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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: arlover_aditi

heyya
u knw i juzz came across this ff
nd oh my god i seriously loved it
the way ridz character has been portrayed its so different from our riddhima yet so interesting
loved the promo
do continue soon
and yea plz add me to ur pm list

loads of love
take care
aditi

thankkksss aditi. hi i am saniya. nice to meet u. and hope you'll enjoy it.
love
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Posted: 15 years ago

Part 5

RECAP-"hello miss gupta. Very pleased to meet you" armaan said with a smirk.

"ARMAAN YOU" She shouted at the top of her voice.

"Calm down miss gupta and not armaan, SIR for you" he said with his stupid grin as Riddhima was ready to collapse.

'SIR? NAHI'

' oh god meine app ka kya bigada hai? Huh? Tell tell. Aaj subah subah kiski shakal dekhi thi ki pure din ki vaat lag gayi. First I had to run from mum after wearing that shorts, I wonder if mum would even let me in the house. Man ridzy do you even have enough money to live in a hotel ya phir aaj ki raat road par sona padeja. Imagine homeless Riddhima!!!! NAHI!!! Oh god mein to soch bhi nahi sakti. Ok so where was I? man what the hell what the main topic? Ask the baldy dude!!! NO! bad idea. Uhmm ya look around. Ya ya that's it. Sh*t I am here in that baldy's cabin infront of Armaaannnnnnnnnn. NAHI!!!. I just remembered that I have to work under this perv. He is ma boss. How come? He around ma age and already got the post of manager. How? Well for right now that 'how' can go to hell cuz the main issue is that HE WILL NOT LEAVE ME. I mean ridzy how can you be such a dork? Apne boss ko he punch and kicks ke attack kiya! Man Ridzy I am very disappointed with you. I mean where the f**k is your self control? Agar subah se control kar rahi thi, THEN WHAT HAD HAPPENED THERE OUTSIDE THE LIFT??? Wat? I mean what the hell? You can't blame everything on me. Did I make myself clear girl. It was all cuz of that jerk. I mean common can't he just keep his goggle eyes to himself? Was it too hard for him to keep his big gob shut in the lift? No na? couldn't he give those lousy comments in his head like I always do. Right na? see I m always right. *sigh* par meri to koi suntan hi nahi hai. But now what ridz? Think women think! YA EUREKA!!!! Mere dimaag ka bulb on hogaya. Wayhay. Now watch armaan oops I mean 'Sir', agar is Sir ke bacche ka mein sar (head) nahi kha gayi na to I'll change ma name!!!! Armaan you will curse the time you hired me. If you think that I am gonna get scared of that stupid smirk, then think again 'SIR'( btw I did got a little scared first, but just a little, sachhi). Hehehe, I will treat him like a 50 years old hag and soon enough you will beg me to call u by your name. Well one thing is for sure that I will make your life a LIVING HELL! Huh!!!' her silent monologue cum promise was broken by armaan annoying giggles.

"what happened miss gupta? How come you have got beads of sweat over your forhead? The air-conditioning is working fine, then it that sweat because of fear? Huh?" Armaan said trying his best to suppress his laugh but couldn't help with slight giggles which caused Riddhima to frown.

'ya ya has lo armaan. Waise bhi yeh hasi zyaada din nahi reh ne wali cuz now I'll make sure of it.'

"uhmm no armaan oops I mean sir, I am not scared. Why should I be? I mean I didn't see a ghost that I'll be scared ya unless you think of yourself as a ghost, then that's not my problem you see. Well for right now thank you so much for the job and I promise that you will really enjoy working with me" she said with a smirk matching his and left the room but not before giving him a wink.

Armaan's eyes popped out of his socket.

'OOOOKKKKK! Now I wasn't expecting this. Armaan dude you need to know what's going in her mind. Don't forget she is such a bomb ke jab phenk ti hai, to BOHOT dard hota hai. Man it's still hurting me between my legs. She is TOOO strong and hard for a girl. Mein vo vala phrase aaj tak sirf suna tha ki 'looks can be deceptive' aur aaj dekh bhi liya. Miss Riddhima gupta you are soooo gonna curse the moment you kicked me and trust me miss gupta, I WILL MAKE YOUR LIFE A LIVING HELL and that's armaan mallik's promise oops I mean armaan khanna's promise for you!!! Muhahaha.'

