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Posted: 15 years ago
awesumm...amazing....rocckkinn.. updt!!!!!!!!!!👏👏
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I read all the six parts today and I must say I'm amazed👏 Your an awesome writer! I really really love this ss, please please please please continue soon............................Thanks for the pm😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey dolly.............. its just superb...........👏👏👏👏👏 thanks for the pm....... and me to your pm list for this ff n post the links of your other mjht ff's.... pm me whenever u update...........
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey dolly
Just caught up wid dis ff..Its Awesome!:D

LoveD the whole plot, characters n tracks...!
Simply AWESOME👏👏👏
but a lil confused abt the 20 years thing...

nyways continue soon...!
It was an amazing read.
U rock hun👍🏼

Lots of Luv
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Posted: 15 years ago
finally part 7
ok guys i seriously have no idea k maine ismein kya likha hai
sach kahun to i just hate this part
it has sheena in it ughhh
and it is way too ektaishhhh
soorry for that guys
but bear it with me this time
agli baar pakka promise k dhng ka update likhungi
do comment and critisize too
here it is

Part7>>>

{finally the accident }

Scene 1>>

{by narrator,flashback, yesterday, swan street}

Samrat tried getting up, but apaarently the spiked up pain in his forehead was too much for him..

What had happened just now??

How had he ended up like this??

Samrat tried opening his eyes

Everything seemed blurred and grey and extremely dark.

Blinking them a few times samrat finally was able to see his surrounding a little bit more carefully.

He tried getting up, gasped and fell down again .

He was injured all right

Mostly his head wound was making him all dizzy etc etc

Trying to balance his weight on his right hand , samrat tried to get up from the road once again .

This time he succeded in at least sitting on the road

.his vintage bug , his car was upturned few feet from him ,issuing sparks from its upturned bonnet.

"great my car ..how could u god .bigada kya hai maine aapka??"

"wait a minute , that girl !!chashmish .kahan hai vo??"

Samrat got up limply from his sitting position , looking around wildly trying to locate the girl he must have just banged with his bug

"CHASHMISH chashmishhh"

Nothing no answer. May be she wasn't here. May be she managed to get out of the way and was currently running away terrified

May be

And may be she was so banged up that she wasn't even in position to hear my calls

Yet alone answering them ..

A sudden fear engulfed him. Not for his image , or the problems he might face due to this accident or the concert that was going to be destroyed for sure now..

He was only worried abt that unknown girl , who might have just faced death just because of him

"CHASHMISH kahan ho tum '. Chashmishhhh"

He shouted rather frantically ..he looked towards his upturned bug again .

Was she under it..the thought was soo tormenting that samrat turned away his face from it immediately..

"sir"

Samrat froze.. that voice.. was that whisper really there or had he just imagined that one???

"sir mein yahan hun , aap theek hain ??"

Samrat turned to the direction from which her voice was coming .

And finally he spotted her lying down , near some bushes few feet further then his bug

"chashmish '"

Saying so he turned and walked towards her actually stumbled towards hr ..

Going there , he saw that even she was trying to get up but was quiet unsuccessful ..he picked her up , bringing her head quiet close to his chest .

Clearly afraid that she might be more hurt than him

"i..i am sorry .i lost control. I never wanted this to happen .i am sorry I never wanted to hurt you"

The girl tried getting up taking support of samrat's arm..

"its ok sir I am fine .. just .. just help me to get up"

"ok"

Samrat supported her back while she got up ,holding samrat's collar.

When both of them were finally standing , samrat looked at her, observing her closely for the first time.

She was beautiful beyond comparison .

An angel down on earth '

Completely lost in her mesmerising beauty , samrat almost forgot that currently his career was at stake. almost.

He needed to go

But how could he go?? His car was completely banged up and the roads were deserted, so there was no hope of getting an auto rickshaw or taxi.

On second thought ,it was good that the roads were so deserted .

If anyone had seen him banging up a girl and hurting her soo much ,

His already shaken career would have completely been ruined.

But more than all of this he was worried about the girl.

