MJHT Full gang FF!! Part 4- pg 3-Updated!

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Heyy guys I had started an ff in the mjht section, but a lot of ppl told me i may not be able to write it here, the original URL to this ff was: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1287703

Bu now this ff will be here. I gave some info before I started this ff 4 months ago.. so please do read it.

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"Heyyy guys,

I actually have this idea in my head for ages, i think for like 6 months now... its an idea of how i thought mjht could continue. My ff is set in the time wen mayur hav confessed their love (so mayank has not moved away).. n as for sajan.. gunjan loves samrat.. but samrat only considers gunjan his best friend. There is no (OMG- ive forgotten his name- the guy who played Dia's boyfriend.) There are no suhani n adhiraj.. since they were not in the show when i thought of this idea n do not fit nto my story. However there will be one new entry called Natasha... n she is realy similar to suhani n she is related to samrat (u will find out wen i start my ff) n she has also come bck from london... but can i just say i swear to god... i didnt copy suhanis character... actually i was quite shocked wen i read and saw about her character... i was wondering how did the mjht creatives get into my head n steal my idea lolz!!! But natasha will be different as samrat will know her.. there is no mystery there.
N the full gang will also be involved. it is a love story but it is also full of masti n college life.. there will be everyone together trying to sort out problems as well.. like they do in the show.

So pls guys let me know if all of u wud like to read it!!

Neha "

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Part 1!!!

This part is to just set the scene for the rest of the ff.


The sun shining, not a cloud in the sky, it seemed like any other morning at Excel college. But it wasn't. The college campus was filled by one and only one topic. Last night's college play. The play was a super hit, however that wasn't the topic of conversation. The hot piece of gossip was that one of the most eligible bachelors of excel college had found himself a girlfriend. Yes, Mayank Sharma, you heard me right THE Mayank Sharma had found himself a girlfriend in a girl called Nupur Bhushan. Now this is a case of absolute 'opposites attract'.

Waiting for various lectures to start, a group of people sitting in the canteen enjoying the normal college life, pulling their friends legs.

[Samrat=Sam
Gunjan= Gun
Nupur=Nup
Mayank= May]

Sam: Yaar, what a night last night.. looks like the whole college has nothing better to talk about.

Dia: You're right Sammy, last night was excellent, the play was a huge success.

Sam: Of course Candy, but the night was a bigger success for some people than others, Kyun Nupur, mayank.. tumhara kya khayal hai?

Nup: I knew it samrat, you were just finding an opportunity to pull my leg.

Gun: No di, its not like that, we are all so happy for you and mayank, I mean you finally found your raj.

May: Yaar, im soo tired of hearing raj this n raj that, I think I should finally just change my name to Raj only

Nup: NAHIN!!

Everyone stares at Nupur.

Nup: I mean, ummm, you don't have to change your name (whispers) I love Mayank.
Gang: ooooooohhhhhhhh

Nupur looks down while mayank winks at her.

Samrat's phone rings, he looks at the caller ID and smiles.. the caller ID reads 'Angel'. Samrat picks up the phone, and we only hear one side of the conversation.

Samrat: (in one breath) Heyyy Angel how are you how's everything there how are your friends are you ok you are calling me at this time is everything ok are you feeling…

Samrat stops talking, probably interrupted by the person on the other side. Everyone in the gang are just staring at Samrat, except for Benji.

Sam: OK sorry, ill talk slowly now, first are you ok? Hmm so whats new? WHAT???? You are coming here, when, how, why? Ok sorry sorry, I think I just got a bit excited. WHAT you are coming tomorrow and you are telling me now. But how come, in the middle of term time. Acchha, ok yah the flight reaches at 5, yah ill be there, ok promise I wont be late, I promise nah!! Chal see you tomorrow!! Byee, take care of yourself, haan ok!

Samrat hangs up the phone and the gang are just staring at him with their mouths wide open.

Sam: What, why are you staring at me like I am some sort of ghost.

Gun: Umm samrat, who were you talking to like that, I mean we have never seen you so excited before.

Sam: Ohh woh actually.. (cut off by Benji)

Benji: Who actually nah, that phone was from the world famous Angel.

Nup: Yeh Angel kaun hai?

Benji: Angel is the most important person in Samrat's life, actually she is Samrat's life only, kyun samrat?

Sam: Haan, she is the person I love the most in the world. I mean I can literally do anything for her. She is just… (continues talking)

While samrat is praising Angel, Gujan looks down, she can believe what she is hearing. She always knew samrat doesn't love her, but somewhere deep inside her heart, she had a hope that one day he would. However, listening to him now, all those hopes and dreams came shattering down. She could hear n feel her heart breaking into a million pieces. Nupur, looked at her sister next to her, she knew even though she was trying to put on a brave face, she knew what Gunjan was feeling. Nupur squeezed Gunjans hand, showing her that she supports her n will always be there for her.
Gunjan looks up n smiles seeing her Di's support.