"armaan sir I still don't get it why did you give her the job when we didn't even interviewed the rest of the candidates and I am sure we could have found much better candidate than her" the man in his late thirties asked with a puzzled expression. Armaan frowned hearing the man calling him 'sir'.

"Mr. Mishra! firstly, I told you not to call me sir anymore. Remember the decision I took last month and the whole office promised me to support in it and I would like to make one thing very clear, and I mean it when I say very clear. I don't want Riddhima gupta to know about my real identity. I will introduce myself to her as 'Armaan khanna' not 'THE Armaan mallik'- the heir of mallik empire. Did I make myself clear?" armaan asked sternly looking at him angrily for the unpardonable sin he just did. The man nodded his head in approval.

"And you don't need to interfere who I choose. Ok? I met the girl outside the office and I liked her, so thought of hiring her" armaan answered his main question.

"yes sir, I mean armaan". He said meekly looking at the floor not being able to meet armaan's stern gaze. He mentally kicked himself for calling armaan 'sir' even after knowing his decision.

"Hmm, I better leave now", armaan announced while retreating from Mr. Mishra's cabin.

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'Oh god plz , is baar bacha lena mummy se, pukka pura din swear nahi karoongi, aur jhoot bhi uhmmm I'll try not to lie as well, but only try huh! Not promises. You know na how much I hate to break your promises. Phichle (last) mahine bhi I promised you not to swear and lie but I did; you see some things are hard to prevent. Common godji aap ke saath bhi kabhi kabhi aisa hota hoga nahin? For example you have to listen to my ramblings even if you don't want to. Right? Are you even listening to me or not godji? Helooo anybody home? ARGH ridzy!!!! WAT THE F**K YOU THINK YOU WERE DOING? Till the time you were talking to god was fine and humanish but what was that 'anybody home thing?' I mean how? No really how can you always manage to prove yourself more insane than people think you are? OMFG NOW STOP IT MIND!!! Plz can I come to the main topic which I very unlikely seemed to remember right now. And before I forget the f**king main topic KNOCK ON THE DOOR RIDZY' as her mental battle came to an hault, she ever so lightly knocked on the door.

KNOCK KNOCK

As soon as she heard the footsteps approaching the door, she quickly plastered a big smile and waited patiently ( which she normally doesn't) outside her door. Then the door slightly creaked open and padma popped her head outside the door to check who the visitor is?

"hi mum!!!! Guess what I got the job. Mum aren't you gonna hug me, aren't you gonna plant a kiss on my forehead saying your usual ghisa pita dialogue 'jiti raho beti', which I thoroughly find it absurd, I mean common mum I ain't dying that you are wishing me that. But today wish me whatever you fancy except that 'sadaa suhagan raho' vala dialogue cuz you know na mum how much it irks me. I mean like common agar mein hamesha hi suhagan (married) rahoongi to meri independence to hell mein nahi chali jayegi and…" she abruptly stopped her rambling seeing padma fuming in anger and she could even see smoke coming out from her mum's ears.

"uhmm mummy are you ok na?" ridzy asked slightly confused at what made her mother so angry.

'God ab inhe kya hua? Ok ridzy think I bet tune hi kuch kiya hoga. Kya? Uhm look around! Nah kuch bhi nahi hai. Aaj to neighbour ke backyard mein trash bhi nahi phenka tha. Then what's wrong with her. Jeez man! my mum and her moods!!!', Her chain of thoughts were broken by padma's ear deafning reply.

"WHAT'S WRONG WITH ME? Huh? After running from home today like that you have the nerve to ask me that friggin question?" padma barked as realisation dawned upon ridzy that she ran away this morning and she is still wearing shorts.

'Sh*t, crap, f**k!!!! god I m soooooo screwed. Now what is coming up, I have nooo idea. Think ridz think. A lecture? Nah this time you are badly screwed girl. Ab to god hi bachaye tujhe. But girl atleast do something, don't stand here like a ghost, say something, uhmm ya apologise you goof'.

"I am really sorry mum. Muje aise ghar se nahi bhaag na chahiye tha. Lekin mein kya karti, I saw my bus coming from our window and I didn't wanted to get late for my interview" Riddhima lied blatantly.

'wow ridz you're going good baby. Kya excuse maara hai!!! MUAH! CHII ridz you are not allowed to kiss a girl and definitely not yourself. Jeez women remember you are straight. SHUT UP NOW and come back to earth'.

"Oh really now! Riddhima I am so warning you, stop these lying or one day you'll be in big trouble, we can't even see the main road from our window, so bus ko kya udte hue dekha?"