If he wouldn't be supporting her weight right now, she would have fell down for sure.

He needed to make sure that she was safe. He needed to take her too hospital

Even if it meant that his career was going to be destroyed.

"sir u shouldn't be here"

"huh??"

"u should be at the concert, believe me u need to go there as soon as possible"

"huh?"

"sir leave me , I am fine ,u just get going"

"what r u talking about??and how can I leave u in this condition??i am responsible for all this and I need to make sure that u r attented too, how can I even think of,,,,"

"think please think, sir its not only your career at stake its mayank sir's too"

"what the hell r u talking about???"

"I am gunjan , gunjan bhushan a reporter, few hours ago I was at the concert hall interveiwng ur contract manager"

"u interviewed dp??"

"yes I did but that's not important , when I was going from there I heard him talking about u!!"

"about me??"

"yes about you .. and believe me the talk was not good"

"again I say what the hell do u mean??"

"the concert manager hates you. Doesn't he??"

"he does , what then?"

"he hates u because his daughter loved you didn't she?"

"aww hell do u know everything??"

"I think I do.. sir can we go some more secure location ??

"huh??"

"agar is halat mein mujhe aapke saath kisine dekh lia to theek nahin hoga.. aapke liye. U don't need any more problems do you??''

"no I don't"

Both samrat and gunjan stumbled towards the sideline and hid behind a tree gunjan pointed towards. Gunjan was really feeling numb with all the injuries

For her it was still a dream mixed with nightmare and blood.. her blood along with his

Today morning he had heard that pathetic conversation between the contract manager and his assistant , from then on she had been truly afraid for samrat.

Luckily god had given her this chance to warn him and may be even save him from the upcoming disaster'

The only bad thing was, that he looked really hurt

His cheeks and neck were smeared with his own blood and the gash looked terrible against his pale skin ..

As she sat there behind that tree with him , she wished with all her might that samrat her lov would be ssafe'

"tell me now what do u know"

"sheena , dp's daughter was after u, she is mad , I know this because I happen to know her from college, even then she was mad , a psychopath"

"she is.. she loved me and is almost crazy,, I dunno how to explain her that I don't I even told her that we could be best friends but she didn't listen and hanged the phone on me"

"she tried commiting sucide"

"WHAT???"

"actually she took few sleeping pills , that might not have killed her, but it was enough to frighten his dad, the dp"

"so now he has decided to destroy u which is what sheeee nah wanted"

"its soo filmy"

"it is and its true"

"chashmish what is dp planning to do??"

"he is planning to ruin todays concert, that is why he changed the location just few hours b4 the concert and didn't even let u know until recently,, after u fail to reach the hall , he'll make sure to tell the reporters how bad profeesional u are and that u through tantrums etc etc"

"kammina kahin ka"

"sir its not gud to use foul language"

Samrat just looked at her incredulously

"ok dp is kamiina"

"where does mayank cum in all this??'

"dp is sure that mayank wont go on stage without u so he is planning to ruin him too"

"oh no.. that son of a '.."

"kamina is ok ..dont go any further in abusive language

Posted: 15 years ago
loved it

kahan se shuru karun kahan khatam??

sorry but busy in studies no ime ti think and comment long...filhaal mujey abhi neend aa rahi thi phir b main ne tumhara ye pyara sa update padha.:)
itneeeeeeeeeeee dino k baad

well done!
nice update
do cont soon
muah!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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edited*********************
👏👏👏👏👏
oye jhappi dena hai tujhe
kya update tha
kuch baatein clear ho gayi
and gunjan already in love with samrat
i guess one more of a fan
dp is really.........................................(fill in the blanks😆)
i just loved it
aur itni jaldi karne ke liye shukriya
love ya
will be waiting for next
but 20 years mystery kab solve hogi??
Edited by sushups - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesooome....
superb........
wonderful.......
rocking upd.
loved it........
thanx for the pm......
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey dolly loved this part seriously and loved sajan's convo do continue soon and thanks for pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
dolly u rock...
loved ur new update..

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