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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: dolly18

haan poor poor hospital vale hee hee

then we will start doing c++ programs sitting on their cumputers n they will tear of their hair😆

then we'll work on chemistry
most tough subject but most scoring too
but i am sure we'll drift from subject part
to siscussing chemistry between mjht couples
and staff will be like in dono ko toh mental hospital mein hona chahiye tha
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Posted: 14 years ago
Finally m reading your ff. finally. yes!!!

i completed part 8 just now and m on cloud 9. awesome yaar. that sajan hug was sooo beautiful. mindblowing. poor gunjan!! kitna dard ho raha hoga na???

chal m reading part 9 now.
hehe. the starting boy and father convo was funny. 😆😆
Shergills and Sehgal ran away!! nice line.
It was nice meeting u dolly lady. 😉😉😉 chota convo tha but bahut hi mazedaar tha.
Rotating garden???? hahaha. kaha kaha se yeh ideas aate hai yaar????👏👏👏👏
omg!! awesome darling.

Part 10:
* Awww!!! one tiny problem solved. yippieee!!!!!!
* n loved how mayank was concerned for Samrat.
* hey bhagwan!! nup RV ki fiance hain???
* i just loved how u expressed the taking care scene of mayur and samrat. very emotionally beautiful.
* awwwwwwww!! that mayank "i m angry" waala dialogue brought tears in my eyes. so touchy!!! jaise jaise ek ek line aage bad rahi thi, waise wasie mere aankhon mein paani ki quantity badti ja rahi thi. and then toh mere aanso girne ki koi seema hi nahi thi. when she was trying to console him and then he finally broke. 😭😭😭😭😭. very beautifully written.

no wonder, i just fall in love with ur updates, yet m stupid to read them this late.
and an awesome end to this particular part.

Part 11:
* plzzzzz get well soon samrat. ur brother needs u.😭😭😭
* ohhh!! so RV is good in this one. nice.
* m not a bat. hehe. funny.
* finally some witty convo of mayur. not exactly witty but nice comedy. 😆😆
* hid his face in pillow???? 🤣
🤣🤣🤣🤣 sorry sorry. but this was my first reaction. ok continue continue......",mujhe sharam aati hain".....kya ladka hain yaar.....seriously, u were right.........so cute....hehehe.

waah waah!! madam ne kidhar aake end kiya hain. awesome!!! aur thoda suspense create karke chod deti. pagal ladki. 😆😆😆😆

jo bhi ho, awesome updates yaar. m sooooooo happy wd myself that i read all the parts so far. ab chen se so sakti hu.

loads of love
vinu
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Posted: 14 years ago

Scene 1>>

(by narrator)

Samrat was really shivering hard now,

It was a cold morning , a morning which hardly had any sun in it..

A morning which made samrat feel the need to surround himself in a couple of quilts

N yet he felt warm from inside

He was talking to her finally hearing her viose

Nupur had cum inside their room

His mobile with her

Chashmish had called

The moment he saw his cell in nupur's hand a sudden rush of adrenaline made him get up from his bed in a jiffy n sprint to nupur

Snatching his mobile, he ran out of his window(not the door, he used his window) to get to the balcony ..

S= hello helloo chashmish tum theek to ho na??

G= haan haan ssamrat mein bilkul theek hun

Tum kaise ho, theek to ho na , tumne dawai li? Doctor ko apni chot dikhayi?? Concert kaisa gaya??

Sab theek raha na??

Tum kahan ho is waqt aura ur tum

S= chashmish bas baba bas

Tumhari to rajdhanni express rukne ka naam hi nahi le rahi..

N with that both of them laughed.. loudly

Samrat n gunjan both felt light headed

The previous night had been completely full of numerous traumas for them both..

But now both of them knew that the other one was safe, was doing fine

N the exeleration of it made both of them dizzy….

For the next few seconds neither of them said anything..

Both of them trying to control their breathing rate b heart beat rate…

S= chashmish I want to meet you

G= me too

N then both of them grew silent again…
this time the silence was filled with pain..

San knew that he wont be able to see his chashmish right now.

What would he say to mayank??

Mayank wont ever let him go out in his present condition alone.

Moreover what will happen if someone sees him with gunjan??

Media etc etc

Was his bug still lieing destroyed on that road??

If yes then obviously sumone would have noticed it..

And if sumone had noticed it and informed the related authorities

Then how long will it take for them to find out that the overturned car was his???

Was he already on news

Was gunjan already on it???

How would this day end

All this made samrat feel drained of his energy again

He slumped n sat on the railing

Gunjan didn't speak

Apparently she was going through all this as fell

Finally after what felt years she replies.

g- can we meet.

The longing in his voice was to much for samrat to endure.

In that second all that he wanted was to run to her n hug her forever..

But he couldn't

He remained silent ..completely at lost of words..

What was he going to say to her anyway???

G= I know we cant meet right now. But I hope we do meet soon.

S= me too.

Again both of them felt into a long silence ..

S= since how long r u in Mumbai

G= 4 years.

S= why didn't u evr, why didn't u tell me.. even at night u didn't tell me anything . r u still angry with me.. it had been twenty years. Do u still think ..

G= no no .. I am not angry .. I was just was just just…

S= afraid??

G= yes .

S= why??

G= i..i ..i

S= thought that I forgot you after so many years. Didn't you?

G= yes

S= you shouldn't have..

G= but you never tried to find me. It never looked as if you were still waiting for me..

Sam got confused ..

S= what r u talking about??