'god! No really tell me who is in heaven who hates me so much? Man aaj kal to ek jhoot bhi nahi bol parahi hoo. Ridzy you are so losing your skills girl!!! Ok now cover up. But how? Uhmm… ya that's it. Change the topic girl and use that skill in which you have done PHD!'

"mum are you planning to have a conversation with me on the door step only or you're thinking to call me in MY house as well" Riddhima said while pressuring on the word 'my' as well as changing the topic.

'wah ridz what a born topic changer you are? Thank god at least yeh habbit kisi kaam mein to aayi.'

"you're right dear. Even I have no intentions to have a conversation on the door step, so you may leave now"

Riddhima's eyes popped out of its socket when she heard that.

"mum? You're kicking me out. Where will I go mum. Aap ko to pata hai na ki zamana kitna kharab hai", she said in a melodramatic voice, trying her best to fool her mum with her drama skills.

"aree nahi nahi beta. Muje pata hai ki zamana kitna bura hai, so mein tuje sirf aaj 2 hours ke liye ghar se nikalongi but garden se nahi." Her mum said with a smirk. It took ridz a few moments to realise what her mum was actually talking about. As soon as comprehension dawned upon her, her eyes widened.

'KYA? No!!!! meaning is mum talking about locking me in the garden which is filled with mum's relatives- her plants. NAHIIIIII'

"plz mum not that punishment. I mean anything but that punishment" Riddhima begged, but padma just dragged her to the garden holding her elbow and locked the door even after riddhima's pleads.

' man I really losing my skills, ab to mummy bhi mere rone dhone wale natak mein nahi aati. But I just can't stay here, I mean look at that plant, it's hell creepy. Ridzy girl find a way out of here. Uhmm but how? OH YA! That's it, when will my bollywood skills will come handy. Muhaha, I can climb the pipe and enter my room through window. YESSSSS. Thanks bollywood.'

Then she started climbing the pipe and after lots of hassle she finally reached the sill of the window, but suddenly he leg slipped. She was about to fall from the pipe but she caught hold of the window sill and was hanging on the window.

"BACHAOOO MUMMY BACHAO!!!!" she screamed her lungs out while swaying right to left in the mid air as tears started to roll down her cheeks.

'GOD PLEASE HELP.*sniff* Mein marna nahi chahti. Aree abhi to meri shaadi bhi nahi hui hai.*sniff* Aree shadi chodo, ek boyfriend bhi nahi mera abhi tak and god I will definitely not a die as virgin.*sniff sniff*'

"SOMEBODY HELP! Mum where are you, your darling daughter is swinging between life and death" Riddhima cried out.

"what the hell are you doing here?" her mum was hell shocked to see her only daughter hanging from the window.

"how did you reach here? Did you use the pipe? Riddhima how many times do I have to tell you not to do these kind of things!!!"

"aree mum lecture baad mein dena. Pehle muje upar khincho, isse pehle godji muje hamesha ke liye upar bulale", she said shaking her head.

' kaise maa di hai? Aise waqt par bhi lecture shuru kar rahi thi. Agar break na lagaya hota to saari raat yahi latkaye hua rakhti jab jab tak unka lecture nahi khatam hota. *sigh* mera kya hoga?'

"oh ya uhmm sorry" padma mentally kicked herself for acting so dumb in front of her daughter. Then she slowly and calmly pulled the heavy thing up and in the room through window.

'it was a longggg day today. Glad it ended. Man never had so many adventures in one day. God please ab muj par par rehem karna' with that she hit the bed ready to sleep and take her tiredness out.

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"wake up Riddhima, it's no time to sleep" a surreal voice made Riddhima slightly stir in her sleep.

"huh who's this?" Riddhima asked rubbing her eyes and blinking a few times to clear the blur. Then what she saw blew her off guard and she abruptly stood up tossing her duvet off her.

"OMG who are you and you look exactly like me. Are you a ghost? Can I touch you? Will you disappear? CRAP I am getting scared and what is this white light emitting from you. ARE YOU REAL OR NOT?" ridzy screamed at beads of sweat formed over her forehead.

"calm down Riddhima. I will not harm you. I came here to talk to you about someone very important" ridzy heard her surreal clone saying that to her solemnly.

"aboouutt wwhhhooo?" ridzy sluttered as words weren't coming out her mouth. She was scared out of her wits.

