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hazra66 thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow fabulous part..
loved it.
aussum update..
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Posted: 15 years ago

Part 9

That doc toh sacred me thank god Dr Divya cleared everythg

Loved it

Thats nice way to make Nups quite

Everyone is happy Hop their happiness lasts long😊

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey where is its next part.....i am so confused about all these fan fictions and found this part after a loooong time...plz forward the next parts to me as well....dying to read the next part
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Posted: 15 years ago
ok i found it right this is the one in which Nupur got pregnant and the one i was looking for plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz PlZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ UPDATE SOON 😭😭
Edited by ramsha.aslam - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
now i have read all the previous parts..........LUUUUVVVVVVVED ITT!!😍😍😍 beautifully written.........just perfect for mayur👍🏼
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Posted: 15 years ago
pls pari.... update soon so that i can continue with the next part!
love
mina
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Posted: 15 years ago

so guys here goes the update,,,,,,,,,,,,, i hopre its long inuf,,,,,,,,,,,,,, mina pm it to all in yur pm list..

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nnext morning:
sun rays fall on nupur's eyes.......
she wakes up only to find no mayank on the bed........
she gets up..... and touches her head as she feels she is having headace...
wen mayank enters the room with a tray of coffee...... and sees nupur touching her head.....
m: nupur.......... (he rushes to her) tum thik ho,,,,,
n: haan mayank,,,, bus thoda sa sir dard hai.........
m: thoda sa? dikhaao.......
he shifts next to her,,,,,,,,,,
m: chalo ab yeh coffee pilo.. tumhe better lagega.....
n: hmm.............
she drinks the coffee........
n: mayank..
m: hmm??
n: humaari aaj se chuttiyaan lag gyi hai na.......
m: haan.........
n: to mein soch rhi thi ki........
m: soch rhi thi ki??
n: koi job......
m: nupur....... tum aisee haalat mein yeh sab soch bhi kese sakti ho? you need complete rest......]
n: haan mayank par....
m: no ifs no buts....... tumhe much pe bharosaa nhi hai kya??
n: hai mayank......
m: to bas phir,.,,,, aur mrs. sharma...... aaj ka lunch meri taraf se........ mein khud banaaunga......
n: mayank tumhe yeh sab karne ki koi.......
m: zaroorat hai....
in the afternoon.....
nupur is coming down and mayank is ready to take her to the hospital.......
n: mayank hum aaj kyu hospital jaa rhe hai??
m: nupur kuch reports nhi aayi thi to unhe collect karne jaa rhe hai......
n: ohh...... thik hai.......
in the hospital.....
m: doctor koi complicaions to nhi hai na....
doc: ji nahi koi complications nhi hai...... but inki healyth ka poora khayaal rakhiye and regular check ups are a must......
m: sure doctor....
he leaves....
at home..
m: nupur doctor ne kahaa hai na ki apni health ka dhyaan rakho... to tum yeh table saaf kyu kar rhi ho??
n: mayank???? ab kya 9 months tak mein keval bed pe hi lati rahungi??
m: ho sake to haan.......
when mayank comes closer to her.........
gets hold of her waste...... pulls her closer...... then whispers in her ears.....
m: mere liye tum aur yeh baccha bahut maayne rakhte ho.... aur yeh baat sunke tum jo blush kar rhi ho na to bahu beutiful lag rhi ho......
to which she blushes more......
mayank takes her in his arms and moves towards the bed room..... and puts her on the bed........ covers her with the coversheets....... and asks her to sleep////////
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slowly and slowly the tym passed with each second their relationship grew stronger.......
nupur was glad to see the caring side of mayank............. mayank was there for her every moment........
its the last month now............
its morning tym.....
nupur gets up and feels sum pain.......
he wakes up mayank and mayank quickly takes her to the hospital..\
in the ward.......
mayank is holding nupur's hand....
and nupur is in pain but its hurting mayank more...............
they never discussed wat they want a girl or a boy,,,,,,,
but now wat mayank wanted was nupur and the baby shud be alright,,,,,
nupur was crying in pain....... and mayank was comsoling her,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
finally the moment arrived and nupur gave birth to a little baby boy......
that was the best moment of mayank's life......... nupur went unconcious..
