~Dushman se pyaar~ (AR&RM ff) part2 pg27 - Page 15

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: xxiheartmexx

wow paris'

grt cs haan...!!

Guptas r quite impressive...!!

Malliks...billy toh waise ke waise...but wat abt ananya...!!

plastic surgery kara ke aayi hai kya...!!

hehehe...!!

Garewals..gud 2...!!

waitin for d part 1...!!

do updt soon...!!

PS: nt in such a gud mood...so nt at all usin emocts...!! n specially dat ROFL one...!! :((

--radz--

lolz raani ji thanx for the comment
lolz haan plastic surgery u must be used to it na lolz😆
we will cont soon
awww hope ur mood is gud now
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: palz_ksg

hey pariss...nice CS......

jaldi update karna..................

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: amruta04

hey pari

nice character sketch
waiting for d part
do continue soon
take care and thanks for the pm
Luv
Amruta

hii amruta
thank u for comemnting!!
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: -Dreamy_Girl-

Love the sketch........... Thanks for the pm....

Continue soon.....

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: kasufan4ever

Hey Pari n Sweety..

lovleyyyy CS....
just waiting to read the part eagerllyy..
plzz cont.soon..
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Prinnia

HEYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY
PARIIIIIIIsssss

The CS was good
continue soon with the parts
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lots of love
prinz
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Radhika Shah

Hey!

The CS was Awesome!
Thanks for the PM,,,
Continue soon with 1st part..

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: ---ishita---

nice c.s

continue soon
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hii
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey guys first of all we are very sorry for the delay, actually i was having exams still having them and pari had net problem. Anyways here is part1 hope u guys like it.

Part1:

A beautiful warm day, the sun was shining bright making the water in the lake shine like pearls. You could hear the bird chirping from the near by trees. Near the lake two beautiful girls were playing, splashing water on each other. They had huge smiles on their faces, and the voice of their laughter could be heard from far away. Neither their faces showed any fear nor any worries. All you could see was joy and happiness' as bright as the rays of the sun.

M: ridzi di rukiye na, di stop aaj main aapko chodne waali nahi hun. (Starts running behind her)

R: are meri pyaar si sis, pehle mujhe pakdo tho sahi.

After a lot of running around, they finally settled under the shade of a big tree. Even after all the tiredness by playing around in a hot day their smiles never left their faces. It was as if that was the only emotion they knew, always being happy and smiling.

M: ridzi di aap se ek baat puchu?

R: haan sure puch na kya hai? (gently strokes muski hair who laid her head on ridzi lap)

M: who pappa ka BDay hain na Sunday ko, tho humne sweets tho kharidha hi nahi??

R: Kya?!? Yes sawal tha , maine socha tu kuch serious sawal puchne wali thi.

M: serious muskaan ko tho serious ka meaning bhi nahi pata hai. (starts laughing)

R: who tho main jaanti hun Ms not serious, hmm acha lekin hum sweet kyun kharidhenge, pappa ko tho sweets pasand hi nahi hai.

M: haan lekin unka BDay hai tho sweet tho hona hi chahiye, hum na 2 kilo ke laddo aur maisurpak aur'

R: chup, agar aisi baat hai tho yeh do do kilo kyun ek box kaafi hai aur waise bhi who cake tho khayenge na so no more sweets. Unhe pasand nahi hai waste hojayega

(muski sits up)

M: are main hun na pappa nahi khayenge tho main khalungi jab muski hai tho sweets kabhi waste nahi hote'(just realises what she said) umm mera matlab tha ki hum na unhe na..

R: Muskaan tu directly kyun nahi kehdethi hai ki tujhe sweets khane ka mann hai

M: gets excited..tho agar main aapko directly pucha tho aap maanloge

R: Nope, bohut sweets khathi ho tum aur mamma na kaha ki no more sweets for u, ab ghar chalein mamma bhi market se waapis agayi hogi.

Ridzi looks at muski who made a sad face.. and was murmuring

M: koyi mera baat nahi suntha, sweets hi tho maange the maine aur main utna zaada bhi nahi khaati..

R: acha baba bas bas ghar chalne ke baad khalena

M: Yes!!! Hugs her mera plan work hogaya (starts dancing)

R: kaunsa plan?..

M: are yahi ki I make a sad face and you fall for it ( realises what she just said and closes her mouth with her hand. Sometimes she did talk a lot, umm ok well maybe change that to always)

R: chutki chal ghar chal tu'''''

They walked to their house while chatting.

M: tho di aapko rajkumar jaisa ladka chahiye?

Ridz stops walking and becomes kind of nervous,

R: isse kaise pata chala maine tho isse bhi nahi bataya tha, tho patha kaise chala unless'.Muski tune phirse mera diary padha, maine tujhe mana kiya than a, kya kya padha tune??

M: bas yahi ki apko rajkumar jaisa ladka chahiye, jo aapki bohut khayal rakhe aur apne aur aapke pura family ka bhi. Jo kabhi aapko ya apke family ko dukh na pohunchahiye, koyi jo aapko'hmm kyat ha wooh are yaar main bhulgayi phirse padke batahi hun.

Ridzi slightly hits her on her head

R: nahi tum era diary phirse nahi padegi, aur waise bhi main tho apne diary main kuch bhi likhdethi hun. Mujhe koyi rajkumar nahi chahiye, main uss ke liye thodi na tum sabko chodke jaane waali hun.

M: aap kya, main tho aapko jaane bhi nahi dungi, lekin haan bohut hi achi tarah se describe kiya tha apne rajkumar ko di aapne. (starts laughing while walking forward)

R: tum bhi na mujhe apna diary kahi chupana chahiye, pata nahi isse mere secret hiding places ke pata kaise chaljaate hai. Tu meri chod apne rajkumar ke bare main bata mujhe.

M: pff mera rajkumar?!?! Maine tho kabhi uske baarein main socha bhi nahi aur naahi main sochungi. Kisi ladke ke liye main apna parivaar chodke ke jaane waali nahi hun, aur waise bhi yeh sab love main main believe nahi karthi. Mere liye tho parivaar ka pyaar hi kaafi hai.

R: aww mere sweetu sis, chal hum yeh baatein kabhi aur pura karenge, aur sach kaha tumne uske liye hum kyun apna parivaar chode.

They reach their house. Which is just a small simple house, with a pretty garden at the front.

R: acha muskaan tu jaake haath dhole main khana lagathi hun, pappa kaam pe gaye hai aur mom market se kuch sambjhiyan kharidne ke liye gayi thi lekin ab thak ajana chahiye pata nahi ayi kyun nahi?.. anyways tu ja

M: ok di sweets ke bare main mat bhulo

They both sit at the table and start eating when the phone starts ringing, ridzi goes and gets it while muski runs behind her and presses the loudspeaker button as she always does. Their expressions change from happy to completely shocked, they have tears in their eyes, which is very unusual as they rarely ever cried. They put the phone down and rushed out of the house'

well thats the end of part, we will try to update part2 soon.

loads of luv frm both

paris'😊

Edited by pari_smile - 15 years ago

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