U believe in ~DESTINY??~ -MN SS!!! last part-pg 33

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samira

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Posted: 15 years ago

#231

yash sweet at the sametime sad update n the song is sooo perfect 4 mayur situation can't wait wat happend next update thanks 4 d pm

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Kanishta

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Posted: 15 years ago

#232

hi
wats up
wow u finally updated
i thought u forgot it
well update was amazing
loved it n ya happy vinayaka chaturthi to you
thnx for pm

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abb01

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Posted: 15 years ago

#233

great part but i am sad

yaar ye adhi kaha se aa gaya bich me

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Mahima

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Posted: 15 years ago

#234

wow

finally an update

happy to see mayank jealous

and nupur and adhiraj...... no ways yaar

jaldi kucch kar yaar

update soon

luv

mahima

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sariska sujaini

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Posted: 15 years ago

#235

Awesum awesum awesum yash

lovely upd8

hope all misunderstandings get sort out soon

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Faria Ferdousi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#236

awesome update yash
amazing
loved it
but cant c nupur with adhi
i want mayur reunion soon
waiting 4 it
update asap

TC

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afsha

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Posted: 15 years ago

#237

Nice update

Well all thgs are gng wrong

Mayu is thking Nups is happy wit Adi n Nups is thking he is happy wit Dia

Errrrrrrrrrrrrr😡😡

Jus not liking these 2 wit others

Both are in pain

Hop they solve thgs out jaldi

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yashasvini

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Posted: 14 years ago

#238

THank u sooo much all of u...........🤗
a lil busy so cudnt reply all of u in person........still Thanks a lot

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yashasvini

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Posted: 14 years ago

#239

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Life was just moving on for both of them.Life without each other was dark yet they din t realise it as may be they got used to that.

Adhiraj n Nupur grew closer to each other n Mayank was totally lost in studies now which ws his first love.

One day,
A: Nupur,mujhe tumse kuch imp baat karni hai,aaj shaam kahin mil sakte hai?
N : hmmm......kya baat hai raj,sab theek to hai na?
A: yeah offcourse tum itna kyun tensed ho?.......well all I can say is the moment I was waiting has finally arrived (with a grin on his face)
N : what?.....ok fine
A : ok dear....I will pick u up at 8 pm
N : yeah ok....GR8.




          Nupur got ready as usual looking beautiful as ever.Adhiraj took her to a place and Nupur found out that it was not his n also someone else's fav restaurant but a new place.They reached there and he blindfolded her.

N : raj,yeh sab kya? tum mujhe kahan le jaa rahe ho?
A: Nupur,kaha na surprise hai.........just wait



             They walked to a place n Raj removed the blind fold.Nupur cudnt believe what she was seeing.

           A round table at the side of a beach,candles,roses,music and everything needed for a perfect date.Nupur was very happy as she has always dreamt of such a romantic date ever and she cudnt believe it had actually come true.

Adhiraj n Nupur sat opposite to each other.They had dinner,Adhiraj staring n admiring Nupur while Nupur still lost in some thoughts.

A: Nupur, tum theek ho na?
N : haan,main theek hoon........I am fine
A: but you dont look to be
N : No Raj,I am quite fine
A: ok you sure na, then close ur eyes
N : what? but why?............again
A: ohhoooo........kahan na.....just close ur eyes
N: ok fine
                     Adhiraj closed her eyes and after a sec asked her to open.Nupur was shocked as she saw a beautiful diamond ring shining in front of her



N: RAj,yeh ring.............

          before Nupur cud say anything,Adhiraj cut her and said

A: Nupur shhhh.............WILL YOU BE MY GIRLFRIEND



                     Nupur was so shocked that she cud not say anything.not even a word came out fro her mouth,seeing this Adhiraj was a bit sad

A: Nupur,what happened? I am waiting
N : Raj, I need time............see its not that I dont like u or something but I think u understand that its a very BIG decision n I need to think abt it..........n.........
A: yeahh.......I understand Nupur.its OK.........take ur own time dear
N : thanks Raj for understanding,u r really sweet...............can we go?
mujhe kuch acha nahi lag raha hai
A : yeah sure

                  Nupur and Adhiraj were in car towards Nupur's house.

N: I am sorry raj, tumhare liye yeh din kitna spcl tha aur meri wajah se.............
A: oh cumon Nupur,its ok........I dont mind.mere liye tum important ho
N : thank u soo much,c u tomorrow.......bye
A: yeah bye

               Nupur went inside her house and Adhiraj left for his home.Nupur without thinking much about the evening went off to sleep.



EXCEL COLLEGE: (evening 7:00 pm)
              It ws a sunday.Nupur was sitting in the corridor.Suhaani arrived their when Nupur called her to come there.

