~ff-when the dorks met morons(part17,pg95)du c:-)~ - Page 8

Created

Last reply

Replies

657

Views

48.9k

Users

106

Likes

1.1k

Frequent Posters

-nautankidollz- thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 15 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: SaJan_RaDevBest

it was awesome!!
superb!!
fantastic!!
continue soon!!
thanks for the pm!!!!

thanks soo much dear 4 liking it
n m glad that u liked it
loads of lov
dolly😳
-nautankidollz- thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 15 years ago
#72
update time guys>>>>

Ok guys next update from me .. it isn't long but still pls read n comment

N b4 I start my update my special mesaages to my three s's

Sanu—lov u jaann .. thanks 4 writng ur beautiful os n updating ur stories.. finally .hee hee hee

Lov u sanu n u r simplt the januablest kid ever… muaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhh

Sush—by god sush .. its been weeks sinse u have updated any of ur stories nn m currently dieng to read a single up[date from u… pls pls pls sush update kar de na plsssssssssssssssn yes I saw all the latest vm's u made awesome blosoom n blastum as usual .. I liked the mayor one more.. may be because I was seeing my lovey dovey mayor after a long time.. lov u jaaan muaaaaaaaaaaaaahhh

N now the princess..

Simrit---

By go maharani .. pari was right we have to gift u a book titled how to be regular on if…. Seriously girl tune abhi tak meri pehli update pe reply ni kiya n this story is supposed to be dedicated to u … talk of ironical situations???????

Pls behna jaldi reply kar nn m tired of reading updates of various ff's to u over phone.. kabhi kuch khud aake bhi read kar liya kar jaana….

____________________________________________

Part 2

(basic chractersketch n background story)

SAMRAT N MAYANK SHERGILL – the two handsome, cool n twin morons of this story….

Both of them belong to a high class family, having money running down even through there sink pipes….

Both were rich n were orphan… there parents died in a freak accident when both were in tenth..

The tragedy of the time did take a lot from them..

Now they live with there maternal aunt shilpa sharma…who has spoiled these idiots beyond limits…

As if the money thing wasn't enough for them….. both of them were also successful singer(rockstars)..

Samrat was an avid guitarist while mayank was a splendid flute player.. n both of them had held there audience mesmerised by their talents in numerous concerts,……

GUNJAN BHUSHAN N NUPUR SEHGAL- obviously these two r the dorks of our story ….

Gunji n nups r step sisters n yet r very close…. Nupur chose to keep her maternal surname for the only reason that she liked the sound of sehgal much more then bhushan…

I told u they r dorks….

Well moving on .. gunji lives in Mumbai,,n works as a news repoter in a popular private news channel..while nupur is living in delhi 4 the past 5 years..

Even though she hates books to the core she is a novelist by profession……hee hee hee.

Nupur had met mayank just once.. she was at state library for the realease of her debut novel whil mayank was there to … he had flown in from Mumbai to inaugurate the fiction sec of the state library…

They met n got into a terrible fight withing 5 seconds…

Within the next 15 seconds they had their cell numbers exchanged n they had promised each other that they will continue their gruesome fight at night over their phone…

Aren't they a perfect definition of dorkiness n moronic ness?????

Well moving even further,,

Nups is in Mumbai now , though her sister has no idea abt this…

Nups plan to give her a surprise birthday party,,,n she has a spare key to her sister's flat in cullens apartments Mumbai….

Moreover she knows how much gunji loves samrat … I mean she knows that gunji is the biggest fan ever of samrat the dude…

N since mayank was her bestest fighting buddies(ya they still fight n just fight over phone even after 6 monthsahem ahem),,,, mayank was doing her a favour by bringing samrat to the surprise birthday party of gunjan….

Nupur had even invited her college time buddies n the planning for the surprise is full on…

What all of them don't know still is that they r in for a surprise too n this time from samrat n gunjan….

EXPLANATION TILL NOW:-

K guys I now this story is very confusing .. i am telling u what is happening in present so that it helps u to understand the storry better

Hope I succeed..

Well guys presently.. nupur(gunji's sister), benji , uday, dodo , adi, suhani, cj(gunji n nup's college friends) n samrat are waiting 4 gunjan in her apartment ,, they have prepared the room for a special surprice birthday party 4 gunji..mayank has currently gone to the nearest bakery to bring a gift from him n samrat for gunjan…

Samrat is there because mayank requested him to be…..

So guys this is the situation at gujan's house..

Same building on stairs… gunji is trying to reach up her apartments .. she met with an accident yesterday(abt which u'll learn in flashbacks) n today she got discharged from there.. lifts r not working n she is having a hard time climbing the stairs…

Now about flashbacks.. they'll tell to u about the accident n what happened at concert n all the story of gunji n sammy's first meeting…..

I hope there is no longer going to be any confusion….

