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Posted: 15 years ago
lovely one dear... luved it to da core.. keep rocking.. sorry for da late reply... thnks for da pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey good one dear
full of sayank😍
loved it
continue soon😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
heyyyy dolly
it was nice update but really short one
plzzzzzz continue soon
n thanx for pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
first of all thanku loads n loads n loads guys for ur encouraging replies
m really really sorry that i have not been able to reply to ya alll
sorry about that
will try to d that this time guys..
so here is the next update,, longer then the last one atleast hope ya guys will like it
loads of love dolly
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WHEN THE DORKS MET THERE MORONS'''''''..

Update 5>>

Scene 1>>>>

{FLASHBACK, Yesterday, after concert, sayank are signing autographs back stage , samrat is looking completely drained out which is worrying mayank beyond limits' he wanted to take samrat and get the hell out of there but there fans''''''.}

{BY SAMRAT}

T he little girl looked up at me and held out her autograph book expectantly to me..

She was smiling nervously n was wearing dorky glasses to..

She was fair , very fair ' just like her'

Though I was feeling more n more dizzier by every passing second, yet I bent down , took her autograph book , signed it n gave it back to her smiling..

She looked happy, so much that she moved forward , gave me a quick n warm bear hug n ran from there'

And I blushed despite feeling dizzy..

I got back on my feet then .. they felt like jelly'

Whole of my body was aching terribly 'the bruises on my arms throbbed like anything'n yet I kept smiling at the fans standing in front of us babbling excitedly'

There were about 30 of them backstage' they had won some kind of competition to meet me n mayank backstage,,,

N I didn't want to spoil there day due to my woozy n crappy state'

Yet still I knew if I kept on standing there even for a few more minutes I was surely going to black out over my fans'

{BY MAYANK}

I signed the fourth autograph book n gave it back to the girl who blushed real hard taking her notebook back from me.. awwww she looked cute..

All of them looked so happy to see us..

Who could imagine that two morons like us could be loved so whole heartedly by so many people????

I would have enjoyed this little rendezvous with these people , had it not been for samrat..

I knew something was wrong with him..

U could call it twin telepathy..

He was smiling at everyone, winking at the girls, hugging the children..

Perfectly Normal u'll say'

And yet I'll say samrat wasn't his usual self.. his face was devoid of all colour n I was sure that twin was even facing problem in standing straight..

Moreover it looked that he was going to pass out any second..

N well this scared me like hell..

I needed to get him out of there..

{BY SAMRAT}

I really needed to get out of here,, I knew my condition was worsening,,

Even the voices around me had stopped making any sense any more..

N I had to really strain my ears to know what the girl standing just next to me was saying'..

An odd ringing had already started playing in my ears.i was loosing it for sure..

Just then I felt my jacket vibrating .. it must be mayank's mobile..

After the concert mayank had changed his clothes.. he had removed his white sleeveless, zipper hoodie n black cargos n replaced them with a blue denim jeans n a white kurta over it..

Talk off complete makeover????

I hadn't changed my clothes .. because firstly I hardly had any energy to do that n secondly because removing the full sleeved jacket n band now n exposing my throbbing wounds to my fans wasn't that great an idea..

Well anyway , the point was since twin's kurta hardly had any pocket in it n he hated keeping his mobile in his jeans , so obviously his cell was currently in my jacket's pocket..

As I felt the vibrations of mayank's cell ringing I sighed in relief ..

Finally I had an excuse to get the hell out of there'

I sneakily put my hand in my pocket while getting my photograph clicked with one of the fans'

Removed the silent tab on it,'

Within seconds the smack that ringtone on mayank's cell was clearly audible'

I excused my self from my fans for a few minutes for attending the call n nearly stumbled towards a wash room'.

{BY MAYANK}

I saw samrat moving out of the room .towards the washroom'.. I really hoped he would be fine'.

No he wasn't fine.. n I was getting panicky over this.. I needed to talk to him n ask him what happened .. I needed to be with him ,, with my brother..

N yet I was stuck up here between so many people n samrat had gotten himself stuck in the bathroom///

{BY SAMRAT}

When the cell had ringed I had picked it up n said hello in it , then had excused my self n rushed towards the washroom in the other room , on the pretext of answering the call..

But now as I entered the washroom , I slid the mobile back in my pocket without even caring foe a single second about the important caller..

I slumped over the sink n puked my guts out'

Great now I was sick on top of everything'

Another conclusion'. Being terribly exhausted just after n accident crappyfies u even more..