Dia: Sammy, you never told us you had a girlfriend.

Sam & Benji: KYA??? GIRLFRIEND??? (and they both burst out laughing.)

Uday: Sam, tum aise donkeys ke tara kyun has rahe ho?

Nup: Ofho Uday bhaiya donkeys nahin, gadhe bolte hain.

Uday: Nahin, nahin, dekho Nupur gadhe English mein donkeys hote hai na, so I am right.

Dia: Ohh Dodo, Shut up. But Sammy, Benji, why are you laughing so much?

Benji: (still laughing) Oh my god, Dia, you actually think Angel is Samrat's girlfriend?

Everyone looks lost, since samrat was the one himself who said he loves angel.

Sam: Guys, Angel is my little sister!!!

Gang: WHAT???

Sam: Yah guys, DUH, I can't believe you thought angel was my gi…gir…girlfriend (bursts out laughing)

Gunjan couldn't believe her ears, she thanks god for not breaking her heart!

Gun: Lekin samrat, you never told us you have a sister.

Sam: Actually chashmish, she studies in London, that is why I never mention her. Because whenever I do, I get really emotional because she is so far away from me, but now im so happy she coming back tomorrow.

Dia: That's great Sammy, we will all go with you to pick her up tomorrow.

Sam: Sorry guys, but Angel ke strict instructions hain, that im not allowed to bring anyone to pick her up, apparently she wants to tell me something important.

May: But samrat, how come she is coming back in the middle of the term, as far as I know, the academic year in London finishes in June/July.

Sam: Haan dude, that is what I was thinking as well, but I don't know, when I asked all she said was, she will tell me when she comes here tomorrow. OK guys, I got to go, I need to do a lot of things before Angel comes tomorrow.

Gun: But samrat, lectures..

Sam: Sorry chashmish, but now I wont be able to concentrate anyways.. Benji lets go.

Benji n samrat leave, slowly everyone heads off to their lectures. And only nupur and Gunjan are left.

Nup: Gunjan, I need to talk to you.

Gun: Haan bolo na di.

Nup: Gunjan I think you should tell samrat about your feelings.

Gun: No di, I cant.

Nup: Dekh gunjan, today you were lucky, but if you don't tell samrat, one day he might find someone else. Then what will you do?

Gun: nahin di, I cant tell him, it might ruin our friendship, and I don't want to put him under any pressure. And di, if destiny wants us to be together, we will get together somehow.

Nup: Lekin Gunj..

Gun (interrupts): Nahin di… im not going to tell samrat.
Edited by miss_neha - 15 years ago
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Part 2

Library

Nupur comes to the library looking for Mayank, and sees an empty library, except for Mayank sitting at a table making notes.

Nup: Haiii meri kismet, my boyfriend is more interested in Shakespeare than me. Who knew that I would be competing against a dead writer?

May: Nupur, I don't have time for this right now, I have a lot of work to do, so if you don't have anything important to say, please chup raho aur mujhe mera kaam karne do.

Nup: Mayank, this is serious. I mean tumhare saamne Katrina Kaif ki standard ki ladki khari hain aur tume in books se fursat hi nahin milti.. kabhi itne pyar se meri taraf bhi dekh liya karo.

Mayank realizing he wont get rid of Nupur so easily, grabs her hand and pulls her into his lap and wraps his arms around her.

Nup: Mayank, what are you doing, someone might see us?

May: Kya? I only want to prove to you that I love you and only you, and even Katrina Kaif isn't anywhere close to you. I love you Nupur.

Mayank pulls Nupur's face closer to his, and Nupur's eyes slip shut. They keep coming closer to each other, and their lips are just an inch apart.

'OH MY GOD'

Nupur falls from Mayank's lap and they both get up, fixing themselves and look towards the door, where the sound came from and see Gunjan standing there..

Gun: Oh my god, Im sooo sorry, main toh who bus yeh book, I mean, oh my god..umm.. im soo
sorry.

Gunjan hurries off, and Nupur and Mayank just stand there embarrassed.

Next Day At College.

The gang sitting together and discussing Angel's arrival plans, everyone seemed anxious to meet Samrat's sister, but the excitement on samrat's face was evident, it was truly obvious that he loved his sister a lot.

Gun: Samrat, tell us something about angel. I mean all we know is that she is from London.