N here is a tiny winy update guys…

>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>.

SCENE 1

(FLASHBACK- YESTERDAY NIGHT, BACKSTAGE, CONCERT HALL)

(BY MAYANK)

I wanted to run straight into the nearest wall n bang myself to death on it….

But well…the director of the music company producing this show was standing in front of me eating cheetos…

So apparently commiting sucide in front of him didn't seem like a great idea…

Dp—(he is the director,imagine prince in his role)Had hai.. concert shuru hone mein sirf paanch minute reh gaye hain mayank n tumhare bhai ka kuch pata nahi….professionalism bhi koi cheez hoti hai kyat um dono yeh jaante ho????

M== sir samrat bas aata hi hoga,, kahin phas gaya hoga,,,,chill sir don't worry….

Dp=(gulping 3 cheetos in a single stroke)you r asking me to chill?? Listen mr mayank shergill,, agar aaj k concert mein koi bhi problem hui to I'll make sure that ur brother pays dearly for it…. Do u want that?????

Well all I wanted in that moment was to shove the dried saltine cheetos in his hands, up his nose…

But alas.. we seldom get to do what we want…

Presicely at that instant my cell phone beeped… a text message????

"hey sadu.. hi.. best of luck 4 ur concert… I hope people don't run away hearing the screeching sounds that u make on that flute of urs.. by god"

I smiled.. this one obviously was from nupur.. the nut head…

Dp=why the hell r u smiling young man????things r preety screwed up here…

Ok I have had enough… I wasn't interested in hearing his stupid lecture any longer….

M== huh?? Sorry sir .. I was just…..(cleared my throat) sir I promise u, samrat will reach here any moment n todays concert will be a hit too…. Now if u give me permission can I go up n dress???

U know actually it won't helt much if I went on stage wearing thses shorts of mine… my legs are a bit too much exposed in these…..

Dp(gawking dumb mouthedly at my legs)= huh?? Ya ya… pls go n change mayank….

I turned n almost sprinted up to my green room laughing madly at dp's expression….

PRECAP..

In the green room

We see mayank attending a phone call quiet tensed

M== hell twin I told u I won't go there without u???

S== mayank pls go I promise I'll reach there within second ,, m down in the garage ,, I entered through the backdoor..

M'' u may be lieing

S== no twin mm not…. Pls go to stage .. u have to take care of the crowds until I change n come .. pls mayank this is abt our career.. pls go..

M== no … mm not going without u…

S== goddamm mayank pls .. u have to go… I can't let this show get destroyed.. someone really really sacrificed a lot for it

M== WHAT??????

loads n loads of lov

dolly😳

Soulmate_Sana thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 15 years ago
#73
reserved
yayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy dolly im again first 🥳
muhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh🤗
*EDITED*
hell kya yaar mayur part was so sweet 5 sec mai ladyi and 15 sec mai no. exchanged lol u will not bileave i was like is dolly ok today i mean in 5 min mai ladyi kar waadi aur 15 sec mai no.bhi exchange karwa diya lol super speed story but jab next pada so signed in relief they exchanged no. to fight lol i cracked up u r really dam something dolly itna cute hilarious ideas kahan sa ate hai tujhe mujhe nahi ate😆
and than they keep on fighting on phone still after 6 months too dam dolly want to ask one thing what they usually fight on hmm like still fight on library thing or with a new topic every time 😉
and than comming to sajan wowwwwwww they goen meet in gunji birthday party wowwwwwww excited for the party anddddddddddddd loved nupur doing alot for her sis hmm one more thing gunji already like ammy but will sammy will like her back in party 😕
and hmm u liked my os i know bolna ki koi zarurat nahi thi and as im free mera update toh chalu ho gaye *sign* kuch zyada hi free ho gayi hoon exams ka baad 😆
and with this my comment finish lol🤣
keep updateing and updae ka barain mai kya bolun it was the best update of ur as alwayssssssssss 😉👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏so keep upateing ad pming me n thanx fr the pm and one more thing mera sara confusion iss update sa chala gaya now story is clear infront of my eyes 😃
n love u alotttttttttt
muhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh🤗
lots of love
sanu.😉
Edited by sana_sajan - 15 years ago
-Jyotika- thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 15 years ago
#74
awesomeeeeee updt dear...
it ws grr8888888..
luved it...
pllzzzzz do cont soon...
sushups thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 15 years ago
#75
res
why do i get a third position every time?
first it was third page and this time its third post


edited************************

ok mujhe pehle sana jhatka de rahi thi aur ab tu de rahi hai
kamal ki baat yeh hai ki hume itne saare updates tum se mil rahe hai woh bhi kam time gap ke
lucky us
and the story is damm good
aur haan jaldi contiinue karna
well abot my update i will try but i have started a new ss and have sent u a pm too which u probably have not opened yet
kamse kam ab toh mere pms dekhlo maate
lots of hugs
sush