"about 'Your Mr. A" ridzy's eyes became wide hearing that letter.

"My Mr. A…?" she asked puzzled wondering what's this Mr. A dude has to do with this ghostly figure.

"yes he is yours and you are his. The only difference is that you know the initial of his name and he has dreams about your past life…" Riddhima cuts her surreal clone in the middle and interrupts.

"Hold a sec girl! What do you mean by past life? See I don't believe in these kind of things. I mean like common me, A and now this past life sh*t. uh uh ridzy won't believe" she said shaking her head thinking 'is she for real, I mean who talks about past life in 21st century! Wait I still don't know if she is even real or not. God wasn't the whole day's events were enough, that you are giving me this? Huh?'

"my duty is to help unfold some of the mystery of your life. Now believing me or not, it's your choice. I still don't believe that even after looking at me you are not ready to believe me" the surreal clone asked looking amazed.

' ya man I forgot about that. This ghostly figure looks exactly like me, so that means that whateva crap she was on bout till now was all true? WOW!!!! you mean this is my 2nd life, means I have been reincarnated, means means AAAAHHHH. Wow god, thanks. now we are talking miss riddhima's clone. So bring it on. Even I wanna know about this 'A' dude. He has done my head in from the last 2 years.'

"you mean to say that I have been reincarnated? You know punar janam kinda thing? And wait a sec this Mr. A dude is related to my past life right?" Riddhima asked hoping she would say yes.

"YES! All the answers of your question is 'yes'. But that's not important, you are still not getting the point of why I am here and why are you reincarnated and who is your Mr. A?" the surreal clone asked Riddhima frowing a bit thinking she is still not taking it seriously.

"aaaaa ya uhmm that was my next question." Riddhima lied. She was so excited with the whole reincarnated issue that she completely forgot the main questions even she has been asking herself for the past two years.

"oh ok. So I'll continue but you have to promise that you won't interrupt and listen to me carefully", Riddhima nodded solemnly. The surreal Riddhima walked towards the window and breathed in fresh air while closing her eyes as if remembering something very painful. Riddhima found it weird but still kept her mouth shut, thinking many bizarre things happened today and this was nothing compared to all the other things that had happened today.

' just keep your mouth shut Riddhima. So what if she is enjoying the fresh air. Let her, maybe you don't get fresh in heaven. But man I am an impatient soul. Hellooo did she forget me or something? Man she betta be quick and finish her ramblings before mum wakes up. I think I should make my presence noticeable'.

"ahem ahem" ridz coughed fakely trying to get her attention.

"oh I am really sorry Riddhima. You know whenever I remember anything about arsh, my eyes start to fill up".

"arsh?" Riddhima asked even more confused.

"yes arsh. Your Mr. A's name in his past life…" Riddhima interrupted again.

"so so you mean that, that my Mr. A's name is arsh, wow cool name huh?"

"Riddhima now this is the last time I am warning you not to interrupt me as I can only stay on earth till dawn. Sunrays are forbidden to touch me, so I only have a few hours and if you are keep going to interrupt me then I won't be able to tell you"

"oh! Sorry. Now I promise I won't interrupt but what if I have any questions in the middle?" Riddhima asked meekly,

"well I am forbidden to open all the mysteries to you, my duty is only to show you your destination, the path you have to find yourself. So shall I begin?" Riddhima nodded her head in approval.

"ok (she took a deep breath) my name is radhika and this is the story of arsh and radhika. Which in this life turned out to be you and you're Mr. A. I am sorry Riddhima but I am not allowed to reveal your Mr. A's name to you. That you will have to find out you're self and trust me you will know that he is your 'Mr. A'. This story is 121 years old and today was the blessed day when I and Arsh met for the first time, so it was a chosen day today to unleash the mystery. Arsh and radhika used to live in a region called Pitampura where King Dushyant used to rule that time. Unfortunately I was the daughter of King Dushyant and princess of pitampura"

'OH shoot! No wonder that word 'princess' felt so familiar to me when mum sarcastically called me a 'princess'. YES! Can't wait to tell mum that even I m a real princess. Muhahaha. Let's see how mum reacts!'

"You must be wondering why called myself 'unfortunate' when I was princess?" Riddhima nodded and told her to continue.

