Kaisa ye Pyar hai - part 16 page 60 16/05/2010

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Posted: 15 years ago

#261

Originally posted by: Shafoo
tht was niceeeeeee

Thanks a ton for the comments

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#262

Originally posted by: Tarana
gr8 part as usual i just love the way you shows their feelings for each other and the way Mayank respect Nupur but SHEENA plz dont no misunderstanding keep them happy and WITH EACH OTHER :)

cont soon can't wait:)

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Posted: 15 years ago

#263

Originally posted by: mayurg2010
omg..........mayur part was just awesome...........
mindblowing
fantastic.............
superb...................
everything..............................
especially i liked nupur giving warning to mayank .....................
i loved nupur being jealous.........."hello miss main yahi hu" that dialogue was amazing.........
aww..........so sweet..............and i love nupur character in ur ff...........so sweet, simple, shy, but very understanding, caring...........................oh nupur i love u soooo much...................

Thanks a ton for the comments neetu will update soon ,and i loved to here you liked it sweety 😛😛

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#264

Originally posted by: pari.theprinces

oh my gosh aruna......... i m blushing......................!@#$%^&*()_+

the part was fantastic awesome fabulus great superb rocking mindblowing romantic and of course i loved it.......

matlab meri haalat yeh thi ki mein sajan aur adhani ko to pad hi nahi rhi thi direct neeche scroll kar rhi thi ki aage mayur mein kya ho rha hai.......

oh my goodness i have fallen for this part........ if today you ask sumthing from me i can surely give it to you.........

thanx a billion ton for the pm /////////////////

muaah.......

with luv

pari..

Pari you are blushing ,oye kya bat hai?

I am very happy that you are fall this part dear

will update soon

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#265

Originally posted by: nikki028

arunaaaaaaaa................this smiley is perfect to describe my situation aftr readin mayur part.....

ws extremely extremely beautiful...romantic...passionate...n hawwwwt.......i really cud imagine each n evry mayur moment n feel too....😆😆😉😉😉..........this is my mossssssssssssssssssst fav update......coz it is in this mayur sach mein ek ho gaye.....thnxxxxxxxxxx a zillion ton for this update yaara........perfect.....fabulous.......chumeshwarrriiiiiiiiii
update..........👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

I alwys lov ur post because it will have so many colours and today i am very happy to have this many colors as a part of comment nikki ,thanks a lot for this

I hope you will like the next part also

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Posted: 15 years ago

#266

Hey Aruna.....

The update was really nice....

Oye Hoyye... MayUr inthe rain... The dance.. Then Nups unbuttoning his shirt... Then they loose control and.... ahem ahem...

*bows*

The way Nupur gets posessive when another girl hits on Mayank! hahaha.... Really cute... and Mayank telling Nups to call him TUM!!!!

SaJan and Adhaani scenes were also cute!

I'm still lost in MayUr Land!

Continue soon...

Eagerly waiting for the next part....

Hope the promo does not ruin MayUr Love Story!

Jaldi update karna please.....

I'm waiting!

Love

Mina

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Anamika.5

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Posted: 15 years ago

#267

Hey, Aruna

Lovely update

Aww.. Mayur... so cute convo after romance, dear

Loved Nupur's posseivenes for Mayank.

Continue aap

Love,
$hrey@

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#268

Originally posted by: hazraluvroka
hey y u did nt pm me...

i did dear

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Posted: 15 years ago

#269

Thanks for the comments

Here is the next part

part 11

All came back to there respective home

Next day morning

Mayank went our of the town for 2 days business deal
he did not get a chance to call nupur but he left note for her

In the morning .it was actully more bright than ever for nupur,she was still having the effect of mayank.her body was feeling him around and she was blushing badly

She got up and got ready and came to office, and saw the note on the table
N ( oh mayank aaj aur kal office me nahi honge ,koi bat nahi 2 din mujhe hi sab handle karna hai.par mayank ke bina sab kuch kaise suna sa lag raha hai)

She started with her work

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Mayank was in deal and after a long he saw his very good friend

F : hi mayank kaise ho?

M : bahut hi khush ,how about you?

F : i am doing good ,just came here for deal,but i think now u ll get it
So how is marriage preparion going on ,and how is she?

M : everything is fine and i expect you to be in my marriage ok?and she is too nice ,i really love her

F : what about her?

