~Dushman se pyaar~ (AR&RM ff) part2 pg27 - Page 18

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey guys thank u all so much for the comments will reply to them individually soon
next part coming up hope u guys like it
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Part 2

Previously

Riddhima and Muskaan plan about how to celebrate their dad's birthday and they are very happy but it gets spoiled wen a phone call comes and interrupts these girls happiness

Continues

Riddhima- Muskaan Chalo mere Saath' hum taxi se jayenge

Muskaan- haan di chalo

Riddhima and Muskaan try to stop the taxis and the autos but all their efforts go in vain..

Then Suddenly they see a huge Car in front of them from which two boys get down..

They show a pice of paper'

Boy1- kya aap hume yahaan ka raasta bata sakti hai?

Riddhima doesn't even look at the paper and tells- sorry mujhe nahi pata

Boy2-Armaan chal kisi aur se poochte hai

Armaan-Rahul theek hai chal

Suddenly an idea Strikes Muskaan and tells - excuse me address dikhayi ye

Riddhima- Muskaan hume hospital jaldi pahunchna hai!! (whispers to muski)

Muskaan-Di usi ka to intezaam kar rahi hoon

Riddhima-Kya

Muskaan-tum nahi samjhogi

Turns back to the boys

Muskaan- waise yeh yahaan se thodi door hai aur hum wahiin ja rahe hai hum aapko bata sakte hai raasta

Ridzi puuls muski back'

Riddhima-muskaan tu paagal ho gayi hai dono raaste alag side mein hai aur agar hum inki madad karenge to hum hospital nahi pahunch payenge!

Muskaan-Di meine kaha na ke mujh par chod do

Armaan- waise aap chahe to hum aapko us jagah par drop kar sakte hai aapki bhi help ho sakti hai aur hamari bhi..

Rahul-Haan hum dono ki help ho sakti hai

Riddhima-nah..

Muskaan- haan chalo jaldi

Wen thy reach near the hospital Muskaan tells to stop and tells tht thy had to get down there and tells- sorry hamare papa hospital mein bahut serious hai aur humare paas aur koi chara nahi tha

Aap yahaan se waapas jakar wahaan se right le lijiye aap ko jahaan jana hai aap pahunch jayenge and they leave and run to hospital

Riddhima- Muskaan tune yeh theek nahi kiya!!

Muskaan- to aap kya chahti thi hum late ho jaye papa ke liye meine yeh kiya aur meine unhe sorry bhi bol diya aur meine to unhe raasta bhi bata diya di..

Riddhima sees a doctor and asks- doctor hamare papa Mr.Shashank Gupta Kaise hai?

Doctor-ab unki haalat baut kharab hai aur unke ilaaj ke liye bahut paise lagenge

Riddhima- aap paison ki fikar mat kijiye hum intezaam kar lenge aap bas unka ilaaj kijiye

Doctor-riddhima tumhare papa ke ilaaj ke liye 5 lakh chaihye

Riddhima-Doctor mein paison ka intezaam kar loongi

Doctor- Mujhe pata hai ke tum kar logi par paise ek mahine ke andar bhar dena hoga aap logon ko

Ridhima-Doctor haan hum bhar denge Maa kahan hai?

Doctor-woh apke papa ke paas hai

Muskaan is still in shock after listening to her fathers condition and starts crying'

Ridhima- Muski apne aap ko sambhal, hum papa ko kuch nahi hone denge, hume himmat nahi harna hoga, dekho hume aaj hi sheher jana hoga aur papa le ilaj ke paison ka intezaam karna hoga.

Muskaan pulls herself together'

Muskaan-haan di mein bhi aaongi aap ke saath.. meine aaj hi paper mein Malik and Garewal company ka advertisement dekha hai unhe 2 employees chahiye hum log chalte hai

Riddhima-ok maa se bolne ke baad hum chalte hai' Muskaan and Ridddhima start going toward the ward when they see their mother crying on the ground outside the room.

R: mamma, chup hojaye pappa thik hojayenge, please mamma aap aise rote rahenge yeh aapke health ke liye thik nahi hai.

M: haan mamma pappa ko bhi bilkul acha nahi lagega agar unhone aapko iss halath main dekha tho...

Mom: unki halath bohut buri hai, darr lagtha hai mujhe ki kya woh kabhi waapis ayenge..

M: ofcourse ayenge mamma, aap apne dimaag se aise soch hatalijiye, hum pappa ko kuch nahi hone denge

R: aap pehle kuch khalijiye aapne subah se kuch nahi khaya hoga

Mom: tumhare pappa ko iss halath main chodkar main kuch nahi khasakti, unhone bhi tho subah se kuch nahi khaya tha na.

M: aap zidd mat kijiye, chaliye kuch khalijiye

Mom: mujhe bhuk nahi hai, pehle hume woh paise ka intezaam karna hoga warna woh log operation nahi karenge.

(she starts walking and due to lack of food and she couldnt take in all the stress she faints.0

R&M: Mama!!!!

After some time:

R: woh unohne khana nahi khaya tha aur phir pappa ka news.... bas isiliye faint hogayi hai. Thoda rest lengi tho bilkul thik hojayegi.

M: hope so di, mama yeh sab aur zaada bardasht nahi karpayegi. She shouldnt stress this much, unke health ke liye thik nahi hai. Lekin yeh unhe kaun samjhayega?

R: hume unka khayal rakhna hoga, aur unhe yeh ehsaas dilana hoga ki pappa bohut jaldi waapis ghar ajeyenge, aur haan maine mamma se kehdiya hai ki hum aaj ji Mumbai jarahe hai paison ke bhanduwast karne ke liye.

Muskaan chalo ek baar pappa ko dekhlengi before we leave.

They both make their way into the ward and as soon as they enter the room their eyes get filled with tears seeing their dad unconscious and in a bad condition.

Ridhimma: papa aapko kuch nahi hoga, aapki dono betiyaan kabhi aapko kuch hone nahi denge. Bas humare waapis aneka intezaar kijiye aap and be strong. Hum jaldi aapko yaha se wapis ghar lejayenge.

Muskaan: haan papa aur aapko yaad hai na hume tho aapki Birthday bhi celebrate karni hai, aur maine tho already sab kuch plan kardiya hai, cakes, sweets' (she cldnt take it anymore and starts crying) pappa.. plz pappa kuch tho boliyein na di papa kuch bol kyun nahi rahe hai'

Ridhimma: are muski kuch nahi hua hai, doctors ne unhe medicine diya hai bas isiliye' muskaan chalo bahar mera intezaar karo.

Muskaan goes away

Ridhimma:pappa hum jarahe hai, aur jab hum ayenge aapko yaha se leke hi ghar jayenge. Love you papa.

Goes out.

Ridhimma: chalo muski hume jaldi packing karna warna hum late hojayenge.

Thats the end of part 2 hope u guys like it and dont forget to press the like button and comment😉
lots of luv
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Edited by pari_smile - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
great part
hope their dads ok
con soon

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