U believe in ~DESTINY??~ -MN SS!!! last part-pg 33 - Page 23

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: fariaa70


hey yash
beautiful update dear
so maynk was happy 2 knw that nups still loves him.
but mayank was tensed to c nups crying

adhi is princi's son
and he was mesmerized by nups beauty
i hope he doesnt create any difficulties b/w mayur


mayank wanted to talk with but nups didnt listen to him
kahi pher se in dono main koi misunderstanding create na ho jai.

and abt ur promo- it was scary yaar.
nups ad adhi getting closer and adhi arrange a dinner date 4 nups.
nehiiiiiiiiiiiiii- i cant c nups with adi.
i want mayur together

good update yash
loved it
keep updating



thanks farii
will update asap
i am a bit busy with studies 😔
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sariska_mjht

Yash

awesum upd8

loved it

waitin for d next one


thank u sariska 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: achoose

awesome part dear..loved it.............


thanks aswathi dii 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: samiralovemayur

awesome udpate yash thanks 4 updating

n nice promo why adi n nups dinner date????😔
plzzzz udpate soon
n thanks 4 d pm


thanks Samira
glad u liked it
will update asap 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Firegurl

mindblowing update
wonderful n thnx for pm


thank u Kanishta
u r such a sweetheart 🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey friends,
First of all
Id-Mubarak and a very happy Vinayaka Chaturthi to all of you. 😊
may allah and bappa bless you all and may all your dreams come true.




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EXCEL COLLEGE : (next day morning)
Nupur that day decided that she would never talk to Mayank again and will never think of him again while Mayank decide that he would talk to her and try to solve all the misunderstandings.
Suhaani,Nupur and Mayank,Purab were busy in their respective studies.Everyday Mayank tried to talk to Nupur but he failed every time.

Like these.........
days passed on and Mayank saw Nupur getting closer to Adhiraj.
Adhiraj used to like Nupur's nautanki and her cute acts and Nupur used to love his caring nature and attitude.
This made them become friends very easily.




One day,
Adhiraj was in Library and so as Mayank.Nupur and Suhaani arrived their to clarify some doubts.They dint notice Mayank there.

S & N: Sir,woh hume kuch doubts the to........
A : yeah sure,comeon guys..........college ke timings khatam ho chuke hai to u need not call me sir now.........you can call me Adhiraj
N : par sir......
A : phirse sir
S : ok fine......Adhiraj.We were just wondering what would be the topic for our next project? I was just thinking if this time we work on serious social issues like ragging in colleges or harrasment like things?
A : yeah......thats a very fine idea

Suhaani and Adhiraj were discussing while Nupur went around the library to just check it out and saw Mayank there seriously reading.This time even he dint notice her.As soon as she saw him she came back to Adhiraj and Suhaani.

S : thank you much sir........ah ah..!!! Adhiraj
A : yeah right......my pleasure
N
: ho gaya.......chale?
A : kya hua Nupur?.....thodi tense lag rahi ho?...........kahin jaana hai kya badi jaldi mein ho?
N : nahi........aisi koi baat nahi hai
A : ok......well.......what are you guys doing tonight? its weekend na....any plans?
N : nahii......you know this Suhaani is soo boring and my parents wont allow me to go anywhere if someone doesnt come with me and so we both end up watching TV on weekends.
A : thats very cool.......😆
so how about do having fun tonight?..........I mean can we go out for a dinner?




Nupur and Suhaani were so shocked to hear that from Adhiraj.They dint understand how to react.
Nupur held Suhaani's hand and excused themselves and went to a corner.

N : Dinner???
S : yaa.....woww..!!! it would be great
N : lekin,main kabhi kisike saath akele bahar nahi gayi hoon yaar
S : Oh hoo.!!! to kya hua.......dear.....its Adhiraj sir, he is a gentleman
N : No Suhaani........mujhse nahi hoga
S : arey why not??.......remember tab tum Mayank ke saath date pe jaane par bhi kitna soch rahi thi par maine tumhe convince karke bheja an dyou said you had fun na?
This line made Nupur a little sad. 😔
S : hmmm......ok fine.....I think you should go.please dont think about this so much......go for it.

Suhaani and Nupur went to Adhiraj and they agreed for his treat.

