Because You Make Me Complete-MayUr ff part-6 pg-20 - Page 7

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: naina0123

hi tasnim!

great start to ff!!

would love 2 read more..

pls add me 1 ur pm list..

thnkx dear...added u in pm list

Originally posted by: mayur-ki-diwani

it roxxxx yaar
just awsm
poor mayu
continue soon

thnk u so much...😊

Originally posted by: A-N-S-H-I-K-A

hey Tasnim!!!
lovely upd8!!!
pls do cont soon...
thanx 4 d pm.. :)

thnx anshika..😊.

Originally posted by: maria88

superb part...update it soon...

thnk u..😊

Originally posted by: Tapoor

lovely update

bechara mayank pata nehi kiss ko nups ka boyfrnd samajh raha hai

thnkx tapoor..keep reading..😊

Originally posted by: myownarea

really nice part:)
LOL poor Mayank:))
I do hope thats not Nupur's BF :))

thnkx..lol..keep reading..😊

Originally posted by: sharma.nat

wonderful part cont. soon

thnkx..

Originally posted by: ridhima_sukirti

Aww poor Mayu !! LOL

cute update !!

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hey nidzy...thnk for comment...😊
hey...thnk u so much...i m glad u liked it....added u to pm list😊
thnkx a lot for the lovely comment dear...🤗 keep reading..
thnk again for liking it..n thnk 4 apprciating it...🤗
sorry cudn't update soon..will update today..😊
aawww....i m happy u liked the differnt mayur..keep reading...😊
hey..thnkx for reading...glad u liked it...keep reading...😊
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hey pebo....thnk u so much 4 d comment....😊
sorry yaar...updating it late....bt don b angry...😳
thnk a lot mina....keep reading..😊
hey..thnk u ...no prob...all d best for ur xam...😊
thnk a lot mahima...😊
thnk u..😊
thnk u so much supriya..😊
sorry cudn't update soon...will update it today..
hey ...thnk u...keep reading to knw who's d boy...😛😊
thnkx 4 reading..its ok..😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#62

Part-3

"Bro,what happen?Why did you call me out of the class?"Nupur asked her cousin Uday.

"I just wanted to know if you are comfortable in the class or not.Did you make any new friends?" Uday asked her with all the concern.Though Nupur and Uday are cousins they love each other like real siblings.Uday is always very caring and protective about Nupur like an elder brother and Nupur also respects him as a brother.They are very friendly with each other and share everything.Nupur always demands various things from Uday and Uday without even questioning gives her everything.After the death of his parents Uday shifted to Mumbai and took admission in Excel University.Since then Nupur's Parents love Uday as their son.He is in final year and lives in his house alone.

"Yes bro!I am fine and I got three new friends."she told him in excitement.

"I knew my sweetest sis will be fine.But still I wanted to see it.You know aunty will be worried for you.But I told her not to worry because your bro is with you here,right?"Uday said with a smile.

"Oh mumma!You know how she is!She always keeps worrying for me.I am perfectly fine bro.You don't have any class now?"Nupur asked him changing the topic.

"No.Its my break time.So thought to meet you."Uday replied.

"I think my teacher is coming.I have to go.Bye."Nupur told him as she saw an older man to come towards her class.

"Ok,bye.Call me anytime whenever you need my help."Uday said for the last time.

"Yes bro.Don't worry"saying this Nupur entered the class room and sat in her seat.Mayank looked at her but before he could say something the teacher entered the class and the whole class become silent.

Nothing much happened in the class.It was only an introductory class.Mayank wanted to ask Nupur something but he couldn't as the teacher was there.Soon the class got over All the students started leaving the class.

"Ok guys good bye.See you tomorrow."Dia said to Mayank and Nupur as she and Benji were leaving.

"Bye."Nupur simply said.

"Bye dude"Benji shook his hand with Mayank.

"Bye both of you."Mayank replied to Benji and Dia while shaking hand.They both left the class.

"So, bye Mayank."Nupur said while hanging her bag on her shoulder.

"Bye,see you tomorrow.Come soon ok?I'll be waiting for you."Mayank started walking.Nupur was looking at him going.When he reached to the door he turned back and gave her a wide smile.

"He'll be waiting for me?Have we become so good friend that he'll wait for me?"Nupur thought.

She reached home and shared her experience of first class in her university with her parents.They were relieved that she had already made friends.

In the evening Nupur was lying on the bed and thinking about her new friends.Just then her her mobile rang.She got up and took the mobile in hand.A big smile crept on her face seeing the caller's name.

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hey guys..here's the part-3....
sorry for the late update....i was out of town...n my class also started...so cudn't update....will update the next part soon...
hope u all like ths part....
plz plz plzzz comment..........
Tasnim
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Posted: 15 years ago
#63
wow they became so good friend
but it was very small
mayur were good and uday was so cute
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Posted: 15 years ago
#64
Tasnim

it was a lovely update

But really short hun

do cont sson

Luv
Nidzy
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Posted: 15 years ago
#65
Sounds very interesting.............

add me to pm list na
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Posted: 15 years ago
#66
Hi tasnim
it was short but nice update.
lovely part.
keep it up
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Posted: 15 years ago
#67
g8 update dear
Lyk protective uday...awww mayank askd nupur 2 cum soon n he wil b waitng 4 her..so sweet
I think dat caller z mayank.?not sure?
Wel continue soon.

Kulsum
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Posted: 15 years ago
#68
it was a short but a sweet update...uday a responsible bro..i like it..
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Posted: 15 years ago
#69
Hey it was fab
Im in ur pm list plzzzzzz
Hop Mayu ka confusion gets claered soon
Here the characters are ulta Mayu talks a lot n Nups listens
Its good
Loved it
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Posted: 15 years ago
#70
Heyyy tasnim
Really nice update
But really really short
Uday n nupur scene was sweet
Plzzzz continue soon
N thanx for pm

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