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Posted: 15 years ago
update 9>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
sorry guys for being so late.. n a big sorry to my three s's for being away frm them for so many days
this one for u guys
pls do comment /critisize
loads n loads of lov
dolly

Part 9>>

{by narrator, yesterday , at the airport}

Nupur n mayank were currently on floor, mesmerized completely by the sudden fall n well so lost in each other that they didn't even notice when scores of people gathered around them..

A small kid to his father="papa vo bhaiya us didi k upar kyu gir gaye???

Kya unki didi se koi ladai ho ri hai"

The kid's father smiled

"nahi beta .. shayad vo bhaiya ko vo didi bahut achi lagti hai isiliye vo un par ghir gaye"

"oh aap kehte ho na papa k aapko mere best friend rahul ki mummy badi achi lagti hain!! To kya aap bhi un par gir jaoge??"

The father looked at his son ,completely exasperated, while his wife shot glares at him..

"bahut bolne lag gaya hai tu , kisi din mar padwayega chal yahan se.."

Saying so the couple departed from there, on the way the wife contemplated murdering either her husband or her kid's best friend rahul's mummy..

As for the other people gathering around mayank n nupur most of them were giggling ..

Then suddenly one teenage girl recognised mayank..

"OH MY GOD IT'S THE MAYANK SHERGILL"

The volume of her scream could have melted even mount Everest , so obviously it was enough to bring mayank n nupur out from there little cosy eye lock..

Mayank stood up within brink of a second n made nupur stand along with him'

Both of them looked around..

Suddenly the passengers who had gathered around them were running to them..

If they didn't move away fast enough both of them would get seriously mobbed by the fanatic airport crowd..

After all it was the mayank shergill standing amidst them so close to a beautiful lady'.

And seriously speaking mayank didn't have time for all this tonight..

Not only was his brother sitting in a bizarre condition in his car , he also sensed that nupur looked dead tired.

So without even giving it a second thought mayank caught hold of nupur's hand n yanked her back wards to the exist..

Both of them ran at a break neck speed..

Finally they were out ..

Mayank felt highly stupid'.

In his mind he got a mental picture of a newspaper heading..

"'THE FAMOUR ROCKSTAR MAYANK SHERGILL RAN ACROSS AN AIRPORT WITH FAMOUR NOVELIST NUPUR SEHGAL""

That was exactly what he needed ..more stress

Well whatever .the damage was done .

Now he had to get the hell out of here.

They reached his bug panting loudly .

Samrat was shocked to see this obviously n tried getting out to chk on them..

Mayank gestured him to stay inside..

He entered the driver's seat.

While doing that he asked nupur to get inside the bug..

N then the famous shergill's ran from the airport with the sehgal..

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Scene 2{in the car ,flashback}

No one of them spoke anything as mayank raced towards their mansion ,

Then finally mayank n nupur heard samrat shrieking..

"WHAT THE HELL JUST HAPPENED BACK THERE???"

The intensity of samrat's voice made nupur jump n hit her head hard across the bug's ceiling n made mayank almost loose control of his bug..

Bth of them stared towards samrat.

M="why did u shout??"

S=aise hi mood tha.. now answer my question first .why were u too running at the airport as if sumone lit up fire on ur tails??

M= aise hi mood tha..

Samrat glared back at him..

N= we r almost at ur house na mayank??

N hello samrat , it was a pleasure to meet u..

M=really was it a pleasure??? He is being a nut abt this.

S= abt what??

M= abt me n nupur..

S(smiling)= really mayank I thought u said both of u were just friends..

Mayank stomped the breaks in shock'

Samrat grinned at his brother.in the backseat nupur planned to kill the two moronic brothers at the first chance she got..

M== huh?? No no I meant k k k.

S= what did u mean twin?(samrat winked)

N= u knw I can kill bth of u n samrat it was seriously no pleasure meeting u .. happy??

S=(looked behind at nupur n winked )= yup I know how it feels and same here lady..

Mayank started the engine again n drove in the drive in area of their mansion .

Finally they were home . hopefully the bizarre events of the night will make an end with this..

All of them got out of the bug n moved towards the wooden door.