after sum tym....
nupur opens her eyes only to find mayank., and her son playing or rather mayank playing with the little baby,,,,,,
wen mayank saw nupur opening her eyes,,,,,, he went to her and gave the baby in her arms........
nupur tookk the baby and a tear ran down her cheeks ofcourse tears f happiness.......
mayank hugged nupur...... and then both started playing with the kid.....
soon nupur was discharged......
at home......
we see nupur sitting on the bed playing with the baby.......
wen mayank cums with a tray of medicines and water.......
n: mayank....... plzzzz ab mein aur mediceine nahi khaa sakti..
m: bilkul chup... (he said putting his finger on her lips)
n: par...
but before she cud complete the spoon of the syrup was in her mouth/.///
m: baccha yeh hai (pointing towards the kid) ya yeh (pointing towards nupur).... koi antar nnhi..
n: mayanak tum...... (she stood up and tried to catch him, but weakness was so much that she fainted..)
and mayank quickly rushed to her, and took her in his arms..............
m: nupur..... nupur tum thik ho,,
n: bas wo thode se chakar.......
m: mein abhi doctor ko bulaata hoon.........
then he calls the doctor..
the doctor arrives.... he checks nupur.....\
doc: bahut weakness hai..... complete rest ki zarurat hai...........
m: yes doctor.....
doc: aur yaad rhe ki yeh koi stress na le........
m: ji doctor..
doc: aur haan ab agar yeh faint ho to koi tension mat lijiyega kyuki abhi yeh sab normal hi hai... par proper care must be there...
m: hm..
the doctor leaves//////////
m: suna tumne...... ab complete rest and no more stress.............
then days passed with the tym and mayank took care of the baby and nupur............
after 3months:
nupur is standing in front of the mirror settling her sareee.......
she was wearing a red saree with heavy work,.....,,, they were goin in a marriage......
wen mayank cums from behind and hug her........
nupur is startled for a sec..
n: mayank kya kar rhe ho........
m: romance............
n: shut up.....
m: oh really...... to abhi shut up ho jaata hoon.....
he said givig a quick peck on her cheek.........
nupur blushed......
n: mayank hum late ho rhe hai.......
m: tum bahut beautiful lag rhi ho...... (he said ignoring her comment)
n: mayank sb wait kar rhe hia...
m: karne do.. (he said moving towards her lips///)
n: maa bhi neeche hi hai........
m: to./////// (he was looking at the lips passionaely)
n: yash bhi........ (yes they named the boy yash)
m: usse maa sambhaal rhi hai.....
n: mayank ...........
m: bas ab aur baatein nahi.............
mayank quickly captured her lips with his .. and they kissed,,,,,,, kiss that consisted of love, passion, happiness.......
his hands moving on her bare waist and her hands thru his neck reaching his hair............
they broke........ and were breathing heavily........
nuppur hugged him tight, to which he was taken abackl........
but he too hugged her back........
n: you will never leave me mayank......... right......
m: of course...... i will never leave you nupur....
he said consoling her.................
they reached the marriage place and both were looking stunning.... both were complimenting each other......
a photographer came to take their picture, and mayank to giv a poz put his hands on nupur;s waist, to wich nupur blushed.,, mayank thru his corner of eyes see the blush and grinned......... purposely he put hiss hand beside the duppataa so his hand was on her waist,,,, and he was tickling her, and nupur was just trying to free herself and was trying not to blush...
after they came back....
today ysh was sleeping with his daadi coz daadi was leaving the next day...
in mayur's room........
it was 2.30am...
nupur was sleeping in mayank's arms.......
wen she just woke up with a jerk, which made mayank wake up too.....
he looked at her wen she suddenly hugged him....
mayank: kya hua nupur..... you alright........ koi bura sapna dekhaa kya?
n: hmm..
m: koi baat nahi mein hoon na....... (he said consoling her)... ab so jaao........ challo...
n: par..
m: shhh... so jaao...........
then they both slept...........
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thats all for today......... hope you lyked it...... plz comment/critisise...................😉😛

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Posted: 15 years ago

nice update

bete ka name yash aur kafi tej update hai Pari
I loved it
Thanks for the PM
Edited by arunabehere - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
nice part.. super fast yaar ..bacha bhi ho gaya :)
but i hope nothing bad coming up :(
is nupur alright?

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