ho

M : nahi nupur maine aaj apni limit se jyada mang liya hai

N : nahi mayank aaj maine tumhe khote khote paya hai aur iske liye main jo bhi karu kam hai

dono hi ek dusare ke saye me the and back ground me jo song chal raha tha

dil keh raha hain tujhse yu rishta jod lu
teri dhadkano ko chu lu tera jism odh lu - 2
dil keh raha hain - 2 tujhse yu rishta jod lu
teri dhadkano ko chu lu tera jism odh lu - 2
dil keh raha hain tujhse yu rishta jod lu
teri dhadkano ko chu lu tera jism odh lu

( I won't be updating complete cong ,sorrrrryyyyyyyyyyy for that)


They came close and nupur was blushing badly ,mayank wanted to cappture this moment forever
he wanted to see her like this for rest of his life.nupur looked into his eyes and he came very close to her
his hand was moving across her neck,he took her into the bed and made her to lie.
He was next to her.he kissed her and same was done by nupur ,then he kissed har eyes and again followed by nupur then
her cheek and same nupur did and then he moved to her neck.
and she was melting because she could feel the warmth of his breath.
her hand was running on his back and him hands were busy to hold her
his hands were going ups an down on hers.
she was not able to take it so easily and then he kissed her lips.
and in no time they both had the passionate kiss.

they did not stop here and broke there limits and then (maine kuch nahi dekha)

They made love for the first time and it took them close at the time when they both were scared by the thought of getting separate.

they were holding each other and had a peace,wo isliye kyonki unke andar ke khone ke dar ne unhe ek dusare se itna pas la diya ki ab wo mayank aur nupur nahi rahe wo ab MAYUR ban gaye the

Ab jo bhi comment honge I am ready for that

Edited by arunabehere - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

main first aaa gayi......

wow.......
kya update tha by god.........
dophar ko jo assu beh rahe thae aab ussse dus guna smiles aur khushi mehsoos ho rahi hai.......
mayur were so cute and romantic.......
loved mayur understanding for each other.......
update soon kehne ki kya zarooraat hai woh toh tum kar hi dogi......
luv
mahima
Edited by MjhtFan_Mahima - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Wow amazing update...
Update padhne k baad mera dil khush hogaya...
It vz really rockng n romantic update.
Glad k nupur got 2 knw d truth...
Nupur to full jhansi ki rani lag rahi thi.
sheena ki toh halat kharab kardi...
Lykd how nupur answerd sheena...
Thanx 2 cj 4 telling d truth...
Loved mayur they wer soo romantic...
Ab hamein aap se koi gile shikwe nai hai...dear
Thanx 4 d pm n continue soon.

Kulsum
Edited by kulsumd - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

that was a wonderful update........ur promo was misleading me haa...thank GOD u didnt stretch this sheena's stupid idea....hats off 2 u 4 dat...pls update the next part soon...........

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Posted: 15 years ago
yr it was a fantastic one
loved it a lot lot and lot
mayur toghether again
wow amazing
i am wordlesss yr
at the end they are do dil ek jaaan wowwwwwwwwwwwww

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