Because You Make Me Complete-MayUr ff part-6 pg-20 - Page 8

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Posted: 15 years ago
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sorry for the late comment tasnim!!
but it was an outstanding part!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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plzzzzzzzz continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#73
its awesome!
i loved it
plz add me to ur pm list 😊
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#74

Originally posted by: arunabehere

wow they became so good friend

but it was very small
mayur were good and uday was so cute

hey..thnkx for reading...
thnkx Tapoor
thnk u..
thnk u...

Originally posted by: mayurarti

Tasnim

it was a lovely update

But really short hun

do cont sson

Luv
Nidzy

hey..thnkx nidzy...
i knw it ws shaort..thts y i m updating early this time..
thnkx mina

Originally posted by: annie07

Sounds very interesting.............

add me to pm list na

thnkx dear...added u to pm list..

Originally posted by: samratrocks

awesome update tasnim!!

thnk u so much

Originally posted by: maria88

gr8 update....continue it soon....

thnk u..keep reading

Originally posted by: fariaa70

Hi tasnim
it was short but nice update.
lovely part.
keep it up

thnkx dear...keep reading...i'll update early ths time
thnk..keep reading

Originally posted by: kulsumd

g8 update dear
Lyk protective uday...awww mayank askd nupur 2 cum soon n he wil b waitng 4 her..so sweet
I think dat caller z mayank.?not sure?
Wel continue soon.

Kulsum

thnkx dear...m glad u liked it...keep reading to knw the caller's name..😉
thnk u

Originally posted by: afshanafreen

it was a short but a sweet update...uday a responsible bro..i like it..

thnk...glad u liked it..keep reading

Originally posted by: -afsha-

Hey it was fab

Im in ur pm list plzzzzzz
Hop Mayu ka confusion gets claered soon
Here the characters are ulta Mayu talks a lot n Nups listens
Its good
Loved it

hey..thnk u..yeah ...charecters r different here..
added u to pm list..keep reading

Originally posted by: seema.mittal2

Heyyy tasnim
Really nice update
But really really short
Uday n nupur scene was sweet
Plzzzz continue soon
N thanx for pm

hey..thnk u...will update soon ths time..keep reading

Originally posted by: shaaranya

sorry for the late comment tasnim!!

but it was an outstanding part!!!

its ok..thnkx a lot 4 reading n comment..

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima

plzzzzzzzz continue soon

thnk dear..will continue soon this time

Originally posted by: Favouriteofall

its awesome!

i loved it
plz add me to ur pm list 😊

thnks dear...added u to pm list
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Posted: 15 years ago
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fab update dear👏....
luvd it 2 d core...
pls update soon...🤗.
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#76

Part-4

"Mom, I am home."Mayank shouted as he entered home.

"Mayu, you are back." Shilpa Sharma spoke as she saw her son entering the house. "How was your day?"she asked him.

"Great mom.But I missed you a lot."Mayank replied while hugging her.

Shilpa chuckled at this.She came near her son and ruffled his hair.

"Mom! Don't touch my hair."He said being irritated.

"Yeah,yeah" shilpa laughed as she knew he will react like this.

"Where is bro?"Mayank inquired.

"He'll be late today."Shilpa replied him.

"Ok mom.I am very tired."he said turning toward his room.

"You go and fresh up, I'll serve the dinner till then."Shilpa told him.

"Son, how was your class?" Mayank's father Veer Sharma asked his son as he came out of his room.

"It was ok." Mayank replied him in a not interested tone without even looking at him.Before Veer could ask him further Mayank entered his room and closed the door leaving his father upset.

Nupur was lying on her bed and thinking about her new friends.Just then her mobile rang.She got up and took the mobile in hand.A big smile crept on her face seeing the caller's name, "Gunjan".

"Hello Chashmish!" Nupur said excitedly as she picked up the phone.

"Hey Nups, you are sounding very happy.That means you had fun in your class!" Gunjan guessed.

She was right.Nupur had great time in class, not exactly great but she didn't think her new class will go so smooth.Thanks to her news friends Dia,Benji and Mayank.But she was Nupur.So how can she show her excitement?

"No,it wasn't that bad." Nupur tried to hide her excitement.

"Come on Nups! You think you can lie to me?Tell me no, what happen?" Gunjan knew she was happy.She understands Nupur's feelings even if she doesn't tell her.This is why they become such close friend.

"I met such lovely friends.I never thought I'll make such friends in first day." Nupur gave in.She knew she can never hide anything from Gunjan and didn't even wanted to.

"I told you everything will be fine.See?Now I am free from your tension." Gunjan said.

"Oh please Chashmish!Don't tell me you were also taking my tension.Wasn't it enough that mumma,papa and Uday bro were taking my tension?Now you also?" Nupur complained.

"It is because you never tell anyone if something is bothering you.Now forget it and tell me about your friends." Gunjan knew Nupur doesn't like it when everyone takes tension for her.So she changed the topic.

"They are Dia,Benji and Mayank.Dia and Benji are dating."Nupur told her.

"And Mayank?"Gunjan asked.

"Mayank!He is s really sweet guy."Nupur answered.

"Ooowww!Sweet!hmm?" Gunjan said stressing the word sweet to tease her.

"Shut up Chashmish!"Nupur warned her.

This way they talked almost 40 minutes.Then disconnected the phone.

Nupur and Gunjan are best friends since school.Gunjan is a loving girl.She wears spectacles.Thats why Nupur calls her Chashmish.She doesn't mind it.Infect,she also gave her a nick name Nups.They share everything with each other.Aways support and help each other.They were in the same college but now Gunjan is in different University.They really miss each other during class but this is life.So what, if they are not in same University they are still best friend and they both know no one can take their places in thire hearts.

On the other hand Mayank was lying on his bed after dinner ang think about what happen whole day.The first name came to his mind is Nupur. "There is something special about her.But what?"he thought.Then he remembered that Nupur hadn't answer his question.He'll again ask her tomorrow. "Mayank why are you thinking about Nupur?Remember what she said?You have to wait for your perfect match.You want girlfriend,aren't you?So now think about your perfect match.Not Nupur."he scolded himself.Soon he fall asleep and started dreaming about his perfect match.

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hey guys..here is part-4...hope u all like it..
do comment
Tasnim
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Posted: 15 years ago
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lovely update tasnim, but too short :)

please make longer updates:)

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Posted: 15 years ago
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very nice update...continue it soon....
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesome update!!👍🏼👏
luved it to da core
this is a short update.... plz do make longer ones.....
do continue...🤗🤗
thanks for da pm.....😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey Tasnim...
Loved the update dear!
GunUr Convo was really nice! Gunjan already teasing Nupur with Mayank... Lolzz....
Mayank thinking about Nupur! Hmmmm..... He'll soon find out that Nups is only his perfect match!
Continue soon!
Love
Mina

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