S: Nupur,stupid,Kya baat hai yaar........tumne itni urgent se kyun bulaya mujhe? what happened

            nupur narrated her the whole story what happened yday evening.

S: OMG...!!!!......to kya hua? I dont believe this..........to tune kya kaha? kab aur kaise?

Nupur was silent.

S: oh tell me naa......tume kya kahan?
N : ( in a low voice) NO keh diya
S: what????........I mean WHY?......HOW?.........clearly bata kyun no kahan?
N : Mayankk.................

        Suhaani was shocked but still she was happy to hear that name from her mouth.

S: Mayank kya Nupur?......theek se batao
N: aaj subah main mom ke saath shopping gayi thi...........n main waha DIA se mili
S: Dia....who Dia?.....U mean Mayank ki girlfriend?
N : Noooo...........woh Mayank ki girlfriend nahi cousin hai 😳
S: what???
N : haan........pehle main bhi shock ho gayi thi yeh sunne par, but thats the truth.She is the only girl with whom he is close to and we were like...............and u know when I said my name she was like 'u r Nupur? Mayank talks a lot about u he really adores u a lot.' See Suhaani he likes me so much n me,I was just doubting on him.
S: Oh shitt..!!!so true how can we do that.........ok then?
N : then I called Raj,we met and then I told him NO
S: OMG...!!!!.......I told you na Mayank cant do this,woh bahut acha hai.....tum hi
N: main hi kya?you know na....main kitni stupid hoon n even u dint tell me
S: I dint tell you,stupid.aur waise bhi NUPUR BHUSHAN kisiki baat sunle aisa kabhi hua hai
N: shut up Suhaani..............main ab Mayank se kaise baat karu?
S: yeahh.....u r ri8......u need to say sorry to him......uss din bahut kuch suna diya tha tumne
N: Shall I call him?
S: hmm yeah but dont u think u need to do soemthing special,just a re-union wudnt be enough ri8,it has to be a bit more,I think
N : yeah u ri8 but what ? (she pauses for a minute and then) IDEA!!!!



             After sometime Nupur calls Mayank to Excel collge saying taht she needs to talk to him and that too in a serious tone.Mayank rushes to teh place as soon as possible.And as he enters he sees a note left at the main entrance

                          " I am waiting,come to chemistry lab room"

Mayank was now totally shocked as no one even roams around chemistry lab as it was more of a store room then,so why is Nupur calling him there?

            He reached teh place and saw that all the lights were turned off and he called out

M: Nupur..........you there?

        He then sees a falsh of light and candles buring here and there.In that light flash of light he sees Nupur standing at a corner looking beautiful as always wearing his favourite white dress.

         Mayank ws jsut lost in her beauty and then remembered abt Adhiraj and Nupur and thought to himself that it was not right as she liked Raj.

M: Nupur,kya baat hai? why did u call me here?
N: wo Mayank I need to tell u soemthing abt the person I love

              This made Mayank a bit more sad as it was really hard for him to hear someone else's name from her mouth

M: mujhe kyun baata rahi ho (in a low tone) n waise bhi I know
N: No,u dont and u need to know aur uska naam hai



              Mayank turned to other side to leave from there when he heard a something taht was truly unbelievable for him.

N:                                            Mayank




               Mayank cudnt believe wat he heard.He turned around and saw Nupur with her filled with tears,offcourse of happiness and a big grin on her face.He cudnt stop himself and hugged her tightly so that no one cud ever separate them.They left and

M: But aisa hua kya tha ki tum itni hyper ho gayi thi aur itna chilla rahi thi and Raj ka kya hua?
N: woh na,mujhe laga ki woh Dia aayi thi na uss din party main woh tumhari girlfriend hai isliye maine socha ki mujhe bhi aage bhadna chahiye
M: what? stupid aur agar meri gf hai to kya zaroori hai ki tumhara bhi bf ho.aur haan woh meri gf nahi cousin hai stupid
N: haan,woh mujhe bhi aaj hi pata chala.
M: u r too much Nupur
N: ohhoo ab chodo bhi na.........tum bhi na BY GOD bilkul nahi badle



   Mayank now had a BIG smile on his face.
N: kya hua aise kyun has rahe ho?
M: hmm.kitne din ho gaye tumhara BY GOD nahi suna ek baar phir kaho na
N: oho BY GOD Mayank. 😃 😃
               Now both were lost into each other and they were now TOGETHER FOREVER.

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Love sometimes need a medium to let people know that actually exists.If you are destined to be together you will be,one day or otherwise it was not in ur destiny.

so people DO YOU BELIEVE IN DESTINY?



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I know the last part is not so effective but I wanted to complte it asap so wrote it hurrily.I am really sorry.

Thank u so much all for reading my SS and bearing me n my late updates.
Thank u soo much all 🤗

Edited by -Yash- - 14 years ago