S : thank you so much Adhiraj but I am a little busy today.I need to go to a party with parents tonight but Nupur is free and she can come with you...........right Nupur?
A : Oh thats great.......ok Nupur I will pick you up at 8 in the evening.Is atht fine?
N : yes
A : thats great.Ok bye girls see you later
S & N : bye Adhiraj





Bhushan house:
Nupur got ready for the dinner date in a beautiful red dress.


Adhiraj got mesmerized by her beauty and fell in love all over again.They were all silent in their entire journey.
They reached a classy restaurant in the outskirts of the city which was UNFORTUNATELY Mayank's fav restaurant too

N : yeh restaurant?
A : haan,I love this restaurant.The food is so good here and I love the place.I am sure you will love it too.Please come.




They ordered their dinner and were formally talking to each other.Though it was a very silent and a formal dinner Adhiraj enjoyed it a lot as it was with NUPUR,the girl who he loved to the bits.

Low and soft Music was palying in the background and all the other couples were dancing.

A : Nupur,shall we dance?
N : hmm.......no I cant
A : come on Nupur, its just a dance........PLEASE
N : hmm.....OK

Adhiraj and Suhaani moved to the dance floor and swayed slowly and smoothly to the music.

Mayank came to the restaurant with his cousins and Dia.He settled down on his favourite place and was waiting looking around the restaurant.
And then suddenly he saw Nupur dancing with Adhiraj.He was hocked as well as sad.He felt that he was left all alone for the first time.

Nupur too saw Mayank there with some people around him and also DIA.Even she felt very bad to see him with her but........
She tried her max to look happy being with Adhiraj.
Dont know whether she was trying to fool Mayank or herself.




Mayank's POV:I could not see her with someone else but what can I do even.May be She wanted to be with him and may be loved him,Ohh..!!! why is it so paining to even say this.True,this love gives us nothing except pain

He told his friends and Dia that he was not feeling well and left from there hiding tears in his eyes an dpain in the heart.

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=43E9Q9J8Lm0[/YOUTUBE]

(guys this is one of my songs I thought that this would be perfect for the situation so please imagine MaYur and Adhiraj in the song)




EXCEL COLLEGE:
Nupur was walking in the corridor all alone and she saw Mayank coming from the opposite side.This time she was not running way but wanted to face him.Mayank came near her
M : hey Nupur,Suhaani ne kal raat phone kiya tha aur yeh book maangi thi.........use de dena
N : ohh...!!! sure (she was a bit shocked as she was expecting some other question from him)
M ; ok bye......c you
N : yeah....bye
Mayank moved a forward and then came back again.
M : Nupur,congrats
N : kis liye?
M : tum jaanti ho..........kis liye.I am really happy for you.I wish tumhari smile hamesha tumhare chehre pe bani rahe jo shayad meri wajah se kho gayi thi............but anyways.....All the best
N : Mayank......nahi.....woh........thanks (may be first time Nupur was falling short of words)
M : bye Nupur
N : byee



Nupur's POV:
What happened to me? Why am I feeling sad for him?Why am I feeling guilty?I should be happy now that I am with a person who understands me and knows my value,but why am I feeling as if I am the reason behind his sadness.

Mayank was happy as Nupur was happy and Nupur was happy (may be ) as she had Adhiraj now in her life.





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thats it guyss
I hope u like the part
I know its a very sad part may be all of you would kill me for writing such things but cant help



Love,
Yash






Edited by -Yash- - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

i fond b4 ur pm lovely update yash it was simply nice update

hope we get mayur next part


May
Allah almighty bless u with
Sehat,
Rahat,
Nemat,
Izzat,
Barkat,
Dault,
Salamti,
Hayati,
Kamyabi &
unlimited khushiyan :)

EID MUBARAK

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Posted: 15 years ago
Awesom update
i just read ur ss..it was awesom
plzz add me in ur pm list
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Posted: 15 years ago
wonderful update dear..hope mayur will clear out all their misunderstandings soon...............................
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey yash very happy Vinayaka Chaturthi to you. 😊

loved u r update.....i really love it yaar!!
but i am sad for mayuuu 😭😭😭....
hope all misunderstanding will sort out soon.......😊
Edited by lovely.ravs - 15 years ago

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