G= it had been twenty long years samrat, how could I still hope for you to remember me??. How could I still hope to hold same position in your life as I used to hold all those years ago??? i thought I thought I was no longer in ur life n it was better to leave it that way..

S= all these years not even once did I think that you would have forgotten me.. not even once.. n I did search for u everywhere ..

U guys left dehradun long ago. I tried my best but couldn't find any trace of u.. then I resigned myself to just wait for you ..knowing that one day I would find you

But never did I grew doubtful for you for even one second

Then why did you???

I was always there in front of you.

A rockstar…

That was what my first motivation was to be famous.

That n mayank's dream to be one.

Just for you both I did my best in learning guitar ..

I did my best to be as easy to find as possible

N you let so many years pass between us why why?? Chashmish why??

G= I .. I am sorry…. Sorry.

He knew that gunjan was sobbing..

That only broke his heart more.. to even smaller pieces..

What else could he have expected from her??

She had always been like this always.. afraid of those things that were pretty obvious.. nervous for even reciting a poem in front of a class of 15 students..

Always afraid..

N this fear of her had cost them so many years this time..

So many years of separation , pain , estrangement and loneliness…

A sudden anger seethed in samrat..

How could she be soo afraid..

Why was she like this??

She always suffered because of it..

N this time it all became too much to bear for him..

S= why did you?? Why u shouldn't have.. it didn't had to be like this

It didn't why chashmish why???

G= I ..i am sorry.

Samrat felt first of his tears brimming down his eyes.. suddenly he felt too lost for words.. too lost to even show his anger

At the end he could only muster up courage enough to say

S= I lov u , I always did, and will always doo.

Gunjan sniffed and then sighed ..

With what looked like an enormous effort she gave samrat the reply he wanted to hear..

G= me too. Always did. Always will do.

And with that both of them ended the call.

And cried

Samrat while kneeling to the railing , and chashmish while holding to the pillow at the hospital room..

All this while mayank n nupur stood at the balcony window. Watching samrat

And His journey from laughing to breaking into pieces to now crying in this pathetic way .

Mayank saw all that. Shock, pain , anger, confusion , lov everything running and wreaking his veins..

What the hell was happening to his brother..

Who was on the phone.?

Why did she mean so much important to him??

Chashmish?

He had heard her name sumwhere

20 years

What happened twenty years back??

The only thing that he could remember was his parents death..

That occurred twenty years ago..

Was this all sth related to it..

All this was too confusing for him..

But there was just one sentence of samrat that kept on ringing in mayank's ears again n again…

Making it clearly impossible for him to think clearly..

"That was what my first motivation was to be famous.

That n mayank's dream to be one.

Just for you both I did my best in learning guitar .. "

Mayank closed his eyes, a lone tear escaping from them without his permission.. he felt sumone's hand on his shoulder..

They felt warm and comforting .. warm and desirable..

He turned and looked at her, at nupur his best friends.. may be his lov to

The first lov of his life ..

That was never his and never will be..

Nupur too had wet eyes..

Apparently his brother's condition was too heart breaking for her too.

Strange how only in the first meet she had started caring for samrat so much.

Nupur 's stare gave mayank a little bit courage and a little bit hope ..

She egged him on to go to samrat and do whatever he could to make him feel fine.

Mayank nodded and advanced towards his brother.

Who was still sitting on the floor taking support of the railing. His head between his legs.

It was pretty obvious that he was crying silently

Trying his best not to bother his brother and friend with his miserableness.

Mayank approached him consciously..

Seeing samrat like this made him feel completely helpless..

Samrat was that one person in the whole dang world for whum he could do anything..

But today it felt as if he could nothing , as if he was completely useless for his brother

He knelt down , and kept his hand on sam's shoulder..

Samrat looked up , completely shocked too see him there..

He immediately dried his face using the back of his hand.

And looked down..

Clearly afraid that mayank had seen sth he didn't need to.

Mayank tried his best to keep his voice in control as he spoke

M= its ok. U don't need to hide anything anymore. I am there for u

Always….

Samrat looked up at his brother. More stunned then before

But sth he saw in mayank's features made him relax, made him drop his guard

And bare his wounds for his brother to see..

May be it was mayank's sincerity..

Next second samrat was hugging his brother , crying uncontrollably

willing all his pain for the past twenty years to go away…

mayank hugged his brother back. Trying his best to take his pain away..

and muttering its ok its ok again n again

because besides that mayank had no idea what else to do..

and as nupur witnessed all this.. she couldn't control her ears too..

chashmish

she knew who chashmish was..

her sister's birthday party seemed all the more important now

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Posted: 14 years ago
even like button not working ughhh
thanuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu sanu soo much for posting it
vinu ek baar mera net theek hone de i willlll replyy a biggg reply too u
thanku guys for liking me work n being sooo encouraging for this ff
lovvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvv uuuu guysss
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Posted: 14 years ago
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update was superbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb
mindblowing fantastic one
remember one thing alwaysssssssssssssss
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keep rocking n keep writtinf ffs

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Posted: 14 years ago
wowww awesome part
really nice
loved it
continue soon
thx 4 the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice part. too good.loved it.
continue soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow wow sanu awesome part loveeeee da sajan convo so emotional n all n aww dey said I love u to each other wowwww so happy bt den couldn't see Sammy like dis broken n all n awww sayank so awesome der bonding loved every part loved it to core do continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
i really like your part 7,8,9,10,11and 12
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Posted: 14 years ago
mindblasting update........cant wait for the next update..........cont soon

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