This day was teaching me so much'

I retched in the sink again , but nothing came out this time'

Feeling light headed from all the puking, I rinsed my mouth n face thoroughly.. then using the towel I wiped of my face n stood there for a few seconds to gather my self'

"dude.. just few minutes more n then u'll be gone home.."

I felt a tiny bit better then before n was just about to step out of the washroom when mayank's cell started ringing again..

I supported my back on the bathroom wall n took out the cell to attend the call..

Without even looking at the caller's name I picked up the cell n said

"hello"

"mayank yeh kya baat hui??? Phone uthak tum ne mera phone kyun kaat diya???.. ok pls tumse baad mein ladungi pehle I really really need ur help .. its about my sister.. n by god u r goig to help me otherwise I'll kill u ' n haan how was ur concert????"

{BY MAYANK}

I looked back towards the bathroom once again .. samrat was still in.. I was getting really tenced now .. the day had been too exhaustive for both of us , more for him then for me ..

Someone tugged down the hemm of my kurta n I looked down distracted..

It was avery small boy .. about 5-6 years may be..

He was smiling at me n holding a pen n a notebook in his small smaal hands..

I was overwhelmed..

I picked up the boy n kissed him'he blushed..

Awww the cutie pie'

"so rockstar what's ur name???"

"ra' raj"

He answered me with his dimpled smile..

I smiled some more'

Raj???? It suddenly reminded me of nupur,,,

N though I was thick with tension about my broher ,, even a small rememberance of her made me feel ok''

Strange how we both had bonded in the past few months'.

"hmm raj.. yaani aap ho ddlj k sharukh khan???"

The boy looked at me completely confused,, n I laughed at my self..

Stupid me how the little boy would know what is ddlj????

It was only nupur who thought that everyone on this damm earth should know about ddlj'''

{BY SAMRAT}

S="hey wait' who is this???"

N="hmm nupur aap kaun??"

S="nupur??? Nupur kaun??"

N=(sounding pissed off).."pehle m aine poocha aap kaun ho.. aur mayank k mobile k saath kya kar rahe haion.. dekhiye yeh ,mayank ka mobile hai ,, n he is my friend .. so mein aap ko kyun bataun k nupur kaun??? Hote kaun hain aap.. n hoe dare u touched mayank's mobile???"

S="mein ' mein uska bhai miss mayank ki friend' ab aap mujhe batayengi k aap kaun hain??"

N=="oh shit.. is this samrat???"

S="yes aap kaun ??aut kaise jaanti hain mayank ko???"

But the line went off then'

She hanged out on me???

This was a real mystery ,, mayank k liye ek ladki ka phone'

Ok the day just kept on getting better n better ,, n the way that nupur who so ever she was , was getting possessive about mayank's mobile'.

Grrrrrhhh

Mayank to gaya.. uski life mein ek ladki hai n usne mujhe bataya bhi nahi?????

Mayank u r so so so gone

N with that happy thought 'I finally came out of the washroom n came back between the cluster of fans ,,,

Mayank looked at me..

He looked worried'clearly he must have sensed that I was not doing well'

I glared back at him

grrrrrrrrrrrrhhhhh

Edited by dolly18 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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'EDITED'
Yieppiee 1st 2 comment,. 😃
Update vz nyc...it vz amazing how u described samrat feelings n mayank concern 4 samrat....mayank n lil raj convo vz shweet... 😛
SaNu convo vz cute n funny.....mayank ko ek ladki ka phone..?
Bechara mayank abto too gaya.... 😆

Kulsum
Edited by kulsumd - 15 years ago
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awesomeeeee updt jaana..
mindblowing..
luved it..
do cont soon..
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Originally posted by: sajanroxx20

awesomeeeee updt jaana..
mindblowing..
luved it..
do cont soon..

awwwwwwwwwwwwwww jyoti thanku sooo much jaana
mm glad u liked it will try too update soon
lov
dolly
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome update....lovd sanu convo yaar...n yea tht mayank n li'l boy Raj's convo too..
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Posted: 15 years ago
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roka kyun ????????😭😭😭😭
itnaaaaaaaaaa aacha tha aur tune brake laga diya
not fair
koi baat nahi
jaldi ud karna
bichare mayank ki toh waat lage gi ab 😆😆

Edited by sushups - 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: nikki028

awesome update....lovd sanu convo yaar...n yea tht mayank n li'l boy Raj's convo too..

thanks dii
missing u terribly
did u chk out mohobbatein update???????
lov u loads

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