M : she too stupid
and then they attended the deal

result were getting out next day

So mayank thought of staying in the same hotel

Sheena was also there with her father
She saw mayank and then

Sh: Hi mayank kaise ho?

M : main thik hu tum batao ,bade dino bad mil rahi ho?

Sh : haan i was busy aur rat ka kya plan hai ,agar free ho to shall we go out for dinner

M : nahi sheena i have some work will catch u later

Sh : ok mayank
and mayank left from there

Sh ( main aaj tumhe apna banakar rahungi mayank us nupur ko pata to chale ki main kya hua)

In the evening mayank met friend they both had dinner and after that he went to his room

Sheena came to his room :Hi mayank

M : oh sheena hi .aao na

Sh : oh bahar bahut garmi hai na

M : haan sach me bahut

Sh : aur kaisi chal rahi hai shadi ki tayariya

M : sab chal raha hai ,ab wo to last day tak hote hi rahegi na

Sh : right ,chalo main kuch soft drink le aati hu

M : are fridge me hai na le lo waha se,

Sh : nahi mayank tum nahi pioge aur mujhe akele bore lagega

M : thik hai bhai i ll also take

Sh ( yahi to main chahti thi ,bus mera kam ban gaya)

she gave one glass to him and took one
after sometime mayank felt giddy and drowsy and sheena started seducing him
he was still taking nupur's name and it made her wild.

She went very close to him and after some time she was in bed with him ,but he had only nupur's name

She was getting jealous ( bus mayank aaj jinta uska name lena hai le lo ,kal ke bad tum sirf mere hi hoge)

par is pure incident ka video tayar ho chuka tha and it has been mailed to mayank.

Next day in the morning

In the hotel
Mayank saw sheena next to him : he could not believe

He woke her up

M : ye kya hai sheena

Sh : mayank kal rat ko tumane mere sath jabardasti kari ,i tried hard par tumane and she was chowing crocodiles tear

Mayank was not able to believ it he was lost : nahi sheena aisa nahi ho sakta

Sh : aisa hua hai mayank aur tumane meri life barbad kar di hai ,kya hoga ab mera

M : sheena plz chup ho jao maine aisa kuch bhi jankar nahi kiya .he tried but could not remember ki kya hua tha
He was broken ki ab wo nupur se kya kahega ,kya jawab dega use

Sh : mayank bolo kya hoga mera ,kaun karega mujhase shadi

M Shocked : Main

Sh (happy but showed that she is very sad) : mayank sach me

M : haan and he left from there .
he got the deal but lost the life

First time he drank and started his car back to home

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Nupur opened the email :

and when she played the attachment video she was stunned (actually video was started in the middle)

Her world was taken away from her ,wo ek lash ki tarah baithi thi

kyon kiya mayank mere sath aisa kyon kiya ,agar sheena hi pasand thi to mujhase kyon khele.
main akele jee leti thi ,par tumane apne ehsaso ko mujhame kyon bhara .main to ab jee bhi nahi sakti aur mar bhi nahi sakti hu

Kya gunah tha mera jo itni badi saja di mujhe.

she was broken ,wo khud ko smbhale aisi halat me nahi thi.she was crying nonstop
she felt to go and hit her head on the wall

she can not imagine mayank with any one ,kaise bardasht kar sakti hu main tumhe kisi aur ke sath

kyon mayank kyon kiya mere sath.

par mera dil is bat ki gawahi nahi de raha hai mayank aise nahi kar sakte ,mujhe unse bat karni hi hogi,par she is feeling the pain jo uski bardasht ke bahar hai

It is almost eve and nupur usi jagah baithi hai uski duniya puri tarah se khatam ho gayi hai

dusari taraf mayank apne hosh me nahi hai usane drink karke khud ko bahut chot pahuncha li hai
he told his mom ki office me thoda kam hai and he will come home tomorrow morning

his hand is bleeding par uske dil ka dard uske is dard se kahi bada hai

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thats all guys

it was very short Sorry for that

Sheena apne maksad me kamyab ho gayi hai

to kya hoga MAYUR ke relation ka?

Bikhar gaye hai unke sapne

Aur inko bikherane ke liye jo bhi comment dena hai jarur dena .pleasssseeeeeeeeeeee