Sam: Well, first thing she is not anything like me, I mean we are as different as chalk and cheese. I mean I have never picked up a book in my life as you all know, but Angel is really clever, actually yaar mayank you will get along with her, she is so studious.

May: (laughs)Cool, at least now me n gunjan have some intellectual company, kyun gunjan?

Nup: What do you mean, im dumb.. dekho mayank, tum na mere se panga mat lo, samjhe.

May: Nupur I was just saying that..

Nup: I know exactly what you were saying mayank.. tum to nah bilkul

Uday: Guys relax, both of you fight like children (looks at mayank and gets scared by his expression) I mean tum dono ladte hue bahut cute lagte ho, haina Di?

Dia: DODO!!

Uday: (confused) Ab maine kya kiya??

Everyone laughs at uday;s expression. Samrat looks at the time and realizes it is 4.

Sam: Ohh shit, im late guys it is 4 already, if I get stuck in traffic, aaj toh meri shamat hai. Ok guys bye.

Gang: bye.


5:30 PM

At the International airport we see a girl standing with her luggage, with her back towards the exit. You see her long black hair, and see she is trying to get in touch with someone over the phone, but seems like she is having network problems.

We see samrat finally reaching the airport, he runs out of his car and towards the arrival section, he sees the girl and screams.

Sam: ANGEL!!

The girl turns around and flicks her long hair back, she takes off her sunglasses and places them on her head, she has dark brown eyes, but they become light and sparkle due to the sunlight. She is wearing black jeans, a white tank top and a white hoodie, with a silver pendant, shaped as an 'N' dangling on her neck. She has an angry expression on her face. Samrat comes up to her holding his ears.

Angel: Kya Bro, Ive been waiting for half an hour, I told you not to be late, but still you are late as usual.

Sam: Ok im sorry, sorry, sorry, I don't know I just lost track of time and there was so much traffic on the way.

Angel: Ok fine I forgive you, but only this time.

Sam: Well thank you so much my angel.

Both brother and sister finally hug and head towards home.

Angel: Bro, you know I love it when you call me angel, I missed that so much in London, nahin toh all I hear there is Nats this n Nats that, Ive told them a million times my name is Natasha, but they don't listen, but im used to it now as well. Anyways, hows everything here, how is your college and friends? And hows benji, I haven't met him for so long, last time I met him was after school finished and I was moving to London. Oh my god that was like 2 years ago.

Sam: Everythings fine, Benji and everyone are fine, they are all dying to meet you.

Angel: What?? You told your friends I was coming.

Sam: well yah obviousily, when you called I was in college only. By the way how come you are here in the middle of the term, have you got holidays or something.

Angel: Nahin bro, actually I have a surprise for you.

Sam: Kya?

Angel: I have taken a transfer to Excel college.

Sam: (Brakes the car) WHAT??

Angel n samrat realize they have reached home, so head on in to continue their conversation.

Angel: Haan bro, actually I was missing home a lot, and I thought why not take a transfer back home, I mean I was also keen on studying in London coz mom n dad are in Paris, but.. (tears up a bit) but you toh know how they are, I mean th…they n..ne..never (starts crying)

Samrat hugs his little sister. Samrat knew his sister more than anyone in the world, she could hide her feelings from everyone in the world and act confident, but he always saw past her charade. She was the most emotional person in the world, and anyone could break her heart easily, even though she tried to act strong, this was the main reason samrat was always so protective of her. Even though she was an adult now, somewhere deep inside her there was still a little girl who craved for the love n affection from her parents that she never received. Samrat knew exactly what she was feeling since he always felt the same way.. that's why he always tried to be Natashas mum n dad, that is why he gave her so much love so she never missed anything, but he also knew that no matter how much he did, the absence of his parents would always have a toll on them. He knew that him and angel had no one in the world besides each other, they were each others world.

Sam: (trying to stop his own tears) Heyyy heyy, sshhhh, main hoon na, im here, you don't need anything or anyone else. (he wipes her tears) U know im soooooo happy you are joining my college, you are going to love my friends.

Angel: Ummm actually about that bro, I needed to tell you something!

Edited by miss_neha - 15 years ago
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hey dear ad me in ur pm list plz...
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nyc ff..
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n plz add me to ur pm list...
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awesomeeeeeeeeeeee👏👏👏

eagerly waiting to read more
plz try to continue soon
n thanx for the pm
love
sana😊
Edited by sana_sajan - 15 years ago
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thanxs for PM n thanxs for adding me to ur PM list i like this part n plz do cont soooon!!!
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hey loved da concept n storyline
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hi dear
wonderful update
it was very nice
loved it
continue it.
thanx 4 pm

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