Samrat walked slowly almost limping his way, the grin on his face had gone completely n he looked badly battered like b4..

Nupur noticed this n moved closer to samrat feeling concerned abt him n shooting mayank confused looks..

Mayank just went ahead n opened the door

Actually he tried to open the door

But it was locked..

Great . n mayank thought the bizarre events would end with his arrival at his home.????

S(in a feeble voice)=what happened??

M== its locked apparently masi is nt at home..

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Scene three

{by samrat}

This was so so not it.

Locked door.. what the hell did I do to deserve all this??

I looked up at the sky that was almost changing grey from black

It was almost morning now..

Where was gunjan at this moment??

I closed my eyes.. remembering her wasn't going to help me..

I will enter my home even if it required breaking the damm lock. Will rest n find my love in the morning..

Gunjan said she will remain in contact with me..

Opening my eyes I scaled my cell for any messages from her..

Nope nothing ..

I sighed.. the dizziness was returning . moreover every part of my body was aching

My arms n head were burning under duress from the injuries..

I felt the grey garden in front of me moving '

Was I going to black out??

Infront of mayank's girlfriend???

NOOO.. certainly not..

I did my best to focus my eyes n make the rotating garden in front of me to stop..

It didn't..

The last thing I heard was mayank's n nupur's alike shriek of my name..

"SAMRATTTTTT"

'..

Scene 4

{by nupur}

"SAMRATTTTTT"

Both me n mayank shouted at the same time, as we saw samrat closing his eyes n falling backward.

I caught him from his left shoulder n mayank caught his other..

What was happening to samrat??

He looked dead pale even when he was taunting me n mayank back in the bug..

That's when I looked at it.. at blood ..samrat's blood oozing out of the black band he wore at his forehead..

n="oh my god mayank he is hurt badly"

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Posted: 15 years ago

great update!!but i need lil time to read the rest of the parts to understand the whole story but must say dolly u r a great writter

Edited by -Liana- - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

oh finally u r back

have not seen u from a long time dear
in ur absence many people over here missed u a lot
really u r very popular
ok ziada nae bolon gy because i think u dont know me
dont think free hony ki koshish kar rahy hy
literally i have seen many around asking for u n waiting for u
ok coming towards the update
brilliant dear
just loved it
outstanding
u n sana both r really twin always end ur ff's at a very bad point
so do continue sooooooooon
Edited by chilluppp - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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OMG DOLLY..i just read an overview....u freaking mixed twilight n mjht 😲

omgggg ur freakin awesome..meri dolly meri dolly
love u...will read n n comment..
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Posted: 15 years ago
loved this update
mn airport scene was good!
poor samrat
can't wait for the next part
do continue soon😊
Soulmate_Sana thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
re
dolly will chat with u son
got to go now
bye lov u miss u
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Posted: 15 years ago
great update
awesome n thnx for pm
sushups thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesome girl!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

it was absolutely brilliant

aaj ke update ke mukhya samachar kuch iss tarah hai


---mayank the singer does have another hidden talen.....mayank shergill the new athlete in town😆

--mayank created headlines for the next day😆


--samrat aur nupur ki hui pehli mulakat


---samrat hua behosh😲



ok that was awesome dear
poor sam he is still bleeding

do continue soon

Edited by sushups - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
superb one dolly....👏👏
nice update....
mayur lost in each other....😳😳
n poor sammy....😭
do continue soooooon,,...................
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: chilluppp

oh finally u r back

have not seen u from a long time dear
in ur absence many people over here missed u a lot
really u r very popular
ok ziada nae bolon gy because i think u dont know me
dont think free hony ki koshish kar rahy hy
literally i have seen many around asking for u n waiting for u
ok coming towards the update
brilliant dear
just loved it
outstanding
u n sana both r really twin always end ur ff's at a very bad point
so do continue sooooooooon

hiiii janu
thank u sooooo much for such a nice comment ;oved it
n ya surpeisingly people did miss me
n now that i returned i am hearing so many bad news
but reading reply made me sumwhat ok
thanku dear sooooooooooo much for being soo soo nice lov uu
n ya sanu n me r twinsssss😳
lov u loads

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