"well Riddhima because of this tag of being a princess, mine and Arsh's story was left incomplete . I was a princess and arsh was a commoner, a simple boy who lived in the village alone with his parents. One fine day I sneaked outside the palace where we met for the first time. It was love at first sight and we both were madly in love with each other. Somewhere deep inside our heart we knew that we will never be together but still we never shared this feeling with each other. Then that cursed day came where my father caught me with him. He was fuming in rage and I never saw him that angry ever in my life before. My father pulled his sword out from its cover and was about to slash arsh's body into pieces, I came in front of arsh and took his death upon myself. Arsh was frozen to the spot and couldn't react to his surroundings while my father took the advantage of the situation and killed him too. All he did was winced my name in pain and fell on floor next to me. He slowly pulled out a mangalsutra from his pocket and kept in my blood filled hands. Hot and salty tears were streaming down our cheeks and those tears weren't because of the physical pain but the pain in our hearts that we couldn't become one. Just before shutting my eyes completely, I prayed to god from the bottom of my heart to complete our love story; if not in this life time, then the next one but please complete our story god". Radhika finished her story with the expressionless face looking straight into riddhima's eyes which were filled with tears.

"So now me and Mr. A came in this world to finish your unfinished love story? Right?" Riddhima asked although she very well knew the answer was 'YES'.

"yes" was all radhika's soul said and then she got up from riddhima's bed and was about to leave when she turned around and handed Riddhima that mangalsutra while saying,

"yeh tumhari amanat mein aaj tumhe lauta rahi hoo. Pichli baar jaise bichde the vaise is baar mat bichadna. Make sure you fight for your love even if the whole world is against you. "after saying that radhika's soul vanished into thin air leaving Riddhima behind who was right now fighting with the emotional turmoil and was trying to put all the pieces together.

TRING TRING

"HUH!!!" Riddhima jerked up from her sleep while panting heavily thinking what bizarre dream she saw and then started to wonder if that's what the secret behind Mr. A's mystery.

'Yaar kya sapna tha? Radhika, arsh, reincarnation and what not man and main thing was Mr. A? ridzy do you think that your dream meant anything? Nah! How can it? It was just stupid dream! Ya that's it. Now stop thinking so much before you kill you brain cells. Waise bhi zyaada nahi hai, aur itna sochegi to jitney hai utne hai khatam ho jayenge.' After confirming that it was just another dream she was about to get up when she saw fist tightly closed. She slowly opened it while her heart was ponding hard again her chest. As fist opened her eyes popped out of its socket by seeing the object in her sweaty palms.

"MANGALSUTRA" she screamed not being able to take the shock.

So guys long part eh? I know it was boring, but I tried my best guys please bear with me. And promise from next part you'll get armi-ridz work life and all the fun parts. Pakka vala promise.

Love

saniya

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Posted: 15 years ago
HEY SANI SWEETHEART🤗

NICE UPDATE
LIKE THIS PART
KEEP CONTINUE
THANKS FOR THE PM😃

LOTS OF LOVE
PRINZ😳

& YEEEEEEE................I AM THE 1ST
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Posted: 15 years ago
unexpected!!!!!!!reincarnation !!!!!!!!amazing...............though ridz dont know her mr.A, we do.................continue soon...
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey saniya
thnx for the pm dear😊
and omg wat was this i mean punar janam n all
wow yaar sounds interesting
have always loved such stories
nw toh m waiting impatiently for the next parts and for our riddhima and mr. a to come together
do continue soon

loads of love
take care
aditi
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Posted: 15 years ago
loved it
cant wait to see the things armaan and ridz do to each other
con soon
thanks 4 da [m
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Posted: 15 years ago
loved it.. specially the parts where ridhima talks to herself... i am so looking forward to AR parts..
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Hmmm..radhika and arshh..awehh such a sad love stry:(
and soo cuteee!
and noww Mr. A for riddhima is ARMAAN :D
haha! i noe immm rightt;) and cant wait for their bickering and fitess..and that will lead to LOVE :)...and that mangalstura is definetely goin to play a bigg role...i wonder if armaan gets these dreams or does ARSH come tell him about his MISS. R?..hahaah jus cuious.llool!
continuee soon!
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Posted: 15 years ago
dont say it was boring becuz it was not
it was very intersting
love ridzy
she is sooo funny
i love the garden part when she tired climing the pipe
cant wait 4 the next update
con soon
thankz 4 the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago

hey saniya

awsum ff hun

i have read till part 3 yet

and i'm loving it

love ridzy and muskan they r hilarious!!😆😆😆

will read other parts soon

do pm me

-sanam-

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