Edited by sushups - 15 years ago
-nautankidollz- thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 15 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: sana_sajan

reserved

yayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy dolly im again first 🥳
muhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh🤗

as usual lov ya dear . n thanks 4 being first dear
waiting 4 ur reply
-nautankidollz- thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 15 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: sushups

res
why do i get a third position every time?
first it was third page and this time its third post

hee hee heee poor poor sush
still lov u third ho ya fourth for me u r one of the top people in my heart
ps== between u r still lucky think of moronic simi guys
i think i have to hack her account again to reserve a place for her
actually that girl is the real moron out ther
-nautankidollz- thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 15 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: sajanroxx20

awesomeeeeee updt dear...
it ws grr8888888..
luved it...
pllzzzzz do cont soon...

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww thanks jyoti so much 4 replying dear n mm glasd that u liked it jana lov u loads n loads nloads
-AngelSimi- thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 15 years ago
#79
The best part !!!!!!!!!!!! Meri commentary shuru hone wali hai !!!!!!!!!! Heee heeee heeee heee haaaaaa haaaa haaaa !!!!!!!!!!!
SCENE 1

(FLASHBACK- YESTERDAY NIGHT, BACKSTAGE, CONCERT HALL)

(BY MAYANK)

I wanted to run straight into the nearest wall n bang myself to death on it… Jaldi karo yeh shubh kaam jaldi jaldi jaldi !!!!!!!!!!!

But well…the director of the music company producing this show was standing in front of me eating cheetos… yahaan pe bhi khaana !!!!!! Hadd ho gayi teri yaar !!!!!

So apparently commiting sucide in front of him didn't seem like a great idea… hehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehe !!!!!!!!!!!!

Dp—(he is the director,imagine princiii in his role)Had hai.. concert shuru hone mein sirf paanch minute reh gaye hain mayank n tumhare bhai ka kuch pata nahi….professionalism bhi koi cheez hoti hai kyat um dono yeh jaante ho????

M== sir samrat bas aata hi hoga,, kahin phas gaya hoga,,,,chill sir don't worry…. jutta khauga eh hun !!!!!!!! paingiyan ehde !!!!!!!!

Dp=(gulping 3 cheetos in a single stroke)you r asking me to chill?? Listen mr mayank shergill,, agar aaj k concert mein koi bhi problem hui to I'll make sure that ur brother pays dearly for it…. Do u want that?????

Well all I wanted in that moment was to shove the dried saltine cheetos in his hands, up his nose…

But alas.. we seldom get to do what we want… abhi bhi kuch baki hai ???????????

Presicely at that instant my cell phone beeped… a text message????

"hey sadu.. hi.. best of luck 4 ur concert… I hope people don't run away hearing the screeching sounds that u make on that flute of urs.. by god" hadd hai yaar !!!!!!!! yahaan pe bhi shuru ho gaye dono !!!!!!!! bt kya classic msg bhejeya hai nupur ne !!!!!!!!

I smiled.. this one obviously was from nupur.. the nut head…

Dp=why the hell r u smiling young man????things r preety screwed up here… dant tod dalega yeh uske !!!!!!!

Ok I have had enough… I wasn't interested in hearing his stupid lecture any longer….

M== huh?? Sorry sir .. I was just…..(cleared my throat) sir I promise u, samrat will reach here any moment n todays concert will be a hit too…. Now if u give me permission can I go up n dress???

U know actually it won't helt much if I went on stage wearing thses shorts of mine… my legs are a bit too much exposed in these….. hehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehe hhhhhhoooooooooooooooooooo !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Dp(gawking dumb mouthedly at my legs)= huh?? Ya ya… pls go n change mayank….

I turned n almost sprinted up to my green room laughing madly at dp's expression….

hahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha !!!!!!!!!!!!! loved it to the core jaana !!!!!!!!
Edited by simar456 - 15 years ago
Soulmate_Sana thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 15 years ago
#80

Originally posted by: dolly18

as usual lov ya dear . n thanks 4 being first dear

waiting 4 ur reply

i think light is about to go dam i will edit it soon dear for sure

Related Topics

Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: Rizz-ington

1 years ago

⭐Back⭐ Arhi FF | Iss Darr Ko Kya Naam Doon: Chapter 3 - Part 3/3

A N A R H I F F ---- Iss Darr Ko Kya Naam Doon Summary: Khushi is an internet famous 27 year old fashion designer from Lucknow. She has a chirpy...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: goodkashish

6 years ago

Kassir ...Sujal&Kashish...Part 28 - Pg 33

Kassir Extremes Intro 9pm - London Airport - Christmas Day It was a cold chilly night in the beautiful city of London. We arrive at Heathrow...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".